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    Tina, Tiny Pieces – Chapter 4

    Story written on March 27, 2006 by lastkid.
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    And here’s to you, Mrs. Robinson Part 2

     

    I pull the phone out, I look at the number, its Henry.  I hold my index finger up to Alice, I turn in my chair.

     

    Hello?  Its only 9:30.  No, I didnt hear it before.  Yes, I am.  What?  I – no – Henry, come on.  Why are you home already?  Oh.  Is he alright?  You took him back to –  So you sent her home?  Shes sleeping, right?  Ok, good.  Im gonna – what?  Ok.  Ill call her back tomorrow.  Thats nice.  Yes.  Yeah, Im glad you talked to her for a half hour.  Yeah.  I said Ill – ok.  I will.  Ok, I got it, Jesus, Henry, I said Id call my mother back tomorrow. Im not very well going to call her back tonight, its 10:30 there and Im out with Alice. What? In the freezer.  Shes on cows milk almost all the time now anyway and shes not going to get up and – yes, if she gets up, give her regular milk.  Shes not going to get up.  Because I know.  Look, Im going to go.  Ill see you – yes, I will.  Bye.

     

    I turn back to see Alice wearing a wide smile.  I cant help but smile back.  I feel my face flush, I am embarrassed.  Ashamed?  Her eyes, so often lifeless, dulled and sad – I cannot meet them now – they reflect a knowledge, a certainty, about me that I dont feel privy to.  I fight a rising tide of anger.

     

    He said to – um, he said to say hi.

     

    She waves at my purse.

     

    Hi Henry.

     

    He was just – hes home and shes -um.  So, who did you go with?

     

    Where?

     

    To the concert.

     

    Oh.  Um, Shane and Jenny and Max, the usuals.

     

    You guys drove?

     

    Her eyes dart past me, over my shoulder, then she quickly looks at the table next to us. 

     

    No.  We um, we flew.

     

    Oh.  Did Helena go?

     

    She picks up her fork, she pushes her pasta slowly, twirling the large outer noodle around her the tines.

     

    Yeah.

     

    Did did Bette?

     

    She drops her fork.

     

    Tina!

     

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    2. Great as always. Makes my day…or night, as the case may be. I, too, have been compared to Ilene…what an unkind cut! Stings! Thanks for continuing!

    4. Ouch! It would hurt so much if you didn’t write so good. You must be good or I wouldn’t hate Tina and feel sorry for her all at the same time. Sorry for Alice, too. God, kid, I thought I told you about my new schedule and then you post when I’m supposed to go to bed.

    6. heythere lastkid, i guess you’re still not a huge tina fan..talk about poo sandwiches..ouch..if this is anything like, as time goes by, then i have a feelin’ tina’s not gonna be cut any slack or catching any breaks!! tina fans beware..its a good thing your writing is superb, its the only thing that would make me forgo this kind of tina-bashing..lol…seriously excellent writing lk!!

    8. Bra-fucking-vo LK!!I always wondered why the entire gang didn’t bat an eyelash at Tina or Henry on the show. Alice would have been the perfect person to speak up. Not only did you upset me with this chapter you got me even more hooked than i was before. Loved IT!!!!

    9. I met IC in person a couple of weeks ago. However the comparison was made sometime after I got back home so I couldn’t tell her that I took offense to you being compared to her. This was definitely an angsty chapter and nowhere close to boring. It’s so weird to see Alice be that angry because I’m so used to her being funny and, as of S3, really lost and sad. But when you’re a certain way for so long, it’s only natural that you’ll lash out at some point and BOY is it gonna hurt on the receiving end. But I liked how in true Alice fashion she used slight humor by blaming her anger on the heat. As for Tina saying she wanted a “normal” life, what in the hell is “normal?” I know what she meant; she wanted something more socially acceptible and less complicated. But like I told my therapist recently, really none of us are normal. Hell, when people say I’m weird, I correct them and say I’m “abnormally normal.” I’ve said too much, so it’s time to end this comment. Regardless of how this story ends, always know that I find your writing to be thought and emotion-provoking, and in a good way at that.

