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Timid Devotion (Part 20)
"Nothing gives me more pleasure than hearing that baby," Bette smiled, laying ontop of her lover. She looked deeply into her eyes and spent a while kissing her softly on the lips. After Tina had moderately recovered, their kissing turned quickly into a much more passionate embrace. Bette moved down slowly, her lips moving to Tina’s left breast and closing over the hardened nipple.
Tina moaned and ran her hands through Bette’s hair, still in disbelief of how amazing that simple act could feel.
After getting the same attention to the other breast, Bette kissed down her stomach, and Tina watched with surprise and anticipation. She wondered what it would feel to have Bette go down on her. She bit her lip as she awaited the experience, unsure of where to put her hands or what to do. She felt paralyzed with excitement.
Bette smoothed her hand over Tina’s center, looking up at her. Tina watched in a trance as Bette opened her mouth and released her tongue onto her lover’s clit. Instantly, Tina threw her head back again. She had never felt so much pleasure from one touch. This was one big day of firsts for her. She swallowed hard and basked in the attention from her girlfriend. She couldn’t wait to reciprocate.
Bette’s tongue was so warm and so wet on her most sensitive place. She squirmed with pleasure, taken to a higher place as Bette pushed two fingers back into her. She wasn’t even thinking in English. Her eyes rolled back as she let out her breath and just allowed herself to bathe in the pleasure being given. She moved slowly with Bette’s tongue until it quickened. She thought she would pass out from this incredulous sensation.
"Ahh Bette …" she panted, bringing her head up with shock at the tingles Bette sent through her. She watched in disbelief at the amount of pleasure a tongue could bring.
Bette was enjoying this almost as much as her girlfriend was, watching Tina’s reactions from her place between the blonde’s legs. She closed her eyes occassionally as Tina’s sweet taste slipped onto her tongue. She was even sweeter than Bette imagined she would be.
Tina moved one hand down to Bette’s hair, snaking her fingers through it. Bette moaned, comforted by Tina’s palm against the back of her head. She closed her eyes as her tongue sped up even faster, flicking vigorously.
Tina felt those distinct tingles, and this time she knew what it meant and the pleasure she was instantly promised. She smiled as she felt another set of tingles and then another, each becoming closer together than the last.
She threw her head back as she moaned, arching again with the second orgasm to shake her body that evening.
"Now."
Just with that simple word, Bette knew how fulfilled Tina was, and eagerly continued until Tina’s body settled down and she slumped back into the mattress with amazement.
Bette slowly took her fingers out once Tina’s body allowed it, slipping her tongue in before making her way back up the blonde’s body.
"Bette …" Tina panted, her hair splayed across her face from her tossing and moving, "I fucking love you sooo much."
Bette smiled down at her, "I love you too baby." She was sure Tina was going through a whole stream of emotions with this new discovery. She leaned in to give her another kiss. After a few quiet moments of tenderness, Tina smiled and rolled them over so that she was ontop.
"I really really really wanna do that to you."
Bette smiled at the hunger in her eyes – hunger she had never seen before. "Yeah?"
"Oh fuck yes," Tina admitted, nodding with lust in her eyes. "I need to do that to you. Ahhh … I need you right now."
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(75 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
Where the hell is my dinner invitation?
all I can say is WOW! I am really speechless and I can’t wait for the next one! Discovery is sooo delightful!!
OMFG!!!! Tina Kennard is one lucky girl and what a first time it was!!! i’m loving the story biissexi – bettes turn now…i’m thinkin’ you’ve unleashed the beast in our sweet Tina!! pps
I m with Jackiee…except fuck dinner i’ll take dessert please… now that was a hot first experience…we should all have been so lucky..
Tina did a fantastic job in surprising Bette. Bette did an awesome job in thanking Tina. I need a cold shower now. AWESOME post. Please post soon. Thank you for not torturing me any longer.
that a dinner pplllllllllll, tina is the main dose. hooooo i envy bette and envy tina so much….gosh i need a shoer…the tem’ is rising
Oh My God, I need to clam down and then write you a proper comment, That was incredible my dear Cami. You are a great firsts’ writer. I love your work and passion. Love
=O Now you’ve made me blush. I’m reading this in the college library…
*THUD* i am at a loss for words… beatifully written! hot and sexy but tender at the same time. looking forward to the next one!
Very explicit and well worth the wait…part deux soon…
Fantastic!
AMAZING!!!! OMFG!!! WOW!!! Thank you
OMFG*thud* :)PPS
*THUD!!!* OMFG Bi….I have no words to describe the sweetness & HOTness of this chapter…Jesus I’m Speechless!!! PPVS xxx
Ummmm, Ummmmmmm, Ummmmmmm
Holy jesus Mary and Joseph that was so incredibly hot! I felt like I was experiencing it right along with tina!! Finally release and what a release it was amazing as always! Can’t wait to see how tina reciprocates. PPS
WOW. that was great. worth the build up for sure. and i am sure we all re-lived our own first experiences, and for that thank you!! PPS.
Sorry, I was kinda tongue tied. That was just wow. I’m sure Tina is kicking herself for not letting Bette take her sooner. And now it’s Bette’s turn… I can’t wait!
That was something else….and now I can’t wait for Bette’s turn.
Fucking AMAZING! That was definitely worth the wait. Your description was excellent. WOW!
I’m totally speechless!! That’s the best! You’re the best! PPS
“Wasn’t even thinking in English”!!!!!!!!!! Excellent! Hope Bette just unleashed the animal in Tina!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!! My hair is on fire!!!! I’m speechless!!! That was soooo worth the anticipation!!!! Now Can’t wait for the next part…. PPVVVVVS!!!
OMG, that was incredibly hot. Tina was in for the ride of her life. Can’t wait for Bette’s turn for her ride.
WOW thats hot hot hot!
I really, really, really want Tina to do that to Bette too! LOL! Bette was sweet, gentle and amazing. Very Hot!
worth the wait:)
WOW! That was amazingly beautiful! I love that Bette took so long to get a clue. :) Very sweet. And I do think that you have unleashed a monster in Tina, but it’s wonderful. Thanks for posting!
Holy smokes! That was so hot I think I’m on fire. Quick somebody hose me down! Wonderful build up to an incredibly intimate connection.
Whoo Hoo Bette has unleashed the beast in Tina. She is going to have fun gettting to know Bette’s body. PPS
Cold Shower anyone??? That was awesome!! can’t wait for the next chap!
Holy fucking shit! That was soooo worth the wa *THUD* (Ouch! I poked my eye with an umbrella. How the hell did that happen? I was already on the floor waitin’…)
Yeah WOW!!!
WOW…I want to say so much, but find myself speechless…for a change;)The way Tina responded to her first was so perfect, it reminded me of mine:)Thanks for that amazing writing and wicked chapter…you rock my world love…xxxx
Wow! Wow! Wow! Love this story and it was so tender the way Bette was with Tina. Definitely need a cold shower. Thank you :)
These two are in for a very long night! PPS:)