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TO FORGET part 13
(Shane was outside on the front stairs of the house waiting for Sean. Carmen came from Beth’s and sat down next to Shane)
Carmen: everyone is gone now…they are going to take a ride around town to look for him
Shane: they are not going to find him
Carmen: look..
Shane: it’s my fault
Carmen: honey don’t do this
Shane: it is… when we were younger …16 , 15, don’t remember… he was my little brother I had to take care of him… We needed money… so I got in the business… I didn’t want him to do it, but… he did what ever I did… we were getting hi all the time … drunk … we did everything… from X to marijuana you name it… I had a problem I know but I new how to control myself… he didn’t… after I don’t now how many years.. we got help and we stopped….if I just…I should have known… I’ve been so distracted… with work, the baby, you and I forgot about him
Carmen: Baby don’t blame you’reself ok …. He was alright… till this morning I can assure you he wasn’t taking anything
Shane: I know… but now his not going to stop… I know him…he said (a tear escaped her ayes) … he said that bad habits never go away… that… Dad was right (she looked at Carmen she was now crying) that some people never change (Carmen knew she was not talking about Sean anymore)
Carmen: But some do…you did Shane… you did and you’re happy… we are happy…
Shane: yea…(she laugh) in that case we’re going to have to find a girl for Sean if we want him to change (they laugh)
Carmen: yes we do
Shane: but… not just a pretty girl…the right girl … the one he couldn’t live with out. His soul mate… Maybe some Latin girl (Carmen smiled) funny, sweet, very hot even when she’s pregnant… but then again there is only one girl like that…
Carmen: oh really?
Shane: yea …she lives a couple of blocks from here (Carmen laughed and punch Shane. They looked at each other for like a minute)
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Holy shit!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY, BABY-GYRL!!!!! I wish I could send ya’ a gift . . . cause you shol’ make dis’ tomboy estatic everytime you update!!! Just kno dat I’m in love wit’cha, Baby-girl . . . and I’m in love wit ANYTHING you write!!!! ROLMFAO!!!! Well, ya’ doin’ a fan-fuckin-tastic jobe, babe . . . keep it up and if ya’ can, by it bein’ ya’ b-day and all, maybe try to update . . . it would really make me smile . . . and I got a sexy smile ~wink~ WooooooT!!! Okay, so, before I start to ramble, I hope you have the best fuckin’ birthday a chick can have . . . Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!!
HHHHHHappy BBBBBBirthday… love this story.. great update and as always please update soon..
Tomorrow is mi girlfriend’s birthday too. Love you Arely!!! So, happy birthday!!! to you and her… your story is really cool, don´t like Carmen being pregnant by Shane´s brother though.. but it´s ok.
Nice update for a very nice story. I am looking forward for the next episode. Happy Birthday to you.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY. THANK FOR POSTING