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    The Ultrasounds of Lovers – Bette Porter Tina Kennard L Word

    Story written on March 21, 2014 by Blackbird.
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    The Ultrasounds of Lovers – As I drive Tina to her ultrasound appointment where I will see images of our baby for the first time I find myself smiling as we cruise along Olympic. A friend of mine once asked Joan Rivers, “How do I succeed in Hollywood, Miss Rivers?” and Joan’s quip was, “Take

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    The Ultrasounds of Lovers –

    As I drive Tina to her ultrasound appointment where I will see images of our baby for the first time I find myself smiling as we cruise along Olympic. A friend of mine once asked Joan Rivers, “How do I succeed in Hollywood, Miss Rivers?” and Joan’s quip was, “Take Olympic.” For me, this moment is as monumental as the storied peak.

    Tina must have noticed my good mood because as we cruise along through the traffic she touches my shoulder and says, “I’m glad you could come today, Bette. You should be a part of this baby’s life and I want you to be.”

    The relief I feel in hearing her words I can’t describe. I beam a thousand watts at her. She doesn’t look away. Holding her hand just for a moment I feel the weight of grief and uncertainty heavier than any stone fall from around my neck. “Shall we go in?” I ask her as we release our hands and open our car doors.

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    As Tina and I walk into the medical center I am so fucking unbelievably flabbergasted that Helena Peabody would actually stalk us to Tina’s ultrasound appointment that I can’t keep silent one more second. As we ride the elevator to Tina’s obstetrician’s office I say, “Look, I don’t want any details. No sex details at all. But honestly,” I begin my list, ”Tina, what in God’s name do you see in that woman? She’s arrogant, possessive, she’s bossy and presumptuous. It’s unbelievable to me.”

    I pause for a second. “She’s incredibly, deeply flawed. She’s fucking pathological, Tina!” I shake my head. “You can do so much better than, Helena Peabody.” I wrap up in a sigh of sadness for her bad judgment and misfortune.

    “Did you just hear your description of her, Bette?”

    “What kind of question is that? I asked it. Of course I heard it.” I’m confused.

    “It’s just that some people might describe you in those exact words, too.” She shoots me a sideways look of disbelief as we exit the elevator doors. I don’t like her tone or the sound of any of that.

    Tina lies on the short examine table that probably has not changed its stirrup, heel cuff appearance since doctor’s quit using leeches to cure people. The lulling sounds of classical music over the satellite radio and Tina lying quietly waiting brings me a sense of calm. I sit by her on a low stool.

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    4. Bette is a complicated and interesting character. You really “get” her and her contradictory personality. I thoroughly enjoy the way you write her. She hates to be out of control yet to really love the “new” Tina and for Tina to want to be w/her on a permanent basis, she has to give control to Tina. You ably express the roller coaster ride Bette is on as she rediscovers the new and improved version of her Tina. Brava!

    14. I love this 2.0 version. Unstoppable desire is a hell of a thing to watch unfold. You have found a way to let Bette’s inner turmoil rise to the surface. My seatbelt is fastened as you take us on the ride for the push/pull dynamic between Bette and Tina.

    15. Finally I’m getting to your series!

      This was my favorite love scene between Bette and Tina in the series, and you have done a nice job bringing it back and having us see it from Bette’s POV. I’m looking forward to reading the rest of the series, even if it takes me a while.

      Thanks!

    16. I’m on a re-read! This scene was ‘the best’ in the Show, well before S5! Your writing of Bette is wonderful. I love her and you add to my love. Thank you.

    17. This is the first FF that I have read that is narrated and I was blown away by the breadth and depth of the conversations.

      “ My mind is nearly a wreck. I feel the hum between us and inhale the hazy smells of our sex lingering. I roll onto my back and look at the ceiling. I rub my face and leave her smell all over me.”

      That is an OMG piece of full blown, full on immersive reading and I now need to re-group and take myself in hand

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