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    Tina, Tiny Pieces Chapter 16 – Part 1

    Story written on May 17, 2006 by lastkid.
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    Your Cheating Heart

    I lean against the doorframe. I try to take a deep breath but manage only to hiccup.  I raise my arm, I drop it, I raise it again, rapping my fist gently on the door.  She doesn’t answer.  I knock harder, straightening myself up.  I put my face up to the peephole, pressing against the door.  I blink rapidly and press harder.  This hurts my eye. I lift my hand again, ready to knock, open-palmed this time.  She opens the door.

    The motion, combined with my pressed-face posture, propels me awkwardly into the room.  In the awkward galloping process, I knock her arm – the one holding the door half open – away.  She stumbles back a step just as I abruptly stop myself from slamming into the couch.  My knees flex and then bend, I twirl my arms to keep myself from falling. 

    All in all not the entrance I was looking for.

    Tina?

    I straighten up again, smiling quickly, smoothing out my sundress.  It is then that I notice someone on the couch, someone who is now standing up.  I squint in her direction.  She asks again, her voice high pitched and tinged with irritation and confusion.

    Tina? Uh, honey … whatcha doing?

    I turn to face her but I turn too quickly and am thrown off balance again.  I flail, only my left arm this time, reaching for the couch.  I sidestep towards it, I grab on tightly.  I smile again.

    I needed to talk to you, Alice.

    She wrinkles her nose at me.  I wrinkle my nose back at her.

    It’s like 3 a.m., Tina.  You needed to talk to me at three in the morning?  Where have you been?

    The woman on the couch is now standing next to Alice, smiling widely at me.  She looks familiar but I don’t know from where.  She’s heavyset, shorter hair.  She has enormous breasts which catch my eye for a moment, until I notice her shirt.  Shocking pink, worn under a leather vest which is unbuttoned.  I peer at her shirt, trying to read it.  All I can make out is “les are fo uck.”  This makes me giggle. 

    I look up at Alice, who is frowning.  I stop giggling. 

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    1. Great chapter LK. My heart truly goes out to Tina. She is so confused right now. I am a Tibette but now I want Tina and Bette to just find peace and if so happen they find it together or apart, just let them find some happiness.

    2. Goddamn, kid. Page one was hilarious, and Alice gets off a good one to close things up, but my jaw dropped when Bette called Tina a spinelss piece of shit. Not that she doesn’t have justification, but still. But kid, how could you even dream of inflicting Madeline Albright on Bette? What did she ever do to you?

    6. OH man this is what I call a story!!! Love the drama the suspense!! I wish that your chapters were longer actually…..don’t care what others say. Can’t wait till the rest of the story. I hope that she told bette that she could see the baby.

    7. Mind blowingly great chapter!! God you are amazing! So glad Bette got to just how f*cked up that “spineless piece of shit” really is and how much better off she is without her! Love this story! Thank you!

    9. Oh don’t leave us here! That was a roller coaster ride and I’m still hangin’ on with white knuckles.Other than that – great chapter. Brilliant structure.

    11. I loved how you took us up to and through the front door ever so slyly inviting us to believe that Tina was at Bette’s door – clever, very clever —- Arden is a very good match for Alice. She’s attentive and compassionate and takes her job seriously, just like Alice. And, just like Alice, there are times when her job requires her to be more intrusive knowing that she will upset people, but doesn’t hold any animosity against those she has had to take issue with —- Whenever Tina is caught up in a maelstrom of emotion, it is always Alice that she turns to for refuge…and selfishly expects Alice to be regardless of the time of day or night and despite the fact that her current quagmire is a direct result of an expatriate status of her own making…The world according to Tina —- Tina anoints her courage with alcohol but then ends up drowning in a pool of cowardice because of her inability to act. —- I don’t see Henry as a mean spirited ass. I see him as extremely immature, hurt and confused and acting like most men do when they feel threatened, they get territorial. He has come to claim what he sees as his from the threat that is Bette —- Tina doesn’t really know Henry if she thought given their recent altercations and his obvious manipulation of her mother’s visit that he would just sit idly by and do nothing when he has been so distraught over their polorization —- Perhaps subconciously Tina knew that Henry would show up, maybe she even wanted that to happen, so that a decision would have to be made. It would be a convenient excuse, it would be made because of circumstance and not consciously by her own hand…or as I have said before, just another example of how she can now play this as her typical passive/aggressive behavior —- Bette’s somewhat civilized response to both Tina and Henry is not that surprising. She has become accustomed Tina’s impotence when it comes to decision making and effective communication. There may also be just a hint of pity that tinges her acerbic remark to Tina regarding her lack of a backbone…Bette may despise Tina, but she loves Angelica —- This chapter reminds me of a volcano that is coming to life but has not fully erupted….Henry is nothing more than a lot of noise, a little smoke and a minor and a little venting, but no real fire or damage is done….Tina is like a volcano that sputters, spews and ruptures belching smoke and fire making a grand show of its presence but falls short of a real eruption….Bette is the one you have to watch out for…there is a low rumbling with noxious fumes billowing out in the form of her comments to Tina and her squelching of Henry…she is the one that is most likely to blow and cause the greatest amount of damage…she is the one that has been boiling the longest and has the most to erupt about —- It’s chapters like this one that remind me of just what a tease you can be! Excellent chapter, I am on pins and needles eagerly waiting to see what happens next.

