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The very first time – chapter 13
«Hold on baby, hold on, help’s on his way… I love you baby, I love you so much…», she whispered softly in Tina’s ear.
Officer Mason took Sara outside, to the police car. Bette heard voices and knew the ambulance had arrived. The EMTs rushed inside and knelt beside Tina. «OK, we got it ma’am», the woman said to Bette as she gently took the towel off her hand. The EMTs worked on Tina, giving her oxygen and keeping constant pressure on the wound. They put her on a stretcher and wheeled her to the back of the ambulance.
Bette got in and the doors were quickly closed behind her. She sat next to Tina and held her hand. «Is she going to be OK?», she asked, but fearing to hear the answer. «Judging by the blood behind her back, I would say that’s where the bullet exited. It looks more like a flesh wound, but they can be dangerous and very painful», the woman explained.
«Can’t he drive any faster?», Bette said, glancing at the driver.
«He’s going as fast as he can…»
Bette kept stroking Tina’s hand, hoping her baby would open her eyes. «Wait until you’re better, I will kick your ass for doing a stupid thing like this…», Bette thought to herself. She should have been the one lying on a stretcher, being rushed to the hospital. Sara wanted her dead, not Tina.
They finally reached the ER and Tina was taken to one of the trauma room. Bette wanted to follow her, but an orderly stopped her. «You need to have a doctor examine you», he said, glancing at the blood covering her shirt and face. «It’s not mine, I’m not hurt…». She tried to get pass him, but he was stronger. «Come with me…», he told Bette. She followed him to the next room and she could see Tina through glass doors.
A doctor came in and gave Bette a very thorough examination. «Is she OK ?», she kept asking him. He looked up. «I don’t know, but I promise I will find out as soon as I finish my exam». Bette saw that Tina was given blood and a nurse was cleaning her wound. Suddenly, she noticed Tina stir. She got up, pushed the doctor and rushed to the room next door.
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(39 votes, average: 3.87 out of 5)
No cliff hanger, That I like. Tina really showed her love for Tina. Did anyone tell the police where Clairie is. Never thought that is would who is was. thanks
Yeah tina is okay, sara was a nutso case!! :) great update!:)
Glad Tina was OK, yea did anyone go and resxue Claire.
Thank-god Tina was okay… I was happy Tina saved Bette. Good job
Yah..both of them are safe at last and all have forgotten about Claire.LOL (am I the only one who think it’s funny!??)LOL
hey milady. long time reader and i’m trying to remember to pop in to let writers know that i’m enjoying their stories! i’ve enjoyed your stories… keep going! pps
Great job. Now, will someone go and untie Claire and take her to the hospital to be checked out. Glad both our girls are OK. Poor Sara was a serious nutjob. Lock her up and throw away the key. Keep writing for us, enjoy you writing very much. PPS
Yeh!! Tina’s ok. Thank God!
Thanks for this chapter, and thank God she wasn’t hurt badly, their love for each other will grow after this unfortunate incident. Post soon dear
Wow, Tina is so brave to jump in front of the bullet. She is lucky that Sara did not shoot her in the chest and kill her instantly.
i’m glad tina is ok… but like the others said… i hope someone checked on clair… PPS
Much better, you are forgiven
nice one…don’t stop…
Phew! That was close. The timing and suspense you described was just perfect. Thanks for this fantastisc update. PPS – Lucero & Marsha – From Mexico City
I am glad that Tina is alright and that they got to go home to just hold one another tight. After all this excitement I can’t wait to see what happens next.
Thanks god Tina is ok now, no body imagine sara is the one behind this, and glad she in jail now!