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To the Moon and Back – chapter 25
Bette didn’t want Tina any where near Helena. “I don’t think that’s a good idea. The moment she has you alone she’s going to take advantage of that. You hold her in such high regard as if she’s not a tyrant. Why is that T? Do you still have feelings for her?” The moment those last words escaped Bette’s mouth she regretted saying them.
Tina didn’t know the answer to that. She thought that gathering her things from Helena’s place would be the closure she needed. Apparently it wasn’t. She felt torn. She knew she was madly in love with Bette but Bette was being so judgmental of Helena that she was wondering if she was in fact over the woman who made her feel special after the affair. Tina’s silence was deafening.
Bette closed her eyes and sharply inhaled as she clutched the steering wheel so tightly that her knuckles turned white. She put the car into drive and took off. Her foot was firmly pressing on the pedal and the speedometer was increasing with each second. The blue Saab was flying down residential streets over 50 mph, and Tina felt scared.
“Bette, aren’t you going a little fast?” She said barely above a whisper.
Bette yelled in response, “What’d you say Tina? I couldn’t hear you. Maybe my hearing is going. You know I’m not as young as oh let’s say Helena.”
Bette slammed on the brakes as she approached a stop sign. When she took her foot off the brake she lightly pressed the gas, realizing no matter how upset she was, she had two lives sitting next to her. As they passed The Planet, Tina knew that they weren’t having lunch together. Where Bette stopped didn’t surprise Tina, it was her apartment. As Tina opened the door they didn’t say a word to each other. Tina was afraid to explain because Bette’s blood was boiling. After walking a few steps Tina looked over her shoulder to see if Bette was still there but she could hear the tires screeching around the corner. She walked inside and settled on the couch where she cried into her hands.
Bette managed to make it to The Planet with out killing herself or getting pulled over. Kit saw her slam the car door and walk in looking upset. This was not what she was expecting. She went over to Bette as soon as she came in and could see the anger and pain in her eyes.
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lets seee.. as much as i’d love the ass kicking ‘casue helena is one MEEEEAN bitch lol, maybe talking would help. soooo much ass kicking soooo little talking. maybe iot would help tina back to better, the RIGHT way lol. anyways your story rules.. you choose.. love it as always
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def kick ass..helena needs to b beat mentally and physically!! so lil of both
wow i love this story as for the ass kicken or talking i think tina might get a lil upset if bette does that cause it really doesnt solve anythin gitll just piss helna off more ( even though i would LOVE to see bette kick hellenas ass) lol but i think if she talks to hellena then tina will be much happier with her and yeah so i dunno either way itll be good so your pic!!! lol talk to you later
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As much as I would like to see Helena get the “smack down,” I guess talking would be best. Don’t want our girl to wind up in jail. Then, Tina needs a serious talking to. WHAT”S UP WITH HER?
talking not with Helena but with Tina
defenilly ass kicking..Helena has to learn one way or another and what the hell with Tina?..she saw what Helena is capable to do and she has doubt yet?..im pissed to..lol.great chapter as always JB
As much as i want to see Helena get her ass kicked I don’t think that would go over realy well with Tina, at this moment. I think you should wait and defenetly come back to that later. I love this story so either way i will be reading and loving it.
I think talking…..Words hurt more…..But whatever you come up with I know it will be good! Post Soon!
an ass kicking and an ass whooping for Helena’s ass!!! Plus some intense convo 4 B & T, with some SERIOUS make up sex!!!!
Kick H’s ass; overdue and talk with Tina
asskicking!!!!! let it BEGIN!!!!!
I would love to see that bitch get the shit kicked out of her but Bette probably needs to use her words instead. Maybe, a couple of punches or something at the end, just so Helena knows she means what she says. Oh..you could have Helena jump Bette then she would have to defend herself. You are the author you will do what is best for your story. Please post soon
haha I think bette should let karma work for her, maybe she can help it out but you know she has already been caught on tape hitting hella, so if she attacks her again she might get her pretty ass locked up. But if you plan no cops in this story then let the ass kicking happen, and I think you should bring the ghetto out of bette.
As much as I’d love to see Bette kick Helena’s ass…Bette should go pick up Tina and have that intense talk with Helena while Tina is present. Then there can’t be no she said this or that BS. I can understand where Tina’s is coming from…but she should have said something to Bette in the car. Really love your story…please continue.
Honestly? Neither.
I mean, going up against Helena like that or pulling a butch act or something is only going to make Bette look childish or insecure. Although she IS insecure right now, I think it’s time she showed Tina she actually grew up and, you know, is all mature and ready to be the amazing partner and parent *winks* we all know she really is.
I think she should go for the loving, caring, understanding act while internally bleeding to death. Of course Tina HAS to see how much Bette is suffering, but Bette shouldn’t keep advertising it to the world. If Bette really tries to be understanding and supportive, maybe Tina will finally see how much effort she’s making and how much the whole Helena-thing is hurting her.
Anyway, great work! I really like this story and oh, for some reason I think the name Tiffany was very appropriate =P
would love to see some ass kicking lol….but that might make matters worse….talkin may be most helpful but a lil slap in there wont hurt for that HELENA!…..but w/e u decide im sure will be great…
as much as I would love the ass kicking, I think it would be better for Tina to do it. She needs to be able to see Helena for the mean bitch that she is, so she won’t feel badly about dumping her.
WHOOP HER ASS! (give her the chair!!! ROOOOAARRR!!)LoL
Oh damn Bette gonna kick Helena’s ass can’t wait to see that. Post soon, thanks!
Emotional ass kickin, not physical ass kickin. even though helena should be beaten to a pulp.
Man! That is a hard one! I would have to say talking though because Tina may side with Helena if Bette kicks her ass! However, if anyone needs their ass kicked, Helena should be first in line! LOL! Decisions, decisions…maybe a little of both? Ah hell, it’s your story, you know what would be best…just post soon, I’m on pins and neeldes! Thanks:)
I wouldn’t mind seeing Bette kick Helena in the head lol but I also love Ms. Porter and her way with words. It’s always nice to strike someone without actually physically hitting them. Hmm, this is a tough one JBlover! Whichever way you choose, I’d just like it if Helena was out of the picture FOREVER!!! Thanks!
I’m all ’bout the asskickin, girl ;) then maybe some seriously chatting between T&B :D
No ass kicking! Bette, walk away – let Tina do whatever she’s going to do. The more you force it, the more Tina is going to question the decision to stay. Leave Tina alone, leave Helena alone and let Tina figure it out… Not that I admire Tina’s silence here — what a waffle! But I suspected she had doubts in France – she loves Bette but she’s still hanging on (so like Tina) to Helena… so let her hang. And hell, let her twist a little. Might do her some good. Such a great story – you have a gift!
Of course talk…Violence never lead anyone to a good thing. And sometimes, words are more horrible than punches !!
Ass kicking. Thanks
I think you can use Karma in other ways then having it be viloent.I think Bette and Tina need to really talk and then make up.Helena can get what’s coming to her w/o it be violent.
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I have to go with BOTH. Love this.