    12. I rarely comment but I have read every single chapter and I absolutely love it. I love the way you’re portraying this side of Tina- which doesn’t seem to far from the truth. Her anger and bitterness at Bette, and IC’s and Betty’s poor writing turned S3 Tina into a fake,wanna-be, power-hungry, alpha Bette.. I lie she was just a bitch. Bette was inded an alpha and arrogant, but damn she could be. I do hope at some point B&T would get back together and move to Idaho and buy a farm next to Demi & Ashton… I really don’t think I can take another BeLenna pairing. They are both beautiful but not as a couple.

    13. Hey, Queen of Cliffhangers :) Not only should Jenny show up, but have at least 4 lovers at a time, none of them being human nor brunette. There would be the whole circus-thing from S2, and Jenny, whilst performing some neck-breaking tricks (unfortunately, without breaking it) on a what’sitcalledagain.. well, performing that trick, being flying fuck ^^ and babbling about “rules are for suckers” and “les fo fuck”, about how simple letters can change the world, how changeable the world and her lovers are, how a single yaddayadda … blah … can save you or lure you on to destruction. How a razorblade can be so stainless and so stainless at the same time, Jenny griefing over the ants, the orange juice and the air molecules that had to die because of her. Given time (aprox.: 2 seconds) all the characters (but Jenny and her outer-space mates) would be dead, bored to death, blood running out of their ears. I’m still not over Jenny. Maybe one day. With a car. Or a bulldozer. Tina is so pathetic. Soooooooooooo pathetic. So whiny, miserable, you could be forgiven for thinking she’s weak. Oh, and drunk. Man, that woman is drunk, but yeah, I see why she would be. Facing the shatters of her life in a sober state. Btw. I don’t care about Helena or Bette being together or not. I don’t care wheter you’ll ever mention it again in this story (I’m sure Alice will), but I’m rather satisfied with Helena feeling it. If there is an option or not… well, we’ll see where you take it. I’d be happy if, but I can live without it, too. I think the whole discussion is ridiculous, Bette not being able to be attracted to Helene, because of her personality or her relationship with Tina (Bette of S1-end of S3 wouldn’t. Bette of S4 might.), the only hindrance I see is that Bette needs to be with someone less broken now (I’m not talking about Helena exclusively). Someone with fewer issues, complexes and so on. Some one who’s happy with the live they’re lving, because, some people out there really are happy. That’s it for today, have a nice week(end), a.

    14. I love your style of writing LK. You have a true talent for creating anguish and depth to these characters. You have an ability to make these characters so much more believable than IC. GREAT JOB LK!!! (Depressing though)

    15. More expletives than I could possibly write in this one sitting :-)I think its intriguing how your able to write and not give anything away. At the moment I think your playing all the different groups. The Tibette lovers see hope, the Belena lovers see hope, the Bette lovers see hope, the Tina haters see hope that a house will fall on her. the Tina lovers see hope that Tina might get her shit together. Everyone is being played like a fiddle and quite frankly this is more juicy than the story. Not that the story isnt beyond spectacular. I think I will have to admit that I am one of those people who feels that this is not going anywhere positive. There will be no happy ending to this one. There is just too much ugliness for that to be the case. But hey roses do grow out of shit so what do I know.

