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Three is not a Crowd – Part One
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They had the pure lust that held them enthralled with each other, they couldn’t contain it. It was a sensual attraction that all their friends knew, first hand, often boiled over and they seemed powerless to stop.
“Tina please, don’t.”
Tina smiled, knowing her words had hit the mark, she could see the desire smouldering in her wife’s eyes, and despite their most recent bout of lovemaking being only a few hours previous she wanted more of Bette, to taste the skin of the woman who had brought her so much joy, pleasure and fulfilment.
“What?” Tina challenged.
“Don’t do this, don’t issue threats!”
Tina brought her hand to her throat and slowly moved it downwards, towards her tee shirt, her fingers glancing across the skin, dragging on the material, pulling at it slightly, allowing her fingertips to gently rest at her breasts.
“Me? I’d never threaten you babe.”
Her eyes twinkling as her words slowly came out of her mouth, seductively.
Bette watched as Tina touched her nipple through the material, Tina watching Bette intently as Bette’s travelled between her face and slightly lower to where her fingers were dancing on her nipples.
As Tina touched herself Bette brought her hand to her own breasts, she used her fingertip to circle the nipple below the tee shirt, she heard the intake of breath from the bottom of the bed, their eyes never wavering from each others.
Bette sat up, her eyes continuing to search Tina’s, looking for the faltering of her decision, Bette brought her hands to the base of her own tee shirt and lifted it slowly over her head, making sure that as it passed over her breasts, she exaggerated the movement, allowing her breasts to move as the material made its ascent, she brought it over her head and threw it to one side, she once again lounged back on the bed, laying her palm flat on her stomach, rubbing from side to side, her eyes still locked with Tina’s.
Tina had stilled her movements, whilst watching the unfolding performance in front of her, she knew what Bette was up to and she was trying her hardest to resist the urge to look and enjoy what she was doing. She watched as Bette brought her hand up and cupped her whole breast, squeezing gently, she then did it with the other one, both breasts now encased in the soft hands of her lover. She watched as Bette slowly closed her eyes, she licked her lips as her fingers manipulated her own nipples, causing the skin to harden; she pinched it between her thumb and fore finger. Tina could see her chest rising and falling as her breathing became deeper.
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I am SSSSSSSOOOOOO ready for this next chappy or 2……post very soon…..what an awesome thing to write ……those 3 together in one bedroom, ……wooohooo….
It will be amusing if after the threesome, Tina starts to have feelings for Helena and she has confusing/conflicting thoughts in that blonde brain of hers.
ohhh lordy plz hurry this one up!!
Well, a few months ago I would have thought this absurd but I would rather see this than Tina doing it with a man and Dana dying….bring it on…at least its fun and it is B and T!!!!!
What fun, you two! Ignore the negative comments because anything is possible especially after this season. So…Bring it on you Brits!
This is hot and gonna be more hot next, Please post soon, thanks!
Um, why did you stop now? Keep going!!
oooooh … oooooh … yummy so far! more, pweeze!
oh shit… this is good… and i don’t care who you two are… just keep writing… no wi hope the next chapter opens up… the site is having trouble tonight… sure of all fucking nights… it has to be now when i want to read the next chapter… so if you don’t see a comment from me… i hope you two will repost it… and soon… thanks
J&A – I’m up for this! Theres no threat of drought in this part of the copuntry so I can have lots of cold showers – Wheres the rest?!!! Go Girls!
bring it on!!!!!!!!!!!
Hot! Hot! Hot! Damn! Can I be a fly on the wall in the room When this takes place?!?! =) Very nice chapter. I am definitely waiting for the next update.
hey there — well the sex scene was a little tame and not much humour that we Brits are famed for. Hope you do better with the next chapter
After reading this I don’t have a clue as to who the writers of this chapter are. I think you may have to write another one or maybe even more :-)
Bring it on, this should be interesting.
Look you two! Your comments aren’t going to through any of us off the scent. Now get the chapter with the SEX posted.
wowness.
A little disappointing, from the Author name and the title of the story I was expecting a little more, I must admit. I’m afraid that it hasn’t given me much hope that it will keep up with the British contingency of British writers currently on this board who are running away with the most popular stories. I think there definately has to be some more work if this is to be considered a story worthy of following. Sorry, just an honest opinion.
Did I forget to tell you that ‘through’ is the American spelling for ‘throw’?
Oh my, BBareB, season3 Helena plus season1 B&T = … fireworks? ;-)
And you talk a good game, now let’s see ’em!
You are sooo busted.
Who’s allyemmerson?
i resent being associated with this rubbish — and who is this jobodge character ??
What complete and utter CRAP! There is no way this is believable, the story and the suggestion that it could be such brilliant authors as allyemmerson and Jobadge. There writing is so much better than this pile of tripe. Bette would never agree to a threesome, especially with Helena. Won’t be reading again!
Wow! It’s like alternate universe l-word where people commited IC so she couldn’t write anymore. :) Can’t wait for more.
Okay you two I waited long enough to comment hoping someone would guess who you thw two of you are. FeltHat knows, but she only gave your initials away, so I am going to tell your screen names—Allyemmerson and Jobadge. This is a fantastic collaboration from the two of you. Keep it coming–I’m sure you both will have such fun with this story. Almost forgot funnyone also knows who you are too.
Okay you two are just having way too much fun with this. Let me introduce you two to the other. Allyemmerson is my best friend in the world and Jobadge is my newest friend and they both live in England. One lives in the southern part and the other lives in the northeastern part. Now if you two would quit playing around and get to writing we fans might actually get another chapter from one or both of you on any of your stories.
hey Jo – i think we better stop having so much fun, i know my chapter is unfinished and now i wanna start on the next one to this story. talk soon babe
yes, yes, hell yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LMFAO!!! This is classic!! And JT, that was a very negative comment you left, you are a bad girl, now go to my room… Ally, I’m Jobadge (not Jobodge), pleased to meet you!
Bring it! this should be interesting!
OMG! YES! please continue!
Oh, and for leaving us in this current state, you need to give us each a chapter of your current stories…that’s only fair..
You guys totally gave that away with your comments…only someone who could have written that could dish it as well….tsk tsk…And how cruel to leave us at that point knowing full well that if we don’t grovel enough we will likely not see another chapter…And also to leave us at that point…This was to eliviate some of tonights stress…well that means you have to finsh…PLS, and thankyou…That was a great read and I shall go back to it again and again…
Ruuth — you are such a damn spoilsport — i won’t play with you any more
Closet cases
I for one thought the writing was good and it reminded me of 2 specific writers as others have posted: Jobadge and allyemmerson. Now I hope I guess right but I hope even more that yo continue this story and see where it goes!! Love it!!
OK, so first i was like no way, uh uh, not gonna happen. Now that I’ve accepted that this is not the Helena from the show but a nocer, warmer more vulnerable Helena I can totally get down w/ this story. Tina is mad cool for wanting Bette to be able to experience her fantasy. i personally think threesomes work better when neither party (in the couple) know the 3rd party. but i got to say that i can’t wait to see how this one plays out. helena seems to be totally game and even has some ideas of her own so Bette better get read for a night she won’t forget. in case I haven’t made it clear enough, YES and i would like you fine writers to continue w/ this story. p.s. American breats aren’t to shabby IMHO…….lol