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The Set Up (5)
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Tina pulled her SUV up to Bette’s house, biting her lip with the anxiety she felt. She desperately wanted to be perfect for the brunette, even knowing how silly that was.
No one’s perfect. Don’t be ridiculous. What’s that horribly cliché saying? … Just be yourself. “Whoo …” Just be yourself.
With dark jeans on and a black, long-sleeved shirt, Tina felt warm even in the chilly evening air. She nervously made her way up to Bette’s door, and rang for her. And as she was waiting for the woman she was convinced was far superior, she tugged at the bottom of the tight-fitting shirt.
The door opened unexpectedly, but Tina just looked up into Bette’s eyes – their connection immediate. She couldn’t help but smile, even amidst her nerves. “Hi.”
“Wow,” Bette smiled back, beaming at the look of the blond. “Your hair … it’s curly.” She pointed to the waves that flipped and held their bouncy shape. “Wow, you look … great.”
Tina thought she was a joke standing next to Bette – the thinner heartthrob dressed in business attire. A pencil skirt and blouse. “You … you look really beautiful.”
Bette cleared her throat and picked up her purse to lock the door behind her to get a start on their date while the night was still young. She looked up at Tina again as they walked back to her SUV.
“You said you were gonna pick the place?”
Bette nodded, “I already have picked the place.”
“Oh no,” Tina chuckled, walking with Bette to her side of the vehicle. “Am I completely under-dressed?”
In amusement, Bette watched Tina open the door for her. “That’s awfully courteous of you.” She ducked inside and straightened out her skirt so Tina could close the door for her.
“What – people don’t do that anymore?” Tina chuckled as she got in on her side, turning on the car and adjusting the heat. “I can’t have been out of the game for that long.”
Bette laughed as they started on their way, just watching her date beautiful, surprising date. “You know … you’re the classiest woman I’ve ever met.”
Tina glanced over at her, worried for a moment.
“And it’s a turn on,” Bette assured, trying to distract herself from the way Tina looked when she drove. The relaxed posture, the hand in her lap. “I would … love to treat you just like this myself. And I hope I’ve been just as lady-like.”
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Love the story. Bette’s so patient.
Thanks for sharing another great chapter! Hopefully we´ll have another soon, right? :)
I really love this story, your writing style is awesome! PPS !!
Loving this story soooooooo much. Thanks
Love how you’re running w/this story…it’s a whirlwind romance…sweeping us off our feet. I hope the posting are as often as possible. It keeps you on the edge of your seat!
yes, agree that bette is so patient. i can’t help but worry though cos this seems like just the start and i heard that bette was a player. i would find it hard to believe that bette would find an instant family very appealing too if i were tina. but i hope she does! this story is wonderful
I think I’m jaded by the “first last forever” thing. I love them together but I can’t help but wonder since Tina is a lesbian virgin that maybe she should date around instead of investing her feelings on the first time. The thought occurred to me after reading about Bette’s feelings on her past conquests. Thank goodness she doesn’t bring it up with Tina. I think it’s a tacky approach when you being up the number of sexual partners you’ve had with the person you’re currently dating. It’s just sounds like you’re showing off when in all actuality you’re walking petri dish LOL. Thank you GR for the awesome update 😘
Well, I guess I want to take this to a deeper level… What say we take this to a spiritual place where we maybe have agreements with other souls to have a story together for a lifetime or more. What say that all the parters that a person experiences are all a part of their learning what relationships are all about. Who’s to say that when the right person comes along and the person connects with them on a much deeper spiritual level that it might seriously be the one that’s been waited for throughout all the other relationships? So Tina hasn’t had many experiences on a sexual level. So, Bette’s had quite a number of them. When its the right person, its the right person. If Bette has all that Tina is looking for in a relationship, why not pursue it. Why does she have to look around at others and experiment? I like that she and Bette connect on so many deep levels. Life is such an amazing journey and to be awake and enjoy the ride is the best thrill. Thanks again for the story.
Scorching!!
I haven’t had a chance to comment until now but I have to say, I’m completely in love with this story. I get all giddy whenever I see an update lol this chapter was no exception, it made me smile too !
That was awesome and sweet, love it. Please post more, thanks!
wwowow that was hoootttt thank you it was amazing mooorrreeee please !!!
Amen bumsue
2 amazing updates. thank you for this story. love it.
Perfect chapter,I love the pace of the story.PPS
WOW!!! Love it!!! Thank you PPS
Wow.. can’t find words.. Just love it. All of your chapters. Bette is so patient and Tina so sensitive. They are absolutely adorable together.And I hate handys :)You teasing us, too huh? ;)