    11. Really enjoying this story. Can’t wait for more. Loved this line– “How about you were just upping the ante – like you always do?” It rings true. Also loved Alice’s “normal” rant.

    12. kid..your writing is just fucking amazing. I hope you have always known that. Even when we gave you crap. : ) I am enjoying your Alice. You have got her down to a Tee. Please post soon

    13. Wow. Ouch. This chapter and all the others have been thought provoking. I am enjoying the dialogue, even though Tina is despicable. Please continue

    14. This is what I’ve been waiting to see in the show, someone calling Tina on the carpet for her behaviour!! Ok, not really lovin this tina, but she’s real, I can see parts of her side. But the bottom line is what alice said in the last page/paragraph…Neither really wanted to make it work, or at least at the same time. those are pretty hard odds to get thru, I’ve seen that happen in real life to people who should be together but aren’t, who should have kids but don’t. There is nothing fictional about your story, only the names anyone anybody can be inserted into this scenario…Ok having said all that, pls I want them to get to a happy place together…pllllllslssseee…or at the very least it will kill me to see Bette in a great happy place with someone named courtney or whatever…I’m a hopeless romantic that will forever hold out for the B/T..so pls, pls be gentle with me regarding that particular facet of your story..Love you Lastkid and thanks for your roadkill…oops I mean story…seriously that was ajoke!!! love it..pls post soon

    15. “She’s goddamn lucky I didn’t press charges. I’m sure she’ll be eternally grateful. She looks lousy in orange.She could be in prison. Think of how fucking colorful our license plates would be.” “Standing ovation, Clapping my hands2 Those lines had me laughing a long time and God i needed it. I wish we could have Courtney right now next to Bette (yes, I remember) This is excellent, and I really odn`t mind long chapter if they are this good. Thank you for sharing this history with us.

    16. Great writing, lastkid. I hate how IC portrays Bette as being so reactive, almost bipolar. The same with Tina.In the finale, Bette talks to Joyce wants to get sole custody. Why didn’t Joyce tell Bette that it was sucky idea and wouldn’t work. Then comes the hug in the hallway. Now they’re lovey-dovey. It’s driving me insane. But your story calms me down. I love to see Tina get a scolding.

    17. you know of course that i’m a loyal tibetter and in my small pathetic way i always thought and think that B&T belong together, no matter what they are going through…and i know it will never change…have said that i want to add that i really enjoyed this chapter…i do hope that things will work out in your story for B&T, even though i don’t know your intentions but i was surprised how easily the girls accepted henry on the show…i don’t mean that they have to ostracize tina but this dialog that alice and tina had was something i wanted to be on a show, that someone could ask tina what the hell is she doing and get some answers…anyway…alice was the perfect person to do it, and it was funny, crazy, sad, heartbreaking at the same time

    18. I have never loved Alice more in my life. S3 Tina sucks…take that any way you wish. Lastkid, another fantastic chapter. Please don’t stay away too long.

    20. I loved it. It was so real. And that is sooo Alice when she is trying to get her point across, not trying to really hurt someone’s feeling, but still letting them know how it is. I sooo, loved her, she is by far my fav. character ever, I love it that she is still real about losing Dana. If Bette was there, I think she wouldn’ve laid it on the line the same (well, harsher) way. You did these character more justice than I.C. herself and they’re suppose to be her babies…(she’s a bad mum)…can’t wait for ye’r next post. Cheers..

