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To Live Without You (Chapter 22)
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Hey guys yet another chapter special thanks to brteyes and suzieb_33 who asked me to add in a little something special for you. Hope you enjoy…oh right and I’m taking a poll:
Which is your favorite episode from season 2?
Thanks for the help it’s for a potential project so let me know.
Much Love,
ClosetDana
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“I’m horny as hell Vic, and I’m not sure but I think Alice is trying to seduce me.” Dana leaned with her back against the wall peeking into the living room where Alice sat intently watching television and eating a bowl of ice cream.
“Well what is she doing?” Vic lay beside Gena who was in a deep sleep, Victoria gently kissed the top of the doctor’s head and made her way to the living room giving Gena peace and quiet to sleep.
“She’s eating ice cream…she’s licking and swirling her tongue and doing little ‘mmmm’ sounds.” Dana whispered frantically, after the mishap at the club a few weeks ago Alice and Dana had decided not to tempt the spirit by going to the club with their friends. Not that they couldn’t go without drinking it was really that neither one of them enjoyed hanging out with a bunch of drunks then driving them home every other night. Alice suggested a movie night and the athlete agreed, bringing over a large carton of Alice’s favorite ice cream and two Jim Carrey movies, also their favorite.
“Oh my God, is she licking ice cream off of a cone? Yeah she might be trying to…” Victoria started, the athlete interjecting quickly.
“Wellllll, actually no she’s eating it out of a bowl.” Dana conceded, peeking again to Alice who sat in the living room, and continued to eat her bowl of coffee ice cream, oblivious to the athlete’s gaze. The writer accidentally dripped a little ice cream down her blouse and pulled it down a bit to wipe off the sticky treat. Dana gasped into the phone,
“What! Is she looking at you while she’s eating it or something?” Victoria asked switching ears and making her way to the refrigerator, the double’s partner pulled out a small container of strawberries and flopped on the couch waiting for Dana to answer her.
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awesoooooooooooooooome post CD i gotta say vic’s line “It sounds like she’s just eating a bowl of fucking ice cream Dana” just had me rolling i guess it was picturing dana freaking out in the next room and Alice with the ice cream lol great stuff but the one that topped it for me was Dana trying to think of other things then Alice and her suductive ways lmao you rock as for the last line of the chap genius keep up the fab work plz and post sooon xx oh and as for the fav ep i think hard to pick but randomly id say the Loneliest Number ep 3 good ep mostly becuz of the danish-ness obviously lol
Oh baby! I can’t tell you what this story does to me and the direction you’re taking it. I’m aching… in more ways then one.. to know what you have planned. Loved the convo with Vic and Dana’s runaway imagination… the ice cream bit was priceless. I think Dana should’ve taken Vic’s advice and just fucked her, lol. But look who you’re talking to… no self-control. I don’t think Dana’s tactics are working for getting her mind off sex… will she take matters into her own hands? lol Dana was playing dirty by coming on to Alice before she left, but even that backfired on herself. I can’t wait to see what Alice will do in retaliation, lol. Love the Vic/Gena scene… I feel the connection that they have. *sigh* this story make me think of you…I love you sugar, so much! I’ll be waiting for my next snippet… beg if I have to.
Ya big tease…but I was LMFAO! I’d like to suggest that losing the challenge is actually a win-win proposition. And really, they should go down together, so to speak!
u made me smile the whole time!!
And it’s on! Heck yeah. I can’t wait to see what this little game of seduction has in store for us. Excellent update. I got all giddy when I saw the update. I said “no way! Woo hoo!” I really loved it. I think you captured Dana and her crazy antics so well in this update. Everything from her expressions to her thoughts to her actions to her dialogue were spot on. Great job! I really enjoyed it. Please post soon. I love this fic. Oh…my favorite season 2 episode? Um…that’s actually really tough to figure out. There are many of them that I like alot. Some I like for certain things that happen in them. 2×06 “Lagrimas de Oro” for the “suprise” scene, and the “footsie” scene. Labyrinth was good cause, well that one’s obvious. Um… I guess if I had to pick a favorite I would choose “Luminous” Danish bliss!
LOL.. some extremely funny lines CD!..and NOW i think its getting hotter! On one hand i wish Dana WOULD just f*ck Alice[simple right?] but on the other, the challenge is THE best idea and this is what is making it “very sexy” for me!![not as simple]. The brain is one of the best erogenous zones there is…and Alices mental thoughts and last comments should make anybody go weak…cos it did me!!! Your writing just gets better, with more depth of the characters… keep it going and please post soon cos i love this story!! Thanks.
Oh and fav episode from S2…I loved the early build up ones with all the “tension” but the best for me was ep 7 Luminous.. so much Danish and they looked so in love, sigh!
The first part had me laughing out loud! I read this before I went to work and somehow the bad moon I’m always in in the morning had dissapeared. My colleagues are probably in debt with you. ;) I can’t wait for the bet to end! I mean this chapter was already great…what will the next chapter bring?
Just.. amazing as always. You always leave wanting more and more of this story. I like where it’s going… but of course I do. :D More please!!
Yes, this story is STILL amazing, and this chapter was fucking awesome. I was laughing my ass off! Then I was hating you for stopping it there. Hey, at least you didnt add “Can I kiss you?” He he. Seriously CD, you need to update more, because it makes me extrememly happy, and I need that right now! This is the sick, horny, confused about a girl when I shouldnt be third of suzieshitinthecloset signing out. Damn it all!
Oh Yes this was really good. Sorry I wont participate myself in the challenge. Just to f*cking hard..;-)) I like horny Dana please give more. Fav Ep would be Luminous…and Land Ahoy but that’s mostly because of the commentary. Look forward to reading more please post soon.
Sorry, this is my first time I’m leaving a comment on your story. I read also the previous ones and I love this one! My favorite episode on season 2 is “Land Ahoy”. Keep it goin’:-)
Great! Love It! I am wondering who will lose or win the bette! But the teasing and tempting is great!
I love it they are so good together that they just don’t see it like everyone else does please post soon can’t wait to see what will happen next great update
Have I mentioned how much I love this damn fic? And no, depriving me from sleep is not an excuse to keep you from updating this story on a regular basis … that’s so not a part of the deal. More Please!
Ok. Ok. So…I realize that I haven’t updated for a bit…but you know that I have been quite busy lately…and yes I agree that these are really pointless because I talk to you a bajillion times a day. lol. BUT…that being said, how could i not leave a comment when you so kindly added that little dash of Danish make-out for me? HOW? It is only fair that I spend a few minutes gushing over the hilarity of the whole ice cream bit and then the spectacular making out scene…in the words of our Paris Hilton like friend…that was hot! So yeah. this didn’t suck I guess…good for you…but I still think you’re a micth. And shut up about my occasional drink, already! Sheesh. A drink here and there and there and there never hurt anybody! And don’t act like you don’t love it! I am absolutely hilarious when I am intoxicated and you know it! So eat that doody head! You can take your damn chapter and all of it’s greatness and shove it up your (_*_)…LMFAO. I know your laughing right now so quit acting like you aren’t. Seriously though babe, this kicked tons and tons of ass. I can’t wait for the next and I am expecting a scene in there as well. DON’T LET ME DOWN!!! The sassy, sophisticated, smokin’ hot, what can I say the ladies love me 1/3 of suzieshitinthecloset, the new AlShaDane…flipping you off with nothing but love and respect!
Bring the mind games on!
It just get’s better and better, the story, the writing. You make it so easy to picture them saying these things. Can’t wait for the next installment.
sweet. i love this story and the angle you’re taking it right now is just perfect i think. keep it up. and please be quick with another post!