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TO FORGET part 11
On Alice Car
(Lara was blindfolded and Alice was driving)
Alice: you look beautiful
Lara: thank you… can I take this thing off please? (at that precise minute Alice pulled up)
Alice: yes we’re here (Lara took off the handkerchief)
Lara: OMG!!! ALI CE! Eins? How did you get reservations? (they got out of the car)
Alice: I got my ways
Lara: I love you (they kiss)
Alice: I love you to that’s why I brought you here
Lara: thank you (she said taking Alice hand)
Alice: lets go in (and they went in)
At Shane’s, Carmen’s and Sean’s ….LOL
Carmen: ok here is how is going to go. This box contains 15 papers. 5 with each name we wanted. Joshua, Alexander and Shey
Shane: Shay?
Carmen: Sean didn’t want Jimmy anymore (Sean smiled at Shane)
Shane: ok
Carmen: ok let’s do it
Sean: wait… how do I know that in there are not 15 papers with the name Joshua?
Shane: yea…
Carmen: you guys dont trust me?
Sean: no
Shane: I trust you … but in this case … no (Carmen looked offended)
Carmen: …fine… look (She said opening the box and taking out the little papers. When Sean and Shane were satisfied they continued)
Sean: ok lets do it (They put the papers back in)
Carmen: ok so I take one then Shane and then Sean.
Shane: why do you have to go first?
Carmen: Shane!!!…..I invented the game so yea me first
Shane: ok
Sean: wait why Shane second?
Shane: because….. Because I’m her girlfriend
Sean: don’t care….rock, papers, scissors is the only way
Shane: ok (they said putting there hands together)
Carmen: I can’t believe you guys
Sean and Shane: rock!! Paper!! Scissors!! (Shane had a paper and Sean a scissor)
Sean: yes!!
Carmen: let’s get this over with. We take out 3 papers, one each. And that’s his firs name (Carmen took one paper) Alexander…
Shane: ja ja yes!!. You’re turn Sean
Sean: ok (he took one) Joshua… Fuck. Ok so what if Shane takes out one with Shay?
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Dude, I fuckin’ love this . . . if you stop now, I will be so pissed, I wouldn’t know what to do!!!! This story is sooooo fuckin’ awesome, ya’ gotta’ continue . . . . Just know that I, the one and only Stank, love this story!!!! Anyways, like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!!! WoOt!!!!
I pinched my self I,m alive that hurt. I love this just can’t comment all the time post soon. thanks
Oh, and don’t you dare stop writing! Don’t you dare! The story is cute (Sharmen with a baby! Yesss!), and it has the potential to go anywhere. Even if you just write about them hanging out in the living room, it’s still cute (because Sharmen with a baby is adorable!) So, yeah, don’t stop. And if you’re unsure about your writing (you mentioned the spelling), the best way to improve is to keep writing. I’ve said it once, and I’ll say it again: Practice makes perfect. If you want, get a beta reader to give you pointers and help with grammar, spelling, or whatever. They might even help with ideas about where to take your story. Next thing you know, you’re a superstar of an author. I totally have faith in you. Don’t stop writing! :)
Joseph Alexander, very good name. I don’t think they needed another person with a similar name to Sean and Shane. . . too confusing. LOL! And I wonder how Aubrey and Carmen know each other. Will Carmen hook Sean up, or will we find out that Sean was barking up the wrong tree this whole time? Hmm, I guess we’ll find that out later won’t we? :D I really liked the update; it’s super cute. Can’t wait for the next one.