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Tina — Plan B; Part 100
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My breathing quickened. A thought flashed through my mind. I guess I revealed my thoughts, because it was now Bette’s turn to ask me, “What?”
“I was just thinking,” I admitted, speaking slowly.
“Yes?” Bette drew out her response, as well.
“Well” I looked at our hands. Somehow, the fingers had become entwined.
She followed my gaze, and lifted her hand, pulling me in closer. “Well?”
“Well, it’s too bad we’re not sending her to school today.” There, I said it. I admitted my carnal thought.
“We could double her pain meds.” Bette gave me a wicked smile.
There have been times I wished for a way to knock out Jess, if only for a brief respite. That will have to remain a fantasy for me; and, I hope, for Bette, too.
Bette’s wink confirmed that she really was kidding. “It was good to spend some time with her.”
“That’s good.”
“Why?”
“Well,” I hesitated to admit that I’d thought of this, but it was something that’d occurred to me yesterday. “With that wrist, she’s going to be out of the summer league in softball.”
“Poor kid.”
Poor kid? You’re not entirely getting this, Bette. “That means she’s going to have a lot of free time this summer.” Time to reinforce the point. “A lot of free time. Here. At home.”
“Then it’s a good thing I have an apartment. An escape for a little quality time. Maybe? From time to time?”
“Maybe.” But then again, Bette Porter, perhaps I want to keep you around here, also. I knew that Bette really was fond of Jess, and really was trying, but this family thing was still totally new for her, and hoped it wasn’t feeling like too much.
Not that it should have been a surprise, but Bette knew the right thing to say to ease my concerns. “We actually had a good talk last night.”
“Really?”
“She remembered Kit.”
“Really.” She was so young, and she never asked about her aunt. I gave Bette’s hand a squeeze. “I miss her.”
“Me, too,” she admitted, allowing a bittersweet smile, tinged in memories.
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Since the begining of this story you’ve had us hooked. And through all the delays, we’ve waited for just a glimpse of it. Thanks Pseud, for a story that gave us a little bit of everything, but mostly joy. I’m sorry to see it end, but hopefully whenever you have the time, maybe you’ll let us know how the three of them are doing, or maybe you’ll come back with another great story. Whichever will be here. As my Mom always says. Its not goodbye, just I’ll see you later.
Thanks psued I loved the story.
This was one of the best stories ever. Infrequent and short updates?? OK. OK. Just asking LOL
I believe we all will miss you.for awhile. and this wonderful story.When I think og Jesse. I can just hearher calling Bette Porter. and that we knew she like Bette but didnt want to love someone that might just go away again. thanks for all the posting and the happiness you did bring us. thanks
Aw, I will miss this story. But it has been a truly excellent one and I’ve enjoyed the ride. Thanks for sharing your talent and creativity. Good luck with all that’s going on in your life and hope to read from you again! :)
Oh its so bittersweet! Sweet because this chapter was awesome like all that preceded it and bitter because its the last one. Thanks a bunch for taking the time to write this story. I really enjoyed all 100 chapters of it. Hopefully a story will come to you sometime and you’ll feel compelled to share it with us!
Awwwwww… great ending to a great story!
thank you for this story. I enjoyed it so much.
Pseud, thank you very much for sharing this wonderful story. Great ending, great story and it’s been a heck of a ride. B&T finally reconnect, and with Jess too, of course. I hope that you will share another story with us in the near future.
I am so thankful u took the time to write this story and share it with us, it was a great journey from start to finish. I hope to see you back on this site when things slow down for you but until then, I thanks you for sharing and take care.
Damn its suck to see this story ending but was a wonderful and happy ending. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us and hope you will make a new one soon. Ok thank you!
Loved it from beginning to end. Hope you bring these three back in the future.
Thanks for giving us this great and different approach to a story and view into BnTnJess’ life. It was lovely!!
thanks for taking this story to it’s conclusion. it was a lot of fun to read and will definitely be missed. good luck in everything else that you have going on and can’t wait to see your return.
thanks for the story and i hope you find time to come back one day. love ally x
wow…I guess all good things must come to an end, and I guess I do appreciate it when a tv show goes off the air while still on top, that’s what you are doing. Whereas I don’t want this story to end as I have really come to enjoy it, the humor or Jess, the passion of Bette, I understand that it has probably run its course. I hope we do see these characters again. Thank you so much for your time and effort in this wonderful tale!!!
Dearest Pseud, this was the very first story i click onto and i have never been disapointed. I am relieved to read that there will be more from you, no matter where or when, i will jump with glee when i see your name appear on my screen. Ta for a wonderful story, filled with many, many laughs.
Awww….so tender and warm. Thank you, this whole series was funny and creative and so enjoyable. Great job, hats off to you.
I’ve been busy so I haven’t been able to read this last chapter until now. I have absolutely enjoyed reading your story. It has been so touching and I loved every part of it. I never got bored of it. I will miss it.
Pseud – thank you a 1000x for a wonderful loving story – with the best dialogue written for these 2 ever and the best creation in Jess of exactly how their daughter would be as a teen. Every minute you gave to this I thank you for. Best wishes on whatever you are up to and I will look for your stories in the future.
Yeah, I agree we’ve finished this in a rather natural way. This is definitely one of the best stories I’ve ever read. I really enjoy your natural humour and I also like the natural tone of the story. I like the word ‘natural’ naturally. It’s kind of sign of eternal happiness. Thank you again for sharing it with us. Hope you could come back with some new stories from time to time. =)
pseud, I loved this story, I will miss the humor of your tale and any time you want to bring us back into the lives of Tina, Bette & Jess is fine with me.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful story. We will look forward to seeing you again sometime in the future… Warmest regards :o)
Nice to see you back even if its the end. Hope you come back to us with a update on this family.