    22. Now THAT was one of the most dynamic examples of masterful writing. Perspicacious and engrossing from beginning to end…..Tina isn’t the only one whose world is vanishing as she knows it, so is Alice’s. The loss of Dana is obvious, but she is also losing Tina as she morphs into her new persona and as a by-product, Bette – at least to some degree. That world, the one that included all of them is disappearing…..Alice finding the notes that she wrote to Dana but never gave her is such a wonderful metaphor for lost opportunities for communication. Something that slipped through Tina’s fingers as well…..Tina’s choice is a difficult pill for her to swallow, she’s taking any chance she can get to inquire about Bette, to latch onto what was once her life…..I was enthralled with by the symbolism of Tina playing with her fish. Just like her lunch with Alice. She’s able to pick away and loose small bits of conversation and information that give a momentary peek inside her former life, but no real meat. The core, Alice, stays firm, resolute…..Once again we see Tina looking to blame something or someone for “what happened” to her. Tina is not penitent, she wants absolution and she is looking for Alice to be the arbiter in her plea. She has a fear of accepting that she has created her own fate…..Your portrayal of Alice is impeccable, she is nuanced to perfection! I was rolling on the floor at “they mumbled their words” and then nearly woke the dead laughing at her attempt to pass of head banging as praying and waving at Henry’s purse was divinly inspired…..There is a disconnect between Henry and Tina and he knows it, he is struggling to reign her in with guilt by using Angelica as his weapon…..Tina’s myopic focus on Bette’s wrong doing was pitch perfect. Bette is not the paragon of motherhood, but neither is Tina but Tina only sees the sins as cast outward…..Tina’s entire diatribe about wanting a normal life was her own worse fears coming to life, that it wasn’t happening as she envisioned it…..Her issues with Bette’s infidelity and her need to shun ‘otherness’ and embrace normalcy are convenient excuses to use when you’re not strong enough yourself to admit that you are terrified of history repeating itself – of feeling rejected again if she had made an attempt to reconcile…..Alice is calling her bluff by holding her feet to the fire and accusing her of upping the ante. Go Alice!!…..What I so enjoyed about this chapter, is that the entire conversation has the feel of someone that has drifted out into an open and dangerous ocean; treading water until the under current threatens to pull them under. Someone comes to the rescue, but like most people that are drowning, they fight against the very person that offers them a hand to stay afloat…..Tina’s “What if I’m not” is her life flashing before her eyes, and as she is flailing in her helplessness, she pulls Alice – her only salvation, down with her…..Tina is just beginning to realize that her castigation of Bette has redounded to her disadvantage……Superlative chapter, Kid! Beyond compare. There truly are no words sufficient to express just how amazingly talented you are – bravo!!

    23. OhmyfuckingWOW! Lastkid, the TLW S3 finale sucked on so many levels and angles and shit. But your fic, this post, had me blown and thrown. The thing with happy endings is that it makes everyone happy, whether it’s well-written or not. With drama, if it’s not written well, it JUST SUCKS. You can hand me all the drama you can dish out, screw the happy endings, AND I’LL STILL READ YOUR FIC. Some people can type words, format them, upload them, but hey, YOU CAN WRITE. Don’t ever let anybody tell you otherwise. As for you Tina, Alice has already told you what I wanted to say. And, that there is NO in NORMAL. Thanks, Lastkid. Cheers!

    24. Lastkid – finally a chapter that is not “whitewashing” Tina’s behavior contributing it to Bette’s infidelty. A honest look at the consequences of making haste choices.

    25. Hey welcome back,missed your stories. This is really intense,but excellent. U shouldn’t be compared to IC U can write awesome stories, her not so much. Thanks for takin the time.

    30. Alice rode Tina hard, Alice very seldon get angry, but Tina push her button and Alice pudh back harder. I believe that Bette should get pregnant and have her own child and let Tina go on with her NONAL life with a husband and 2.5 children and a two car driveway/ thanks

    31. great story.. i love this alice!!loving the way she won’t bow down to tina and gives her,in my opinion,what she needs and that’s a bloody good talking to. keep up the great work

    32. WOW!!! That was incredibly hard to read. My stomach was in my throat the entire time…I could feel my anger for what Tina was saying build and build. Oh my God…normal life…she was doing it for Angelica…Jesus this was good!!! Thanks! You must be exhausted after writing this!

