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Helena coughed. The bullet passed through her, it was the end. She wasn’t going to make it, she knew it. Right beside her was her phone and a message beamed. ‘SENT- Bette Porter.’ The phone explodes.
Back at Kit’s…
“So do you have a girlfriend?”
“Who me?” Bette pointed to herself dumbfounded.
“Yes you.” The brunette laughed.
“No. I mean, I did a while back at Stanford.”
“Oh, that was a while back.” The brunette tilted her head confused.
“Her name was Kelly Freemont.” Bette felt nostalgic and giggled.
“ I remember she dropped her pencil in economic class, I went to pick it up for her, we knocked heads. I remember the first time she—“
“So how do you think baby girl is doing?” Kit asked Ryan who stood right next to her. They stood right behind Bette watching. Ryan who was a head taller than could see over Bette’s shoulders and what he saw was Bette standing in front of the fountain where he left her just a few minutes ago. Bette appeared to be in deep conversation, however with no one for an audience. Ryan put his arm around his fiancé’s waist.
“Not awesome.”
“I’m sorry Bette. I just wanted your birthday to be different this year.” Bette had complained to Kit after the party that she didn’t need a birthday party nor was she interested in seeing anyone at the time.
“It’s just.” Bette looked down at her hands and right back to her sister as she sat beside her on the edge of the water fountain.
“Is it really that bad to mention the ex?” Bette didn’t understand why at the mention of her ex had made women run.
Kit rubbed her back sympathetically.
“Even if we ask, Baby girl, no woman wants to hear about an ex girlfriend. Bette, you need to get past that Kelly Freemont. You really do. It’s time to move on.”
“Kit. Just stop it, please. I don’t want to hear it.” Bette rose to her feet. This was clearly a delicate subject.
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Interesting start, thanks for sharing. I enjoy your writing.
First off I LOVE YOUR WRITING!Second this story kind of reminds me of A Long Kiss Goodnight. Any who PPS!!!
Lol…cup of tea, Professor, polar bear, Tootsie Pop…lol you forgot a Bentley. Great start.
I want to know why Helena sent it all to Bette… interesting. Cheers :)
Is this a take on the tv show Chuck? My interest is piqued.
Ok so this is some cool cia story I’m loving it, Bette is dorky and Helena is Idk ????? Wonder how Tina is going to come in…..maybe as her protection….love it please continue
I love your writing.Great start.PPS
Well you haven’t missed much out of this.Intrigued to say the least cuppaT Polar Bear,Professor,Old couples at the beach Splash plus a tootsie pop and Big Charlotte.Looking forward to next one with a sense of humour.Sprised there was room for Bette.Where is Tina i ask myself
Interesting start and can’t wait t see Tina in this story. Thanks
hey like it a lot!…but sound like Chuck the series?…
Skycaptain and I had the same thought lol, the first thing that came to mind was the TV show Chuck which I loved by the way and I was double excited to keep reading. I know this is going to be a good one, I can’t wait for the next chapter
I know this will be a great story because you are writing it. Can’t wait to see what happens.