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Trial and Error Ch. 9
Bette stood in front of the green screen and looked at Tina suspiciously. Where was that damn teacher? She buried her face behind the pages and started to speak.
"Bette, how am I supposed to enjoy it when you’re hiding," Tina said. She modelled a reporter-like posture for Bette and she copied it. Now her papers would at chest level and tilted up. Tina smiled as Bette began.
Tina used the camera and did a quick body check of Bette. Then she started to zoom in on Bette’s features.
Her shoes were simple black and white Vans and her legs were tanned nicely and toned too. Tina was surprised since she’s never seen Bette do any physical activity besides running to class. She moved the camera up to Bette’s waistline. Her curves jutted out evenly on both hips and Tina gulped. Bette started to sway side to side as she flipped the paper over. Her shirt went up a little and Tina got a glimpse of Bette’s navel. She quickly moved the camera up to Bette’s chest. She saw how Bette’s chest expanded and as she breathed in and out. Because Bette was wearing a polo, she didn’t get the view she wanted. But Bette’s breasts were still visible and Tina loosened her collar.
Bette who was almost done saw exactly what Tina was doing through the screen that was behind Tina. She almost dropped her papers as Tina started to go to her face.
Tina was amazed how Bette’s neck was so smooth. There were no crevices or nothing. Even when Bette talked. Bette’s brown curls fell around her face and Tina wanted to run her fingers through them. Her jawline was sharp making her look stronger and older. The way her lips moved as she talked were so graceful. Then, Tina got to her eyes and she didn’t move the camera no more. Her eyelashes batted like a model. Her brown eyes were like little swimming pools. They were so addicting.
"Tina I’m done," Bette said. She straightened her papers and walked back to her bag. "I’m gonna miss my bus. Thanks for listening." And with that, Bette walked out the room.
Tina heard the door close and turned around. She saw that the screen for the camera she was using was turned on and her jaw dropped. Bette saw exactly what Tina was doing. "Oh god, she knows." Tina took out the tape and returned to her project. She looked at the time on the bottom right side of the computer screen. She smiled as Bette’s bus didn’t leave for another twenty minutes.
When should I make these two give in???
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(57 votes, average: 3.82 out of 5)
How bout, right now?! LOL
the pace is great. I think Tina needs to come clean to Bette and let her know she is attracted to her. Bec right now she is acting like those silly girls i knew in high school that would flirt with u just to see how long it would take for u to reciprocate.
Maybe now or maybe later. I dont think Tina would go for it right away. She would think about her reputation first and what her other so called friends would do and that will influence her. Bette needs to do something about her feelings, maybe Shane could hook her up with her first girl. But, just my opinion. You are writing a great high school story. Can’t wait for the next post.
I would love to say right now, but I know not everything in life is instant. I agree with ladydove. Tina needs to sort out her stuff first. This is a fantastic story, do what you think is right. PPS! Happy Holidays! =)
High school angst. Ramp it up a couple more notches. They’re young, they ca stand the stress. Thanks!
CAN stand and probably need the stress to motivate them. Keep them apart until the Homecoming dance.
Real life high school experience involves conceit, cruelty, jealousy, gossip, rejection, insecurity, humiliation, clumsiness, and lots of masturbation. I’m just sayin’. But you’ve covered most of the bases thus far so I think whenever you feel the time is right…it will probably be right.
Just caught up on this story…The pace is perfect and I to think Bette should have a date with some girl, see how Tina reacts to it and so on… Please post soon
the sooner the better! :D
hm, I say… make em wait. There’s a lot I don’t think either of them are quite ready to admit, and there is still Henry, after all. Nice job, thanks :)
i’m loving the slow burn too, the pace is fine, i agree with another comment that maybe Bette could hook up with someone else first (not serious of course – just for practise!) – see how Tina would handle seeing that…Bettes had to endure it! whichever way you go though just please post soon!!
oh no ..leaving it up to us we were all thinking chapter 1…LOL LOL..seriously i maybe be able to stand more torture NOT ANOTHER CHAPTER…LOL
Just read all your updates. I think it should be like now. Thank you for this story. It’s really getting interesting :)
Those girls are going to need some help, so please help them.thanks
now would be fine, thx. really enjoying the storytelling.