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To Live Without You (Chapter 23)
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Hey guys a new chapter for you, I know it’s been a while but I’m trying I swear! lol If you want to place the blame on someone place it on Suzieb_33 or Poopy-Sh*t I mean they haven’t posted in months or something. Special thanks to a woman who knows how much I love her, hit me with a comment, let me know how it’s going.
Much Love,
ClosetDana
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Dana woke up to the smell of coffee brewing in the kitchen thinking that the moment she was in felt very similar to a Folgers coffee commercial. The athlete stretched and made her way to the kitchen grabbing the automatically brewed coffeepot and absently opening a cabinet for a cup.
“Fuckin SHIT!” Dana screamed jumping back and dropping the ceramic mug, the cup shattering on the floor. The athlete stared in the cabinet with disgust as bugs ran over everything; Dana shivered with a brief moment of nausea then ran for the phone.
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“Well I’m not sure Miss Fairbanks, these aren’t normal termites, I mean, they might not even be termites at all. Have you had anything from like a foreign country shipped here? Fruits, vegetables, crates, anything that could contain bugs? A worker from the extermination company checked a list from his clipboard as they walked around Dana’s house,
“I don’t know, I mean I travel a lot but I haven’t done any traveling out of the country in almost a year. Even then I only brought my suitcase, no fruits or…vegetables.” The athlete explained dumbfounded as the exterminator circled the house and checked the soil,
“Well it could have been months before you noticed them, as many as I’ve seen in your house and out here I’d say about six to twelve months. The only reason I ask is because if we can cut it down to a country, it would be easier to get rid of them.” The exterminator said examining more random things around the house, Dana sat on the back steps with her face twisted in disgust as the bugs made a single file line directly into her house.
“Motherfucker!” The athlete heard Alice scream and the front door slam; Dana ran around to the front yard to watch the writer phobically wipe her arms and shoulders. The athlete chuckled to herself as she walked behind Alice waiting for the writer to finish her episode. Alice shivered again then turned around slowly,
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This just keeps getting better and better! I never know what’s gonna happen, you gotta keep posting and not leave it so long cause it’s realyl amazing :D xx
Oh my God! I don’t even know what to say. That is really a first for me. I can’t even type. I think I just had to retype every single word that I just typed. Um…I don’t think that made sense. I’m a little delirious. That was..that was…wow. Okay…hold on, and let me breathe for a second. Then I’ll try to type again. Okay. It’s 15 minutes later, but I’m back. I think I’m good now. You probably think that I’m really freakin’ weird right now, and I apologize. Awesome update! I’m hoping this doesn’t lead to some type of setback for Dana and Alice. I’m hoping it’s more of a step forward. I can dream, can’t I? Have I ever mentioned that I love your work? This chapter was phenomenal, and I really can’t wait to see what’s going to happen. I believe you have just received the crown for…um…”My favorite Danish Fanfic Scene!” :) I’m starting to weird myself out now. I think I’m off the rocker, and need medication. Excuse me while I go call early season 3 Alice. Great job!
hmmm – wasn’t that against the rules? good thing you love us… lol
your back now post the other story and make it longer lol
FUCK YEAH!!! Hell the fuck yeah! You know how much I love this chap (wink wink) so I am just gonna say well done and leave it at that…well the fuck done, my gifted partner in crime. lol. Seriously. This kicked ass…and lots of it. I love you babe. Way to go. And tell Alice to quit crying already and enjoy her little romp with “the gay lady.” The super fucking hot, tall, sassy, super humanly gifted 1/3 of suzieshitinthecloset… long live the new AlShaDane!
Holy crap that was hot. Like really insanely super hot. Um…yeah. That’s pretty much all I can come up with right now, my brain is melted from all the hotness I just read.
Working the bugs out in your story? lol I love the direction you took to get Dana to move in with Alice. And with the challenge it made it so full of sexual tension. I loved Alice’s comment “colonies of insects swarming through your house….and also a large hairy man” lol. I love the idea of a gay prom at the planet and can’t wait to see what you have planned for that. I love the little teases you planned… leading up to the hot stuff. And damn that was smoking. My computer was about to melt from the heat… but so am I. I like their idea of twisted rules for the game. So what inspired you to write such heat? Care to play a game? That was great, sugar. I can’t wait for the next awesome chapter… hopefully a snippet for your’s truly? I love you!
fuckin rocked
Please let them be happy tears, I’m glad you’re here tears, I broke up with cliff tears…I liked the bed bugs which made Dana move in with Alice, and nice set up for the gay prom!! Short but sweet….more please!
god I love it but alice needs to tell dana why she was crying please post soon can’t wait to find out what happens great update
This story just keeps getting better and better. I knew something would happen when Alice said Dana could stay with her and I really hope that things can only get better from here… right? Right? Please…
Awesome – you just get better and better. As most of the comments have already said, they have got to be happy tears, and they must keep bending the rules. Please post again soon.
Hey CD,sorry i havent posted before but i sure have been reading and i want to say your doing on hell of a job writing this story !!!1 Great update and PPS
Wow now that was HOT,jeeez that was some serious teasing goin on there… and that is “totally against the rules” lol. I hope that they didnt overstep the mark and go too far? Loved the bugs scene in Danas house and the gay prom sounds promising! Great chapter and keep goin, thanks.
Whoa, that was some serious heat! They’re happy tears, right? RIGHT? Post soon…it’d be too cruel to leave us hanging like this.
: faints : THATS ALL I CAN DO hot damn this chap was on fire lol but.. could u post the REST? i hope Alice doesnt push Dana away if she does the termites might eat her dun dun dun! lol great job CD keep it coming!x0x0
Great! I really hope they are happy tears…Dana can’t leave…Very Hot!!So much for Rules!!! Post Soon!
Loved the update. :D They can set their own rules with this little bet they have going on. Yay! :P And btw,what comes out of it when they don’t make it. Is pride the the only reason they strive for with this bet? And what if they’re both caving (like what happened in this chapter), who is the loser then? I was wondering if Cliff had dissapeared, but he’s still somewhere around and officialy Alice’s boyfriend? Uh oh… Btw, I do hope they were happy tears coming from Alice. ;)