    16. Highhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Muddafuhhkin Fiveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! Kid, this is all that!! Let’s begin with Tina being so ridiculously plastered. I lovedddddddddddddddddddd her making an ass out of herself. Henry is JUST an ASS!! Alice will always be Alice and although Tina f*k’d up her date, the dirt, that was Tina’s evening, will surely make up for Alice’s lose. Henry is JUST an ASS!! Bette & Helena togetherrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr…..yessssssssss!! Oh, not this chapter……….anywho….THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for allowing Bette to have the upper hand in HER home that she didn’t invite the “lily white asses” in to!!! Henry is JUST an ASS!! …………Y DO U USE THIS FONT?

    18. I can’t believe how torn I am. I love what Bette says to Tina, and yet I want to see them together… And it really WAS time for Jenny to show up. :) Love it, can’t wait for more; thanks for the bedtime story!

    19. That’s so intense. Watching the ‘show’ may help Bette move on faster. A thought came to me while I was reading it. You never wrote a TiBette together story. But you’re very interested in investigating in their relationship. So can’t you take it as a challenge and make this story one? ;)

    22. Wow that was probably the most emo thing I’ve ever read on here. I say that sort of jokingly in that yes, it was emo, but it wasn’t kiddie emo like, “OMFG no one understands me WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” Basically it was interesting. Never a dull moment. TIBETTE FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But if I can’t have TiBette, I’ll root for Meg the doctor person. She seems like she has her shit together. Henry can get gonorrhea and rot for all I care.

    23. Beautiful, absoulutely beautiful! That was brilliant. I LOOOVVVVVEEEED how Tina made a complete ASS out of her self and Bette was there to witness EVERYTHING. Henry is a punk Biatch! Hands down the best two lines were: “You disgust me, you spineless piece of shit. Get the fuck out of my house.””Why don’t you two take your lily white asses back to Green Acres.” Together. Now.” Splendid, I am giving you a standing ovation just for those two sentences. Bette’s reaction is just what I needed to start my day! Tina, you are so sad it’s really pathetic then again you are just pathetic. Henry go fuck yourself and leave pathetic tina, she obviously does not care about you. It’s three months into their marrigae and thier quarrling like they have been together for years. “Uh, Houston, I think we have a problem” Also please no Belena and definetly NO TIBETTE! I’d rather take Belena than Tibette! One more thing, can we have another encounter just like this, I like spewing venom, it was like Bette was saying it on behalf of us all!

    27. this is the only story i find myself holding my breath the entire time i am reading it, it is so painfully real, you make us feel we are in the same room, with all the drama…..great job, p.s. i dont give a shit about your fonts

    28. I had to read again and comment.”You fucking lying bastard! You goddamn coward!… What the fuck is wrong with you??”No tina the question is What the fuck is wrong with YOU?!!! It’s amazing Tina can call henry that when she herself is the human form of these adjectives! I must say again Lastkid, this was great and I cannot wait until part 2. Okay now I must go to a group interview!

    30. Have you ever wanted something so badly, yet for the life of you, can’t allow yourself to have it. It eats away at you day in and day out…your want…your ache to have it. But, still you won’t give in to your other voices. I really believe this is what Tina is going through. She wants Bette so much, yet won’t allow herself to admit it…won’t allow herself to feel that want…that need. It’s those damn voices drowning everything else out. Your dialogue is very good. My heart breaks for everyone in this story, including Henry who does love Tina in his own weird immature way…but not including Tina’s mother, who is just a bitch! Thanks!

    34. LK…you’re an amazing writer. I loved when Bette called Tina “a spineless piece of shit.” Tina is all effed up. She doesn’t want Bette or maybe she does? But she doesn’t want anyone else to have her. She doesn’t want Henry…He’s fucking boring. Great angst, tension and writing. Good stuff. And your font is beautiful.

    35. God! yes I’m calling you God! That was an amazingly written part. I wanted to bash Henry in the face. I wanted to hold Tina until I heard what she didn’t say adn then bash her in the head. I wanted to just give alice a hug and I want to take Bette away from all of that pain!! great! love it want more. Now!

    37. as visions of absolutely flattening tina come to mind, or the hope that aliens will spirit her and henry far away forever, so that no one has to witness the emotional black hole that is tina ever again…..the thought burns in my head..why do you use this font?? Bette and Helena rock!

    38. “You disgust me, you spineless piece of shit. Get the fuck out of my house.”…omg, if I was Tina I would cry like a baby right there. I got scared imagining the whole thing :o. Great writing. Post soon please.

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