I, too, will miss this wonderful story, but understand about a stopping place. So farewell, but not goodbye.
OMG. I love this story, now is the end. Come back soon with a new story for this family. I will miss you.
This story has been a wonderful ride. Thank you for spending so much time and thought to share it with us.
Well, I stuck it out from the beginning, and I’m a bit depressed that it’s ending (for now). Each chapter has been great, Pseud. Thanks.
Soooo sad that this is the end as I loved this journey you took us on, good luck with your adventures called ‘Life’ don’t be a stranger
With all the good stories on this board, it’s hard to choose the best. Personally I liked your quite a bit because you bring out different personality for each of the characters. You made them fun and for that, and the many enjoyable reading hours, I thank you. And I thank you for teaching me to eat bon-bons and to look at little insects. Thank you for the many smiles you put on my face. I sincerely hope you write another story, if not, this was memorable. Enjoy life.
I really enjoyed this story. The humor, love, and realism of how Tina, Bette, & Jess were with one another. I understand this is the end of this saga with B & T & Jess; however, maybe in the future there can be more with them. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.
Pseud,Firstly thank you for sharing this fabulous and fantastic fan fiction with me. It has been a fun-filled and frivolous escape from life’s monotony.I have loved every word, phrase and scene.The interplay between the characters has been a joy to follow.Giving each of the main players a voice and insight into her thoughts was a masterstroke.Your genius has embodied every aspect of this tale.Roll on Plan C????Much appreciation and gratitude for all your talent, generosity, hard word and effort.I will be waiting for your next adventure.Your Loyal Fan.PS – You and Jwet finishing this weekend. Am now official in mourning.
Sorry this story is ending, but so glad its on such a happy note. This has been one of my favourites, each chapter eagerly anticipated and I hope you come back with updates whenever you’re able to. Thank you.
i don’t think i have ever left a comment before for you and i don’t really know why because i have followed it from the start…….but felt the need to say thankyou and to wish you well with whatever it is that is now going to take more of your time. once again, thankyou.
Loved it every step of the way pseud, thanks for a wonderful story and a wonderful conclusion..hope u come back really soon .. cheers matey!
I actually got all teary-eyed at the thought of not getting to see Jess anymore! I love her. Perhaps you could give us “Snippets of Bliss” a la JKS when you get a chance to write a stand-alone chapter. Thank you so much for the time and energy you’ve spent entertaining us. Your writing has been a pleasure to read. I think you have a flair for portraying teens in a realistic, but no condescending way. I have LOVED it! Maureen
Really just want to say thanks for this story, it has been bright, funny, sad and always well written. I hope every once in a while you will feel inspired to send out another chapter.
Thank you, thank you, thank you. This was such a wonderful story. I hope we get to revisit these characters again.
This ending chapter like all your other chapters was perfect. Please don’t go away. Even if you can only post once a quarter. Please don’t go.
YEAH that was so perfect that they would connect that way. They both know each others feeling so well again. thanks
The end?? What the heck does that mean? It seems to me there are thing that still could be talked about… the story doesnt have to stop when the drama ends… but anyways, pseud, this story was great, I enjoyed it immensely.
The happy ending warms my heart. Thanks for sharing this story with us Pseud, I will miss it greatly. I look forward to you sharing another one with us when time allows.
Thankyou, for your time, your effort, your wonderful story, this journey has been all and everything. Pls my one request…that during this break you dream up another “short” story for us that lasts 150chapters!!! We’ll be here waiting…thankyou
I have followed this story closely all along and felt that this was the perfect ending to such a wonderful ride. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
thanks for the story..all 100 chapter=P
Pseud, thanks for this wonderful story. I’ve the way you’ve fashioned the characters and gave them a depth that is missing elsewhere *cough* tv *cough*. Be well and good luck with everything else you have going on.
Thank you for carrying this story through to its conclusion! Good luck with your life and we’ll see you when you get back! Thanks!
this is a really great ending spot…i absolutely love this story and i can’t wait for you to continue with it some day…thank you so much for this wonderful journey…i’ll miss Jess and her talk and i’ll miss B&T…so come back as soos as you can
I’ve loved this story from the beginning. You have an uncanny ability to express each characters point of view, especially Jess. The ending was natural and lovely but there’s so much more to write about. Please consider posting stand alone chapters whenever you can and I’ll be waiting. Thank you.
Pseud, I have loved every minute of this story. The depth that you brought to the characters, the unique format and the overall pace and candence of the story created a foundation on which you were able to build a story that was filled with richly textured dialogue and fresh emotional insights. You were able to strike a balance between funny and poignant, wit and insolence in such a way that we were hooked from the first chapter! Jess was such a fresh voice and so cleverly written. She offered a viewpoint on life, love and what it’s like to be a teenager that was so distinctly youthful that it was difficult not to forgive her transgressions. Your story has been a reminder of how important communication is and how much time can be wasted when we let pride, ego and fear dictate our lives. I am hopeful that we will see Jess and her family in the future. Thank you so much for sharing your time and your talent with us and we look forward to any future “Plans” that you may have.
Thank you so much for sharing this funny, sad, sweet, painful and loving story. A perfect ending…but it makes me happy knowing they’ll be back.
What a lovely way to end this story. I’m so gonna miss these guys. And your writing… Thank you for sharing this great story :-)
this is so good. this is the second time i read this and it still works its magic.