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    Tina, Tiny Pieces Chapter 5.3

    Story written on April 5, 2006 by lastkid.
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    The Chicken Dance, Part III

    Hmmmm?  Oh.  A toast.

     

    Helena smiles warmly.

     

    To friendship.

     

    They clink glasses, they murmur to friendship.  Helena smiles at Bette.  Bette smiles tentatively back.  Alice peeks over the rim of her margarita at Shane, tipping her head towards Bette.  Shane rolls her eyes.  Jenny smiles dreamily at nothing.  Max sits, his legs spread far apart.  He hitches up his pantleg, he takes another pull off the longneck beer, he shifts and resettles in his chair.

     

    Bette lifts hers again, she looks pointedly at Alice, a small smile tugging at the corners of her mouth.

     

    To growing old graciously.

     

    You mean gracefully.

     

    No, Alice, trust me, I meant graciously.

     

    They laugh, except Max.  They talk.

     

    So Bette, how’s the show going?

     

    Incredibly complex, for a student showing.  There are so many talented students, so much depth, so much richness among the entries.  I feel fortunate to have such incredible work to choose from, but its tough to choose. 

     

    The waitress brings another round.  Alice raises her glass.

     

    To lawyers!

     

    They all hesitantly raise their glasses.  Bette and Shane look quizzically at Alice.  She takes a long swallow and sets her glass down.

     

    I have an appointment with Dana’s lawyers this week.

     

    What for, Alice?

     

    I don’t know yet.  I’m getting a little nervous.

     

    Why?

     

    What if they want to sue me?

     

    Her lawyers?

     

    No, her parents.

     

    For what?  What could her parents sue you for?

     

    I don’t know Shane.  Maybe they think I made her sicker or something.  I’m sure they think I made her gay.

     

    Oh come on, Alice.  They’re kinda uptight, but they’re not insane.

     

    Maybe it’s something to do with her estate, Alice.

     

    Estate?

     

    Yes, estate.  She was a professional tennis player.  She had endorsement contracts.  She owned a condo, she had assets, probably some significant ones.  What did the attorneys tell you?

     

    Alice cocks her head at Bette, quizzically.  Then she grins quickly, sheepishly.

     

    Um.  I don’t know.  I’ve kind of been avoiding them.

     

    Why?

     

    Cause I thought maybe if they couldn’t, you know, find me, then maybe they wouldn’t sue me.

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    1. It’s 4:30 in the morning, just finished some work I had to get out by dawn, and thought I’d check for updates. Now, I can’t stop giggling in that too-exhausted insane fashion, hoping the various nosy neighbors won’t report me to the fun police for disturbing the peace. This was GREAT … very well written. Thanks. More. More Tiny Pieces. Tiny Tiny pieces.

    3. Wow, that’s so funny. “Cause I thought maybe if they couldn’t find me, then maybe they wouldn’t sue me.” So, funny…so, Alice…great post. Cheers.

    4. i like that the girls hung out together, but it feels like they are all recovering from something and nobody is really happy…is tina heading for cream too?

    9. Oh I really enjoyed this chapter and the banter between these ladies. You’ve recreated them all so well, I could hear all of this dialogue coming out of their mouths. If only. . . unfortunately, IC is not cooperating. We only wish for a story this good.

    13. Once again this story is rich in symbolism. The scars are still visible on the walls of Bette’s house, just like the scars on her heart. The damage has not yet been fully repaired and when probed, it bubbles back – sensitive to anything that disturbs its fragile nature……Alice taking refuge in Bette, in someone that feels pain as deeply as she does. Their friendship offers a soothing balm to the abyss that has been created in their hearts by their respective losses……Your description of Max makes it easy for me to see him in my minds eye, his gestures and actions. The way he rearranges himself, it’s as if he is rearranging himself not just physically, but mentally as well. Is his pathos a result of injected hormones, simple ideals or his growing annoyance with Jenny? Jenny still remains the center of her own universe……I loved the banter of the group, you so effectively capture the nature of their friendship and the growing pains that are taking place now that Helena is being included. So much history with each and every one of them and they are all inextricably linked in some way……Excellnet chapter – once again.

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