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To Live Without You (Chapter 16)
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Sorry guys you’ll notice there are no responses to the comments and that’s not because I didn’t write them but because I wrote them and lost them…twice so just to recap the general theme I’m really sorry for not posting on this story for so long I’ve had the writer’s block where this story is concerned so I’ve been throwing myself into Apogee. Hopefully I’m back now if not I will let you know. Thanks for all the support especially now in my time of need lol
ClosetDana
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Previously:
"Dana…we should talk about–" The athlete attacked Alice’s mouth forcing her tongue intensely into the writer’s mouth, biting her lip and holding onto her waist tightly, never making a move for more. Alice kissed her back, pulling Dana’s neck forward and rocking forward, that sexy maneuver that the athlete missed that no one else did. Tongues played for several minutes, the writer’s lips becoming swollen at Dana’s assault. It wasn’t until Alice let out a long languid moan that either of them froze, lips still lock to move away. Alice was the first to pull out of Dana’s arms moving into the main shopping area and taking a seat on a nearby bench Dana quickly joining her but giving four feet of space to prevent any other mishaps.
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"What are we going to do Dane? It’s like we can’t be in the same room alone anymore." The athlete shook her head,
"What do you want from me Al? You know what I want, I thought I made that very clear…more than once." Alice looked at her seriously,
"That’s not funny Dana, I’m with Cliff." The athlete scoffed leaning back and staring at the crowds of people walking through the mall,
"Oh right Heathcliff…what the fuck kinda name is Heathcliff? It’s a fucking cartoon cat." The writer’s face pulled into a frown,
"Stop it Dana, Cliff he’s…fuck I’m not going to talk to you about this." Alice stood up and Dana followed, treading slowly next to the writer,
"Ok ok I’m sorry about the cat comment, it was uncalled for…It just drives me crazy that you’re with him is all," Alice stopped and Dana walked on for a bit, stopping when she saw the writer wasn’t with her. They stood a few feet apart staring at each other, a surprised look on Alice’s face.
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Oh my gosh! That was an absolutely amazing chapter! I loved it. I was so excited to see that you had updated this, and believe me…I was not disappointed. It was so emotional. I can’t stop grinning right now. Awesome! I can’t wait for more. I’m sure that whatever you come up with will be excellent. Danish rocks! Keep up the great writing.
yay i had to do a double take to finally see that it was your great story that was posted! :) awesome chap hooray for the danish love! i agree with e1 here you have Alice and Dana down packed in both of your stories :)
That was amazing ClosetDana. You know that this is my favorite story of your’s. I loved the heartfelt words conveyed by both Alice and Dana. It was all so emotional and left me wanting to see them together already… but I’m sure you have plans for that. I love everything you write but you know that. I’m happy that Shane confessed to erasing that message maybe that will make Alice’s decision a little easier. There is no stopping fate when two people are meant to be together. Great chapter.. two thumbs up!
I’m glad you were able to get past your writers’ block. I’ve been waiting to see how you would handle the Shane/message situation. Poor Cliff…
See, now THAT is how season 3 should have went. You write Danish so well in both your stories, and I literally did a little dance of joy when I saw that you updated this story. It is one of my favorite Danish stories, and you totally nailed this chapter! I smiled like an idiot, I teared up, I gripped the edge of my seat in suspense, and my jaw dropped when I realized that the chapter was over! I hope that you can get over your writer’s block and figure out where to go, because I will be anxiously waiting for another update! Excellent job!
Thanks for the update. It was a great post even with the writer’s block :) I would love to see Dana compete with Cliff for Alice’s heart. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I agree with poopy, see Ilene this is how S3 should have been written, take notes for season 4! I love this story you gotta continue it, pretty please :)
can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon I love this story great update
hey nice update – long time coming! It was really great.
Good chapter ClosetDana =)
Glad to see you’re back on track (at least for now). As much as I love to have those two back together, it’s a good thing they had that talk (damn consciousness ;)). They have so much to figure out, so much has happened between the two of them. It’s something too big to shove off, they will probably end the same way as the first time they got together if they would do that. Can Alice risk it to loose herself all over again, are her insecurities finally dealt with? And Dana, won’t she run away for her feelings when everything gets intense again? Or will her indecisiveness come back? Did you already figure out which direction you are going to take it? I hope that your writer’s block will dissapear in time. Keep writing a sentence a day, it surely worked for this chapter. :D
Great update – and worth waiting for, but please continue with your other story as well.
I love this fic so much. It’s so well written and I love the tension. Keep posting! I am on the edge of my seat. CLiff is nice…but he definitely has to go ;) Can’t wait for your update!