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The Settlement – Chapter 14
With my index finger, I traced her eyebrows then the line of her nose. Soon my palm secured its original position, caressing her cheek. Looking down, gazing upon my new love’s eyes, I reconfirmed what my body and heart already knew.
Slowly, I reiterated. “I think I love you.” Our eyes never broke contact. Each word rolled off my tongue with care as I continued, “More than that, I know I do.”
In no uncertain terms, I said it again emphatically…solemnly. “I love you Bette.”
The smolder in her eyes glistened reveringly with my avowal. Reaching up to retrieve my hand on her cheek she slid it over her heart. Reciprocating the adoration in her unique way saying succinctly, “I’m yours.”
All her actions to that point conveyed my love was reciprocated. Her complete surrender to me with those two words was all I needed to hear.
This strong woman lay vulnerable by choice, willing to be claimed as my own.
With that, I proceeded to make love to her. Mimicking what she’d shared with me earlier bringing me to ecstasy’s peak. Altering movements, guided with her body’s reactions to my ministrations.
When I entered her the pleasured call, a breathless and throaty ‘Oh God…Tina… Tina’ was profoundly gratifying.
Her gasps culminated in a recurring declaration of her love. Beautifully, her face contorted as she approached climax. Calling out for me as she came, the utterance of my name was engulfed as she panted her release.
In her excited state, she repeatedly called out a name of endearment that would become a reminder of this night of coupling.
Simply, ‘T.’
Our night of discovery lasted until the sunrise greeted us. Neither of us wanted to miss a moment in the other’s embrace. It was barely approaching dawn when she encroached upon the contented silence between us, a quiet only lovers shared.
“T, what do you usually have for breakfast?”
The reference to the affectionate nickname elicited the upward curl of my lips. Also, my brows rose slightly at the oddity of the question and responded, “Don’t you think it’s a little early for breakfast?”
“Yes it is.” Bette chuckled, gracing me with a sheepish grin in return. Then she continued, “I just want to know…so I can stock up.”
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(16 votes, average: 4.56 out of 5)
“For indulging my delusion of creativity, thanks.” Indulging??? Delusion??? I don’t think so my friend. YOU can write, there’s no doubt about that. All I’m wondering is how I didn’t find this fic sooner! Don’t even think about stopping, I’m hooked.
Please continue with your story. I really missed seeing your updates. I would hate to see it end anytime soon. It’s written with so much sensitivity and care. Your words make it seem like the reader is right there with them feeling everything their feeling. Your friend is in my thoughts. Faith can move mountains.
I love your writing style. Please lworddid, drop the “?” behind the “TBC”.
I love your story, you have such a way with words, please continue!!!
lwordid dont even think about ending this story… u got me hooked from the start so now u got to finish … great chapter …
Just so you know You are on my favorites list! Continue on Please!!!
I became hooked at chapter one; but this statement from Tina, “This isn’t my side of the bed” sealed it for me.
Please post again soon. I cant express how much I am enjoying the words that flow from you.
Please continue with this story ~ I truly enjoy it.
I have a hard time sleeping if I’m not on ‘my side of the bed’. If it was only that simple for Tina ~ the fact that she still thinks so vividly of her encounters with Bette, she’s just not over her. At least, I hope she is not.
Great story and please do continue.
Your time in writing and sharing is appreciated.
I agree totally with Temp…love your writing style, and truly…drop the ? behind TBC. Thanks!
Ain’t nothin’ like the real thing, baby
Ain’t nothin’ like the real thing.(Write for me)
Ain’t nothin’ like the real thing, baby
Your writing’s like the real thing.
That last line was a killer!!!!
Of course you should continue. To put a question mark at the end of TBC is well…simply not necessary.
Your writing is neither prosaic nor pedestrian. There is an ease with which you capture a moment or feeling that brings everything into focus without over compensating in general composition. You go between present and past as easily as going through a revolving door. Nicely done.
I read all of your chapters and you must continue with this story. Your words and how you bring them together are beautiful.Please post soon