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Time Heals All Wounds, Ch. 3
Shane carried the two coffee cups over to the table, placing one in front of Carmen. “So, when would you be free to check out some houses with me? There’s this one house near the old neighborhood that sounds pretty good.”
Carmen sipped thoughtfully at her coffee. “Tomorrow would be good. Are Alice and Dana free then?” She blanched and sat the cup back down. “Starbuck’s doesn’t have anything on The Planet. Either that or I’ve been spoiled.”
“Do you need me to go get you some more sugar or something?” Shane asked, beginning to stand.
Carmen waved her back down. “No, it’s cool. If I need anything, I’ll let you know.”
Nodding, Shane took a drink of her own coffee. “Yeah, Alice and Dana are free tomorrow.” Oh my God, we’re really going to do this. We’re going to buy a house together. We’re going to live together. McCutcheon, what are you getting yourself into? Can you handle this? How much longer do you really think a girl like Carmen is going to put up with you? You’re just gonna get hurt – which is exactly why you swore off relationships before.
Trying to ignore her nagging doubts, Shane leaned forward. “So, what should I do with the rest of the money? I want to do something for everybody, but I don’t know what. I mean, like, what would everybody enjoy? A trip to Hawaii or something?”
Rubbing her chin, Carmen stared up at the ceiling a moment. “Well, a cruise is probably out, considering some of us went on that Olivia cruise before.” Her eyes reflected what she didn’t express verbally – a cruise might bring up too many bad memories, considering that they had gone with Jenny and things had been awkward between the three of them. “Skiing is definitely out, of course.”
Shane chuckled. “I’m not ending up dislocating a shoulder again, no thank you. Once is enough, thank you.”
Carmen shrugged. “I don’t know, maybe Hawaii. Maybe you should get everyone’s opinions on this so you can get a group consensus.”
“I dunno, I kind of wanted it to be a surprise,” Shane admitted.
“I know, so it’s not that much of a surprise,” Carmen pointed out.
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Thanks for another great update, FF. The scene that Shane talked to Jenny at her tomb touched me. I think that Al/Dane and Shane/Carmen are just so wonderful matches even though I got some hints of their breaking-up. Let Tina get out of the guilty.
I hope that Shane will throw the number away!
great update!!
Evertone is feeling guilty. Tina is depressed she does need help. but Bette and Angies needs her also. Lets get this all straighten out . Let Shane help Bette get her own gallery started. thanks
This is crazy and they all need help!
Alright, you posted! Problems, what problems? This was a fantastic chapter yet again, I’m totaly hung up on Danish and Shane’s stories. I’ve always love the friendship between Shane and Jenny and I’m really enjoying what you’re doing with them eventhough Jenny is dead.
I hate to say this but I think Bette should wheel Tina over to wherever Dan Foxworthy lives and let her stay with him awhile. Maybe he can snap her out of her depression.
I hope that they all sort out there problems soon and that shane will stay wilth carmen they are so good together and they same goes for alice and dana they need to sit down and talk big time please post soon i love it
“great comments! Reading them helps me push myself harder to get through the bouts of writer’s block…”
Well, we’re all behind you… and helping to push! ;-)