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The Special Two
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Dinner came exceptionally quickly…, the chatty flight attendant kept her word and we were eating about an hour before the rest of the first class passengers. I guess having her interested in my companion does have its advantages, she even provided a couple of those little wine bottles with our meal.
Just as I imagined, the beautiful woman beside me was nothing short of courteous all throughout dinner. She made me feel like we were the only two people on the plane. The food couldn’t exactly be compared to a five start restaurant but a Kraft dinner would have been just as an incredible dining experience because of who I was sharing it with.
Everything was perfect except when we tried to have a nice conversation. I think the stewardess was doing it on purpose. Every time it was my turn to say something, she would find some silly reason to come and interrupt us.
It was actually starting to bother me.
We decided to keep our chat to a minimum…, hoping that once dinner was over, the nosey attendant wouldn’t come to us every five minutes.
I could tell my new friend was getting annoyed as well. She kept looking at me trying to apologize for the rudeness of the other woman. I thought it was nice of her but she didn’t have to, it was not her fault. I was so distracted by the situation that I wasn’t really thinking about what I was doing.
Out of nowhere, I reached out to touch her hand…, it was my way of letting her know it was okay and that she shouldn’t worry.
That’s when it happened…
A current of electricity ran through my body the moment I laid my hand on hers…, we both froze at the touch…, we both stared at one another, looking into each other’s eyes…, we both sat there, unable to breath…
For the first time I welcomed an interruption…, the attendant woman came to collect our dishes. I quickly removed my hand and in that instant, I felt a hollow in my chest…
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She’s been sleeping for a while now. I haven’t been able to do that myself. My mind has been running wild since the incident. I was so disappointed at the sudden loss of contact, but the expression on her face told me she had felt something too.
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Another great chapter mate! Loving where this is going and the amazing build up you have with B&T, I’d like to tell the nosey steward to f’off, so I’m glad she’s not in this one! Looking forward to them spending some quality time together in London to see whay they get up to! Happy New Year Mate & everyone on the site, hope its a great one for you all. xx
Hello Black… wooooo hoooo what a way to reign in the new year then another amazing chapter of this amazing story… wooooo hooooo… “but a Kraft dinner would have been just as an incredible dining experience because of who I was sharing it with.” I laughed out loud at this part so freaking funny… LOL… come on you have to keep on writing even if its just for me alone I am sure I can make some kind of deal… I’m not sure what yet but something LMAO… but yeah you are soooooo good… again it was lyrical… you have such a grace with your dialog it really feels like I am sitting there behind them witnessing an intimate moment… you are completely amazing… SURPRISE… for me… yay… mucho love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and ever loving Cuzzie to the ever talented Eunichick)
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh Jo you beat me… :P nah nah nah OK fine I’ll live with that cause you are the ‘editor an chief’ right… LOL… huggles… oh yeah… HAPPY NEW YEARS… WOOOOO HOOOOO… party time… JC
Okay a mild cliff hanger to start the New year. Dont let these other ladies teach you bad habits. Love the banter between them. the the F/A is a pain in the butt. How long will it take for Bette to tell her to get lost?. Is Bette into art? thanks ahain Happy New Year and hope this ride we are on with you is long and fruitful thanks
another wonderful chapter! great build up and i can’t wait to see how this one plays out. i hope the story doesn’t end in heartbreak. Happy New Year!
Peaks in to see if there is anything new… boooo hoooo LOL… see what you’ve done I’m an addict… an addict I tell you needs me fix… ahhhhhhhhh… look at all the purty colors… hmmmm… la la la… that song you sing is so beautiful Black… keep it up… mwah… JC
great chapter…that annoying flight attendant should be reassigned to coach…Happy New Year!!!
I just found out the advantage of reading a chapter late… Getting a new update as soon as the next day! ;) Great chapter again. The chemistry is obvious and makes you yearn for more of this wonderful story. I wonder where you’re taking us with it, and I confess that the first chapter got me worried about the outcome of their story, but you know what?… I blindly trust you and your Tibette heart. Happy New Year, my friend, and PPS! Yours truly, K ;)
Well now, the mystery ID of the narrator has been revealed! You’ve written it so well it could have gone either way and been a smooth transition of revelation… this is such a good story! Happy New Year to you and yours! PPS! SK/C
Great chapter, just caught up again and loving how you are writing them. Couldn’t at first decide who was narrating but you revealed all. It could’ve been either of them from reading earlier. Great reveal. And the nosy steward, my goodness, glad she left them alone awhile. Maybe when they are in London they can have some time to talk and see each other since they are both feeling “it.” Great job.
Are you saying there is something wrong with Kraft dinners my friend?! LOL! Tell that to the Bare Naked Ladies! I love ’em, just don’t eat them that often anymore! Anyway, I digress, this is an excellent chapter and I can’t wait to see how they continue this when they actually land and have some privacy! That’s a hint at an NC BTW! LOL!
Glad to see you continuing with this story, looking forward to the continuing development of their “relationship”…just what kind of trouble can they find together when they land?? Hmmmmm…curious!!
That was great and love it. Please post more, thanks!