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I Remember Rivers – Tina Kennard and Bette Porter

“Listen, Sista, I gotta go, but Daddy will be fine, and you and Tina are getting more and more so. Go enjoy yourself. You won this one!”
Six Days Later-
I don’t mind hospitals the way some people do. They complain they feel out of control, at the mercy of the doctors or the disease. I don’t know why this reality in here is so different for them than outside the medical center. To me the chances of getting bad news or having something completely obliterate your life and happiness can happen while drinking a latte in Santa Monica for Christ’s sake.
<!–nextpage–>The fact that I have many people who will come running if I yell, or probably what they’d prefer is my pushing this Call Button instead, but the fact that there are computers doing calculations, people that will run in here when I want them to, are not the reasons we are going to my house now to move my father to stay with me. It’s that I see it very clearly as the next chapter for us. I think he can still get better and if he doesn’t he doesn’t, but he’s not going to die here. That’s final.
Eight Days Later – Bette’s House – Kit’s shift with Melvyn
Kit has chased me back into my master bedroom to shower and to do anything other than read to my father. He’s now in a coma but I read the Mississippi River poem he loves to him over and over. Kit is now through with that. It’s her evening with him until midnight, and as I drop my clothes into the laundry bin, and twist on the hot water I hear a tap on the door.
“Bette?” Tina’s voice outside.
“Here, just getting in the shower. When did you get back from Sacramento?” I test the temperature and enter. The bathroom door opens.
“When was the last time you ate? Do you remember?”
The water hits my face and I adjust the three shower heads to pulse on my body. Oh God, that is helping make me feel alive again. “A few hours ago. This morning I had oatmeal with Daddy.” I spurt out some water.
“Okay. It’s four o’clock, and Kit tells me you have circles under your eyes.”
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As inept and clumsy as it sounds, “Just wow!”
Keep them coming.
Another great story,thank you.
Great description. I really like what you’re doing with the series. Thanks!
I loved the scene in the shower: so sweet!
Nicely done, as always. This is one of my favorites, by far!
They must serve some mighty fine coffee in New Orleans! It wasn’t weird at all, I liked the way you had them re-connect. You are an amazing writer.
Hey Blackbird
I am really enjoying the style in which you are taking us through familiar storylines with your own unique twists. You’ve captured their essence so it flows beautifully. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Beautifully written. There were so many lines I wanted to highlight – shame i wasn’t reading this on kindle. Thanks for sharing Blackbird.
Another great story looking forward to reading them all
Ok the breast milk sucking has really intrigue me like omg, and I too love the shower scene, bossy Tina but hilarious st the same time love it. I would have been so scared as I do not like storms!
Getting so much from re-reading! Highly recommended.
Beautiful storyline, superbly written!
You’re a class act Blackbird!
While working with Jacky on the book covers I did a nice, nice re-write of one of my favorite stories, I Remember Rivers. I hope you will enjoy the re-write. I find the polish to this immersive story of their love affair quite interesting and deeply romantic as well as amusing in all the right places.
Enjoy!
Blackbird
On another re-read of this fantastic series of stories and find a re-write :)
The stories are always great but are now made better by the super pictures.
Thank you Blackbird.
To be able to visualise the storm raging and the lightning flash across the skylight at the same time as watching Bette wondering if it would be perverse to want to taste the fluid in Tina’s engorged breasts. This for me is pure unadulterated erotica being played out between two heavenly females.
I read quite a lot but this level of intimacy in full blown high definition is deeply moving. The freedom to let go and let guttural instinct and pure arousal run free is just immense.
The trust between Tina and Bette to fall that deeply is truly sensational.
Another Incredible chapter.