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    The Tester

    Of course, she did want Shane to tear off her clothes – using her hands, or teeth, or whatever she wanted – but at the same time she didn’t want to use the end of her relationship with Mel as an excuse or a justification. She didn’t feel the need to.

    She was near Shane, now, and Melissa’s furious words were buried somewhere, far away, and they didn’t matter anymore. Carmen concentrated on the warm feeling of Shane’s head under her fingers, on the softness of her hair, on the way Shane’s face was relaxing under her touch.

    Shane inhaled a deep breath through her nose and held it. She looked up at the foggy sky, where the rain was becoming heavier and thicker. Then she stopped the car and turned to Carmen.

    Automatically, Carmen’s hand went on her cheek, and stayed there, gently stroking her skin.

    “We need to stop for a while”, Shane murmured, huskily.

    They were staring at each other, again, and it was inevitable at that point.

    Carmen swallowed.

    “Yeah…”, she nodded, under her breath.

    “I can’t see anything…”, Shane added.

    Carmen nodded again, mesmerized by her eyes.

    “We’re out of town and the road is blurry”, Shane muttered.

    “You’re right…”, she replied quietly.

    “Even the ocean is dark and stormy…”.

    “I noticed that…”.

    Shane sighed, without breaking eye contact.

    “We can just stay here for a while, you know…”, she whispered.

    “Yeah… We can just stay here… And listen to some radio station…”, Carmen agreed.

    “…Or we could talk…", Shane proposed.

    “…We aren’t doing anything, are we?”, Carmen asked, and her voice sounded a bit higher than usual.

    Shane shook her head slowly.

    “Absolutely nothing…”, she agreed huskily.

    Then, they moved at the same time and crashed into each other’s arms.

    ”You make me feel like a candy apple all red and horny
    You make me feel like I want to be dumb blonde
    In a centerfold, the girl next door…”

    And finally it was happening.

    Finally Carmen felt Shane’s lips on hers, and it was the most passionate and hungry kiss she had ever received in her whole life. She opened her mouth immediately, craving to feel Shane’s tongue and, when it happened, her whole body trembled. Shane angled her head and the kiss deepened even more, if ever possible, and Carmen knew that they were way beyond the point of non return.

    Comments

    1. wow wow wow so intense that jst made me hott…it was like i was there in that car.freaky i no but still it felt that way…cant wait 4 more…the told each ova they love each ova it was so magical

    2. Wow, Veba!!! That was GREAT!!!! They just couldn’t resist each other any longer. I hope that Shane tells Carmen the truth about her deal with Melissa immediately and not create any “Irene-type” drama. The truth will eventually come to light… so the sooner the better…get it outta the way. Love their interaction. Thanks for writing. PPS.

    3. God.This story is just i don’t know is really great , awesome and interesting.I waited so much for this to happen.GREAT JOB!I’m wondering what is going to happen with “the job” that Shane had to do, is she going to tell Carmen about it or will let the things go by themselves? I’ll stay tuned. Cheers.

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