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Timid Devotion (Part 11)
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Bette sighed, and walked into the kitchen, calling back to Tina. "I’ll just be a minute."
"K," Tina responded, taking a seat on the couch. She looked over to the other side and remembered her little make out session with Bette earlier. She got warm shivers through her body as she let her mind envision it again.
"Hello?" Bette asked once she picked up the phone.
"Hey Bette."
"Hey Alice."
"Okay, so I was calling Tina’s phone and she hasn’t been answering, and I’m kind of worried. I mean, she usually picks up unless she’s out with us because we’re like her only friends right now, which is sad because she should definitely be getting out some more if you know what I mean."
Bette shook her head as Alice rambled on.
"I mean, just look at her the next time you see her. She needs to get laid!"
Bette laughed out loud, trying to cover her mouth. "Alice!" she whispered, almost afraid that Tina could hear the nosy girl’s words. "That’s not nice."
"Hey, so do you missy," Alice continued.
"Well, that’s not nice either," Bette chuckled.
"It’s like … if you just look at her expression, I don’t know, most of the time we’re with her, it’s like her mind is somewhere else," Alice ranted on, as Bette leaned out to look past the separating wall to the living room. She smiled as she listened, looking over to Tina sitting on the couch. The beautiful blonde was looking over to the other side and obviously thinking back.
Bette couldn’t stop the smile from forming on her face as she nearly forgot Alice was still talking.
"I totally thought I saw her look at this girl the other day, but this is Tina we’re talking about," Alice giggled.
"Yes, that’s right Alice," Bette smiled, pursing her lips to keep in any laughter threatening to escape. "Okay, now if you don’t mind, I’m really busy today."
"You should be gettin’ busy!" Alice laughed, obviously proud of herself.
"Alice," Bette warned softly, bringing her hand to her neck.
"Hey, maybe try straighty," Alice started, knowing how much it got to Bette, "She is pretty cute you know."
"Alice, okay that’s enough," Bette insisted, trying to be quiet.
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they’re so incredibly cute. i can’t wait for what you have in store for them.
They are so cute together! That would have been so embarrassing if Bette found out what she was doing! lol They are great together! Great job! PPS
Thank you for posting… they are so cute and love the teasing… please post soon! Great Chapter. :)
That chapter definitely had me smiling! Tina needs to get herself under control or she just might explode. :) Love this story! Thanks for posting!
u r a big tease…
When these two do get together it’s gonna be explosive! Love all the teasing though, and oh my how embarassing for Tina! PPS:)
hahaha oh Tina! oh my goodness these two are so cute i could explode! love this story! I love their inner thoughts! PPS ; )
So cute! I don’t know which is cute-r…Bette and Tina or Ellen and Portia…=DI’m so lovin’ it
I’m so wishing that Bette had asked a few more questions of Tina… she would have cracked in a minute! Can’t wait for more. Both of your stories are wonderful!
Tina is so caught up in Bette. There is no way that she can run away from her or stop thinking about her. Bette is ingrained into Tina’s brain.
that was soooooo cute and bette is so in love haha. alice killed me “u love her u wanna marry her” hahaha soo funny and in sure alice will be in shock when she will see bette drooling from love
They are so cute and sweet, Tina is so funny. Please post more, thanks!
That was cute and made me giggle !! WE’re getting there…….. :)
that phone call was hilarious :) i’m off to read the other update… which is probably a real NC-17 ;)
Endlessly cute) Thank you very much for your story, I am waiting for updates.
I cant tell you how much I’m LOVING this story…they are so amazing togetehr…and you are a fricken TEASE!!But seriously bi..thanks..its great…now come on..bring me one of your infamous love scenes…mwah
OK, my heart is beating waaaaayyyyyyyy too fast. I CANNOT wait for your next update. All of this teasing and want is driving me CRAZY. Have mercy on me. LOL PPS
They are so sweet and you are a tease! I am ready for a nice, long love scene. Bring it on. pps
Great Chapter – i love being able to read Tina’s dirty thoughts in the moment like ‘bathtub of water with only naughty intentions’ – that was great! She seems innocent but her dirty thoughts would prove other wise. I can appreciate Bette’s patience but come on she is not a saint – at least let them have another make out session – (but don’t mind me my heart rate is still accelerated from your other story). These two have a very cute flirty way about them but they are just about on the edge. So glad Tina took matters into her own hands (she is stopping torture by touching)! Looking forward to your next chapter! PPS
I think Bette knew what Tina was doing. Poor Tina. Those two are so cute together.
teasing us like that I saw too NC-17 and thought awh i knew it but then it wasn’t so….LOL PPS
So cute… This sexual teenager tension you create is great… thanks
I love it! how do you do that?? the tension?? i really would like to know :P i’m writing my own story now (on the other site) but it’s fucking difficult to put some tension in it :P good job!! thanks
adorable!!!:)PPS