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Time Heals All Wounds, Ch. 9
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“I guess you’re right,” Carmen said slowly. “How’d you get to be so smart, huh, Kit?” she joked.
“By listening to Aretha,” Kit retorted laughingly. “Here,” she said, handing the CD to Carmen. “Buy this. Old Aretha could teach you a thing or two about life and love.”
“That’s her! That’s Dana!” Alice shouted, leaping off the couch like a shot and running to the door.
“Alice, please open the door! I love you!” Dana yelled through the door, pounding her fists against the wood hard enough to make her hands hurt.
The door flew open, and Dana had to grab the doorframe to keep herself from falling as she jerked her fist back to avoid hitting Alice.
“Dana?” Alice asked, her voice quivering and her mouth open in surprise.
Dana stumbled in and threw her arms around Alice, pulling her close and laying kisses in her hair. “Oh God, Alice, you don’t know how glad I am to see you. I got stuck in traffic and then I ran, and then the security guard tried to arrest me, and then I chased you in a cab and you yelled at me, but it turned out you really didn’t because I was asleep, and the flight attendant woke me up and I got a cab and came here. And, I, uh, that didn’t make any sense, did it?”
“What? Slow down, Dana,” Alice commanded, untangling herself from Dana’s arms to look at her. “I – “
“No, don’t say anything. Just listen to me, Al,” Dana ordered, using her hand to cover Alice’s mouth. “We’ve had our problems, and we can’t avoid them any longer. We need to sit down and talk about this. The last thing I wanted was for you to leave. I tried to stop you, but I was too late. But I’m here now, and I want you to know that I love you more than anything.” She cupped Alice’s face in her hands and smiled. “I’m willing to do whatever it takes to keep you with me.”
Debbie, who’d been standing to the side looking confused, muttered, “If that’s not being swept off your feet, I don’t know what it is.” As Dana and Alice glanced her way, her cheeks reddened and she cleared her throat. “I, uh, have something to do in the other room. Yeah. Okay.” She slipped out quietly to give them their privacy.
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I know somebody saw the whole dream thing coming, right? Anybody? I’m surprised no one guessed it. Come on, you guys know me – always expect the unusual or unexpected! LOL! Yeah, it was cheap. It was dirty. But it had you fooled, didn’t it? Put down those stones! No throwing at me. All is right in Danishville again. Besides, I should hope that Alice would never act that way. I told you guys to wait and see what this chapter had in store… = ) Thanks for reading! Keep an eye out for the next chapter pretty soon.
lol, ok, how come i didnt think of a bad nightmare?? im glad it was just a bad bad dream! Finally some happy danish! happy over here!
eta: can’t wait for the next chapter
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i love the danish in this fic!! :o)
yeah for alice and dana now all they have to do is talk about what went wong the first time around and I am glad to see that tina is getting better and that they are all starting to get there lives back together please post soon I love this story so much
hahahha awsome chapter and no i really didn’t see the dream thing comming -_-! that was great tho, things seem to be looking up, hope you post soon!
Omg, omg, you updated! :D
Oh goody! It was just a nightmare – wheh. Yeah, I should have expected something like this, but I have my blonde moments from time to time so…. :p I’m so happy Alice was happy to see Dana in Boston. Btw, yay Boston! Love Boston!
I love your Shane & Carmen! So so happy Shane realized what she has in Carmen, and that she’s the real deal, and thus threw away that napkin with the phonenumber on it. Yes! And sweet, caring Carmen – I hope her parents accept her for who she really is. I’m fearing the worst, cos coming out to parents…not a lot of fun, but I’m hoping they accept her, and invites Shane into their family.
As always, awesome writing. It feels real when reading it. The characters act as you think they will in all the situations you put them through. So kudos. :)
I didn’t see the dream coming, but the surprise was nice. I loved the psycho comment.
I’m so glad it was a dream! I can’t believe I didn’t think of that…Post soon!!!
Great chapter. Glad everything turn out great and happy for them. oK let see what’s next, thanks!
LOL that was a good one! You made up for the head banging I did last chapter with that super sweet Danish reunion. Loving this fic, keep up the good work!