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Three is Not a Crowd – Part 3
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Three is Not a Crowd – Part 3
Bette continued with the buttons that Helena had begun on the black hotel uniform until it fell gently aside to reveal the black lacy bra and a matching black thong. Bette pushed the dress down Helena’s arms to in order to completely discard the article, she felt Tina behind her pulling the material to the dress off her, making it a joint effort to unwrap her birthday gift. Tina eased the long dark hair to one side and began kissing her neck whilst unhooking her bra; Bette pulled the front straps of the bra down and cast it aside. She looked at the creamy breasts in front of her, noticing that they were not as big as Tina’s but the areola was darker and the nipples smaller. She longed to taste one; she leaned forward, kissing Helena’s neck and slowly made her way down to her prize. She took one nipple in her mouth and ran her tongue around it until she could hear the moans of appreciation from her ‘gift’.
As she moved from one nipple to the other she heard Helena moan, opening her eyes Bette saw Tina drop to her knees kissing and softly biting Helena’s rear cheeks.
Tina had never made love with any woman but Bette – Bette was her first, last and forever, her one and only. A fact that she was proud of and believed would never change. She had thought a lot about the request and how she would feel making love to, and being made love by, anyone but her wife. The idea had not repulsed her, in fact it had thrilled her and she knew that because this was a joint venture this was in no way a reflection of breaking of their sacred vows they had made to one another. This was a re-affirmation of how deeply they loved and trusted each other, to be able to voice this fantasy in the first place was an act of trust, to find someone whom they both trusted was an act of trust, to carry it out for Tina was an act of complete selflessness, her love for Bette running so deep that she was prepared to undertake this act for her and her alone.
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Fuck!!! So HOT!!!
Say, would you two like to join me in a business venture? I think we could make a fortune bottling and selling British water. I know the French have the jump on this (l’eau minerale, la-di-da) and they’ve had centuries of self-promotion as romantics, but if we start putting this on billboards, we’ll make a mint.
Yes, I can attest to the fact that Ally is very good at everything she does and I do mean EVERYTHING. This story is beautiful and the two women writing it are just brilliant.
wow… just keep them cuming and cuming… god did we need this
woooooooow hot hot hot ok so i think maybe bette and tina forever has a point however wrong i think it is lol but regrdless i think this just proves how different our conceptions of this couple and more importantly love are,i think this story is just bringing forth one of the many sides a loving couple have and how comfortable they are with exploring their options/ fantasies it must say alot about there love to willing take this act upon themselves with the utmost belief they are gonna come out more fulfilled and stronger on the otherside anyway point is love is not pre defined its anyones conception therefore bring on the hotness post soon but maybe not to soon ive ran outta cold water again so proud to be british
ok just a quick note if i suddenly pass on at all in the next say what 5 hrs or so that i will for sure re – read your story i have left a post it note for my brother to hunt you down and give you both bug hugs for sending me to heaven lord knows i aint never sposed to be going there i was going down lol
I need oxygen…this is the hottest story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Damn so hot!
Wow, keep it coming
Holy shit, how do you do it?
well, I can only say that my health is definitely seriously damaged!.. *dies* that was perfect, thank you.
gosh, you two must have also damaged my memory, because I intended to use the term “ménage à trois”, because I love how it sounds… so yeah, that ménage à trois was the hottest and also the most emotional story.. loved it.
How can anybody not love this story – OH MY F….. GOD!!! It’s a masterpiece that should be hanging in Bettes gallery LOL…..I did take a very deep breath and now I’m blue because I forgot to relise it LOL…I must say that your mission with this chapter is absolutely a succes, I really get what you’re trying to show between B&T and thank you for that. This is truly a beautiful story and definitely not just about sex. More please also with your other stories…
HOLY SHIT! I need a cold shower, and I need it NOW *running off toward the shower!*
“Health Warning” most definatly Needed on this one…I loved it, it really is beautiful…Id imagine Helena thinks she has died and gone to `three some heaven`….Personally i think i was there when “The Levis ” Showed up..LOL…This is excellent and very tastefully written….cant wait for more and if my calculations are right there should be 2 more NC17s.. atleast…lol
WOW!!!!
man you 2 are trying to give me a heart attack u set my computer on fire i want a new one !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol
wow, i think you actually burned up my computer!!for the first time ever i wished i was helena!!!!please please please let us see bette and tina’s turn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
reminding myself to swallow. That was friggin hott and the love between B & T damn..send this off to IC, SHE CAN LEARN A THING OR TWO FROM YOU GUYS!!!!!!
BetteAndTinaForever – I’m sorry you don’t like the way this storyline is going, I think the title of this story says it all and therefore I believe that if you really don’t wish to read about Bette and Tina with a third person, then it maybe best not to read this story at all. You left a similar comment on the last chapter so I’m actually suprised that you took the time to read the follow up, considering it was also rated a NC17. Thanks for leaving a comment – its always nice to hear all aspects of peopls views on a story.
allyemmerson – you are a big liar, it isn’t cold showers you’ve been taking – its the next phone bill you’ll need to watch for! LMFAO!!
i’m probably the only dumbest person among you all that can’t understand how is making love to a third person makes B&T love for each other stronger…dont get me wrong, this is beautifully written and hot and i don’t see it as a F fest either but it feels wrong…i was only reading this chapter after i read the comments to see if i will be convinced…alas..B&T in love and making love to someone else even if it’s their fantasy just not what i see in B&T that i love (and i’m not even talking about show’s B&T anymore)…but ignore me, i’m the only one anyway that feels that way
Hey there == Just want to reiterate waht Jo said. we are very romantic writers as our own stories testify. it was so hard to write bette and tina touching anyone but each other. they belong together and as J said it would have been very easy to make it a F fest which neither of us wanted to do or could do even if you held a gun to our heads. no one is being exploited here – they will all return to their own lives with a fantasy fulfilled.Jo — you are a joy to work with and it has been a huge honour to work with you. i am in awe of your skills and this has been a rare treat.and just so all the readers know — writing this story has had a CONSIDERABLE effect on both of us – i have never taken so many cold showers. enjoy Ally xx
Okay — true — can i help it if i’m GOOD at everything
Now, if only…….all would be forgiven, IC
good lord i need a medic!! i think my jaw has dislocated and fallen to the floor!!
That was hot.
Had to remind myself to breathe,that was so beautiful. The love and trust that those two have together Wow The sharing of the fingers Again beautiful thanks
WOW!!!!! That was fucking HOT!!!!!! More Please Soon
I’m laaaaaaaate to comment but …..breathless!!!