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    To Die Standing Chptr. 23

    Story written on April 9, 2014 by nettababy03.
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    The soft intrusive beeping roused Bette from her sleep. She pressed the button softly careful not to wake Tina from her slumber, not too long ago she’d just gotten to sleep. Tina’s occasional snores were muffled into her pillow as she began to stir from the warmth lost against her back. Bette smirked as she

    The soft intrusive beeping roused Bette from her sleep. She pressed the button softly careful not to wake Tina from her slumber, not too long ago she’d just gotten to sleep. Tina’s occasional snores were muffled into her pillow as she began to stir from the warmth lost against her back. Bette smirked as she swung her legs over the edge of the bed and began to rub the part of her head that was still throbbing. Her shoulder was sore and stinging still, but she didn’t mind it, not at all.

    “Why are you always leaving my bed so damn early?” Tina asked not bothering to turn around she could tell Bette was already partially out of the bed. She’d had only opened her eyes a moment ago, when a chill fully woke her up.

    Bette smiled and laughed a little as she turned back to look at Tina before she answered. Tina had just turned around to catch a look at her face. The light in the hallway was dim and shone through the door right onto Tina’s face, Tina could only see into the cascading silhouette of Bette.

    “My hair hurts.” Tina laughed because she’d gotten lost in herself when she and Bette made love last night.
    “I’ll bet, do you don’t want me to apologize for that?” Tina smiled with her cheek into her palm, Bette shook her head with a small chuckle of her own.

    “I have to be at the hospital in an hour.” Bette huffed and dropped her shoulders as she looked towards the creeping hallway light on the floor of Tina’s bedroom. She felt the shift of the bed and anticipated the touch that was inevitable. The first was a wiggle of Tina’s toes under her hand, Bette gripped her foot and lost it when Tina began to slide closer to her. Bette’s fingers gently glided up her leg, stopping once Tina’s knee fell on top of hers. Tina’s thigh rested easy on top of Bette’s, she began to rake her nails tenderly up and down Tina’s sinuous muscle.

    “This one looks like it’s going to turn into a bruise.” Tina leaned over Bette bending her back a bit to get a better look. She kissed the spot on top of Bette’s shoulder where she bit down on her once the culmination of it all finally hit, Bette continued to work her over, constantly reminding her to keep quiet or she was going to wake the baby. In her effort to muzzle the involuntary screams escaping her, Tina bit onto Bette’s shoulder, which only made Bette drive into her a little bit deeper.

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    3. I’ve had to go back and reread some of this, and I’m so glad I did. I’m glad you’re posting again and hope you keep the chapters coming. I love the time and insight you put into it. Bette is very complex and I’m enjoying your take on her thoughts, etc. Can’t wait for her to join Tina and Angie. Thx again! PPS

    4. Bette in cowboy boots?I think Tina is in for a wild ride. Trust is a hard thing when your family life has been unsettled. I think that Bette will let Angie and Tina teach her to love without restrictions. PPS

    5. Nice story, well told! I wanted you to know that the page formatting made the text on the page very crowded. I know could read it better and absorb the moods you are writing if I could see it better. When you have time I know it would help me. Blackbird

    7. So happy you are still keeping this story alive I adore your writing. Feels like missing an old friendfor too long but I am thrilled to hear from you nonetheless. Big fan of yours and only encourage more when you can. Thanks!!!

    8. I have read all your stories on this site and really appreciate your writing style. This story has been a while in the making if I read the post dates correctly. I love that you are working through the complexity of the characters and how they are discussing their issues with each other. That communication is so important in a relationship. Thank you for continuing the story and I can’t wait to see how this trip to Montana turns out.

    10. What a shame that this very nice story was not completed.

      Good strong characters and an interesting storyline.

      I would have loved to hear about Bette and Tina and Angie in Montana and how Tina’s in law’s treated Bette.

    13. Ah, come on.

      Where’s “the rest of the story”?

      23 chapters to develop the characters in preparation for meeting the family of origin of “Rick”. And, then stop! REALLY?

      Please finish the story.

      Thanks

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