    33. Finally someone is honest with Tina and doesn’t spare her feelings!!! Slap the bitch down!! She and her NORMAL family – HA!…Fabulous writing, please post again very soon.

    34. In case I wasn’t clear: not all good writing is pleasant. This wasn’t ‘pleasant’ to read per se, but it was good. Thanks for bringing us the view from The Valley!

    35. That was an absolutly amazeing read…you got this whole scene so right…it was so fuuny in parts..(could it be anything else with Alice!)..And so very sad…It really could be make or break as to weather Tina will be able to call on any of the gang as friends…every again…I love this story…its so honest….Wish Tina could be ..with herself!

    37. I love the honest Al! It’s time for someone to knock some sense in THAT WOMAN’s head!! Great chapter as always! I really don’t see Tina ever try. She’s always running and avoiding. And we love Tina for that?

    42. dam… all i want to do is kiss alice and smack the shit out of tina… oh and castrate henry… i hate the fact they are married… but this is good… give tina some food for thought… please continue…just wish alice would have told tina that bette is going crazy…

    43. I read this one and the previous in one go,i really like your story eventyhough it’s very sad.I hope you have the intension to bring them back together, but that is a long way to go.Yoe must continue as this is the way S4 should go, atleast when you bring B & T back together!

    44. This story really stirs me up. Something I”m sure IC wanted to do but doesn’t have the talent you do to pull it off. I love Alice and I loved her more for telling Tina off. Let Tina have her “normal life”. Seems to me that is her punishment for her actions.

    46. Boy, this was harsh. I feel like I’ve been riding bareback, backwards and sidesaddle, whipped, poked, ridden until I’m foaming and put away wet. …Thank you, Buster the horse, thank you Billy the horse, thank you Lastkid.

    48. Lastkid, wow. You write dislog so perfectly, I can actually hear the inflection as I’m reading it. I am so glad you are posting again. BTW, your chapters can be as long as you please and you’ll never hear a complaint out of me. Please keep writing :)

    49. Hi Lasty, glad you’re back. AS usual, such a nuanced, finely crafted story of she-who-shall-not-be-named! As I have said before, tina views the world completely in terms of how it makes her feel, and her feelings are her world. Remember in season 1 when she said to Bette that Bette used to make her feel safe and loved, and now she doesn’t? Tina has no conception of the impact of her actions on other people, and this is not a character flaw, this is a pathology. It is bad enough for Bette but now tina has a baby, and she is jacking that kid back and forth with “now Bette’s your mother, now she’s not, now she is” depending on how tina feels about Bette and this is just wrong.But you write this journey through this pathological mindset so well, evoking nearly..I said nearly, a bit of sadness for Tina, as I truly think she can’t help it..the empathy just isn’t there. As far as Alice goes, if I were Bette I wouldn’t want to see her. alice is all, ” I don’t want to take sides” as she continues to see Tina, knowing what Bette is going through, but when Bette had screwed up, Alice couldn’t wait to take sides. Bette needs true friends and real support and love…courtney… are you there? Write more soon lasty! A FAN

    51. This chapter was so on point. The whole concept of Tina as being innocent in this sordid love affair is mind-blowing. She asked for this ‘normal’ life and then she wants everyone to make her feel good and invited in the same circles. It just doesn’t work that way… and for Alice to tell her the truth, for once, was awesome. In S1- Bette cheated; S2- Tina ‘cheats’ with Helena and then sleeps with Bette, goes back to Helena and then decides she wants to have the baby in their home; S3- Tina is super bitch; fucks a man in the ‘net, next to her wife, almost fucks a guy in Canada and then finally fucks him in Bette’s home. And she still wants sympathy and to feel apart of the gang? Its like ‘Annie get your gun’… anything u can do, I can do better. I love Bette and Tina and what a shame that IC is screwed up in her life that she takes a show, designed for lesbians, and turns into Young & the Restless. Drama and angst work, to a point and I will not be buying this season and sad to say, I will not be watching S4. Awesome story… can’t wait to see where this goes!

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