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Tomorrow – Chapter Twenty-Seven (Final chapter)
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“Quick, Tina is awake! Room 215, she’s awake!”
The nurses looked at each other, frowning their eyebrows. They must have thought I was insane. I probably looked very bad, too.
“Come on!” I said in a hurried tone. One of them seemed to decide that she would come with me, just to stop me begging.
She walked with me and I was so excited I almost ran back. What if she was asleep again? And they didn’t believe me? Please, Tina, please!
We came in the room and Tina’s eyes were still opened. The nurse looked at me and then back at Tina.
“Let me get the doctor,” was all she said. She hurried out. I went to Tina again, sitting on my chair.
“I am so sorry for what I did to you, Tina. I have been here every day, as much as I was allowed. I couldn’t sleep and I couldn’t eat, I couldn’t even think straight. I love you so much, so very much.”
I was holding her hand, looking in her beautiful hazel eyes.
Doctor Parker came in. His face was a mix of surprise, disbelief and excitement. She was probably some medical miracle to her.
“Miss Porter, can you please leave? We’ll let you in in a few minutes.”
“Sure.”
I wanted to stay there to make sure it wasn’t a dream, I wanted to hold her, but I realised I had to do this if I wanted those things.
So I went out, and out of the hospital so I could use my cellphone. I called Shane and Alice. They were both very excited. Shane was just in her car on her way to the hospital. I didn’t know for sure if it was good for Tina to have that much visit immediately so I told them both I’d call them if she was ready.
Both of them struggled, but in the end gave in. It was for Tina’s good. I went back inside and the nurse that had come with me told me I could go in.
“Can I hug her?”
“If you are very, very careful.”
I went over to her and placed my arms around her, making sure I caused her no harm. To feel her body in my arms again was such a good feeling, it made me cry.
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God, i was sure you would kill her! glad to see you didn’t thank for the amazing story!
Thank you for a wonderful story and thank you for making Tina strong enough to survive the accident.
Thank you for giving Tina back to Bette. Bette love for her was so strong and Tina love for Bette and everyone that knew her and that she could do more alive for many more. thanks
I’m so happy that tina survived! great story
thanks for an amazing story, especially for tina to survivve!! :)
Thanks Genner for a good story and a happy ending!
”You’re all I need.” – “Likewise.” – THE END ” – very sweet ending!
Who, pray tell, is Francis Bowry? Great story and I hate to see it end so soon. Maybe a SEQUEL is in order for this story. Happy that Tina survived and she doesn’t blame Bette. They are, indeed, all that the other needs.
Nice story with a great ending, thank you.
I am so glad that Tina recovered. Feel free to bring us a sequel anytime. :)
Thank you for this happy ending, I didn’t think I could take her death, you did a wonderful job darling, you are one of the best, and I hope to see another amazing story soon. Have a great day
WOW… i’ve just read all 27 chapters, and girl you’ve made me cry so bad!!! i was beginning to think you would kill T, and make this chapter with Bette remembering the whole story as something that happened many years ago… thank you for NOT doing that!!!i’m off to continue reading your other stories… keep up the good work!!