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Tipping Point – Chapter 4
“Yes”
“What hotel?”
“I’m not sure.” Bette replied as she tried to understand the significance of Tina’s hotel choice to Shane, “The Mandarin Oriental or the Regal I think.”
“Which one?” Shane barked as she stopped pacing and glared at Bette.
“I don’t know, it’s on the fridge.” Bette responded, a little taken aback with Shane’s aggressive questioning.
Bette watched as the lanky brunette raced to the kitchen and studied the itinerary that was pinned to the fridge with an ‘I heart NY’ magnet they had bought years back.
“Fuck” Shane whispered as she ran a hand through her dishevelled hair.
“Shane, what the hell is going on?” Bette demanded, Shane was not one for theatrics and this behaviour was unsettling to say the least.
Shane offered no explanation instead she marched back into the living room and picked up the TV remote, studying it. “How the fuck do you turn this thing on?”
Bette took the remote, pointed it at the screen which came to life.
“CNN” Shane muttered as she wrapped her arms around her body.
Bette duly changed the channel and was confronted by the image of a building and the subtitle, that read “Terrorist attack in Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia”.
The journalist spoke but Bette only heard sound bites, terrorists had taken hold of the Regal hotel, the number of hostages or dead were unknown at this stage.
“It’s Tina’s hotel” Shane whispered. Bette’s eyes never left the screen as she tried to comprehend what she was seeing. In disbelief she walked back to the kitchen to consult the itinerary Tina had left on the fridge door. The hotel name was printed in black and white, Bette inhaled sharply. Pacing back into the living room she retrieved her cell phone from the coffee table, the small screen flashed to life but there were no missed calls or unread text messages. She immediately pulled up Tina’s cell number and hit the call button.
“Pick up, Tina” She whispered as she walked to the front door and surveyed their quiet street. Her heart beat heavily as the unanswered call went through to voicemail. “T, please call me back as soon as you get this, immediately. I love you.” Ending the call, Bette shoved the phone into the front pocket of her jeans and turned her attention back to the television.
Bette couldn’t remember the order of anything from that point on. It was a blur of phone calls to handle the logistics, book a flight, have Kit collect Angie, get to the airport. Three hours later Bette sat at an airport bar scouring the TV screen on the wall for any sign of Tina, hoping for a glimpse, just enough to let her know her wife was safe. In her heart, Bette knew Tina was in that building. A fresh volley of gun fire thudded though the speakers, Bette closed her eyes and swallowed the bile in the back of her throat. She took a couple of deep breaths to try and slow her heart rate, she reminded herself that Tina was smart, resourceful. The hardest part was not knowing what she’d find when she reached her destination.
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(2 votes, average: 4.50 out of 5)
I am in a panic as is Bette. Is Tina okay or has she died in this inhuman terrorist attack?
Glad you’re back. This story is very exciting.
Thank you for posting. Just so intriguing. Thank you.
I know it’s fiction, but touch wood, malaysia has had no incidence of terrorist attack, and there’s no Regal hotel in Kuala Lumpur too. There IS a Mandarin Oriental though…:)
Glad your back. I really liked the beginning and look forward to more… soon please.
Great to see another chapter of this very interesting story. Thanks for posting.
So good to see you back. Waiting eagerly for updates, as and when you can.
I somehow missed the last chapter. This is very different, so painful but so well written. PPS!
I can’t imagine what Tina is going through, but I am hoping that if this happened to me that I would rather be a live mother and wife than a dead victim. Bette was right, the shooters were trained animals bent on killing everyone and anything in their path. Tina wouldn’t have been a hero…just a dead victim like all the rest. This is a very painful story, but very VERY well written. Thank you!
Glad you are back.PPS.
Holy hell, not a good development
Another extraordinary post. Thank you for sharing.
The tension, both present and past, is palpable. Always glad to see a post from you, HG. Thanks