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This Kiss.
Story written on January 28, 2008 by NYGayLady.
Fuck.
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Classic…I think that was all you had to say!! THANKS!
HAHA, very funny! do we get a sequel? LOL
XDtina’s thoughts?
OMFG… LOL! nice… very nice~~~
Shortest story with the most comments!! LMAO – Good one kettle!
That was the shortest right on story I ever read. You can just hear Bette saying it. Actually I think it was the reaction we all had to the scene, beside its about damn time.
LMFAO!!! Ok, now that you’ve got this under your belt, it’s time to stay in the spotlight and bring us another story!!! LOL
LOL COOL
Oh god thats funny!Think i’ll go check the clip again…..
beachlife the sequel is….”Fuck! Fuck! Fuck!”….Good one NY….Excellent as a matter of fact.
Hysterical! You definitely captured the moment! Who would have thought one word could sum it up so nicely!
NY, prolly took you WEEKS slaving over this fic!!LOL. Look at all the hits and comments you have!
damn this is HOT… LMAO…
Surely, this must get the award for the best short story with the most comments. ROTFLMAO!!!!! When I saw your name I was so excited could hardly wait to read the story. Surprise, surprise. Please continue. Have missed your writing. PPS
You are just toooo funny. Fuck that was cool.
DAMNNNNNNNNNN NY u had me mouth about to water and then FUCK OMG someone call the paramedics, i just had a heart attack..lmao
HAHAHA you got me, that was funny, and yeah Fuck that was a word for that kiss!
Oh my god. You just made my day :)
HAHAHHAA hilarious!
that was hot now wasn’t it?
Just COULDN’T resist… xP
That stupid ad was placed so high up I thought, “What the hell…oh wait there’s a word…HAHAHAHAHA sweet!” XD
I considered putting Tina’s thoughts as a story but decided that would copying and nowhere near as funny.
very nice!!!!!!please continue!!!!
LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!
LOL!!! Does that mean you are back???? Is this what it took? All the more reason to vote for at least one kissing scene per Ep. now- Cause, there’s this wonderful wonderful story out there ‘the nearness of you’ I believe…..LOL!
ha ha. that was mean miss NY LMAO!
umm….. ah…. well said :) lol
Now that was really touching. Please continue, I want to know Tina’s thoughts too. ROTFLMAO!!!
you’re wierder than i am…this makes me happy. great story, absolutely riveting. ten thumbs up!
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! My thoughts exactly! ROTFLMABO!
i just watched the kiss for the 7th time in 30 minutes..i come here..i see your title… i clicked… now… i’m laughing so hard i’m tearing up again! Must be the best 1 word chapter of all time!!! Great job girl!!
ROFLMAO!!! You are so bad…and the amount of time it took you to do this i KNOW you didn’t read about the Jews!!! LOL!!
EXCELLENT!!!!!!
I got all giddy and excited when I saw you posted *rubbing both palms with a silly grin on my face, clicking the page* Fuck. Fuck? Fuck! I was had! LOL!!! Very funny! But I couldn’t agree more. I think that pretty much sums up Bette’s thoughts during the kiss.
God I missed your sense of humor lately! Great one NY!
My sentiments, exactly!!! LOL! Thanks for the laugh NYGayLady.
Glad you’re back
You cannot be serious. Now get down to business and return to the Hudson Valley Line or what ever it was called. You got them to the point where they were just about to go on their first date and you ditched us! You clearly have a mean streak.
Nice I like it
Oh Bette, you woman of few words…!
Brilliant!yet mean, cruel, and spiteful…I tried to reload this page 3 times before I got it. Now I will have a reason to go watch that scene for the 8th, or 9th time.Unless someone(s) want to write some fan fic.. post the kiss…before next week…..please….pretty please…
… And a pretty great introduction to OMFG 2 & 3 coming in two weeks!
ROFLMAOO!!!!! Lady you are too much. This definitely is the SHORTEST story award. LOL!!! Love it. But, you know you have been missed, so you must get back in that groove and write. Thanks! C
I’m with Lament that was funny.
Hahahahah!! You are the best!!!
ha-ha you gave me my morning laugh…
but now you’re in the headlights; when are u gonna write us another story
Hahahaha !!! You rock !!! Excellent ! I’ll go back to see the scene for the 30th,no 40th,no…wait ..can’t remember how many times lol !
Brilliant–what else was there to say? You are a trip, kid! Now you’ve got to start writing again, since you’ve given up sleeping and reading!
LOOOOOOL
NYG–You and Jobadge must check this out– http://online.wsj.com/article/SB120130179066518067.html?mod=at_leisure_main_reviews_days_only I think JB’s sixth choice was some Collection of Certain A**es in Levi’s circa 2007.
You have such insight! I’m hooked already… drawn in from the first word!
That was a very short chapter,you could have maded it longer by using two words F&&k F&&K. thanks
NY, That is so the right word!!!! Glad to have you back!!!! Thanks
ROFLMAOOOO!! Here I am with the cheezy/goofy grin waiting to read some action!!!! This should get like an award or something,lmaoo!!! Ur soo bad…tisk..tisk..tisk!
That about sums it up!!!!
Wow… Shortest post ever AND the most comments ever, all in one… Huh. Who woulda guessed??