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Trouble in designer suits Ch.32
I was then that I noticed the three women in the doorway in fits of laughter as they watched us all.
“Oh hell, I don’t know what the three of you are laughing at, you all have forty minutes in which to have ice cold showers and be fully ready before Mark, Hannah, Kit, Jenny and Connor arrive with the kids and our lifts.”
That wiped the smiles of their faces as they rushed of to fight over who got the bathrooms first.
————————————-Shane——————————–
Miracle of all miracles Rachel, who was the last to be ready, strolled over to the couch just as the door opened and all of our wonderful yet hyperactive offspring came pouring in.
I grinned as a very tired looking group of adults followed them and flopped into the nearest seats. Now it was time to have a quick breather before the fun began. I watched as Bette winked at Holly who scampered of and returned a few minutes later.
“Mama, Mommy!!!”
I saw the looks of pure joy an Andy and Rachel’s faces as Holly called them by those names for the first time and knew that no present given to them would ever mean so much.
The little girl handed over the box we had prepared and the envelope to accompany it before scrambling up to sit between her parents.
They looked at us before opening the package and pulling out the photo album we had prepared for them with photos from the night of Bette’s show where Andy first took Rachel to their house through the first weeks there and at Bette and Tina’s. The time in London and since we all came back, right up to their Party a few nights ago. Photos that they had posed for and ones they had no idea were taken. They cried as the looked at them all.
“We left the back empty, that part is for you to decide.”
They looked at me as I spoke and I felt the gratitude in their glances. Before Rachel opened the envelope and showed the contents to Andy before smirking and telling us all to fuck off as we started to leave.
TBC????? Let me know, not sure if many of you even remember this or how good this bit was.
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First I want to say, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!!! I have missed this fic. It is one of my all time favorites. Yes, it is definitely remembered and LOVED, and YES it was GOOOOOOD!!! Thanks again for the post, and please post soon. Just love your brillant writing. The emotion is so touching. Just a thought maybe more-Helena and Selena after she has made her peace w/Bette and Andy. Please give her and Selena some HAPPINESS!!
great job, i missed this story, and your characters, glad to see you posted!!!!!
Hey Ellie I love this story and the other one to just caught up on that one…. Would love if you continued both:-) You make great storys.
what took you so long ?? :P nice to see this story back :D I love the way you write Andy and Bette :D I hope you post more often!!.
of course we remember … how could we forget??? … it´s a great story … please continue!!!
I too enjoyed this story of your…thanks for continuing it!
I still remember and would like you to continue.
Mate, you don’t know how much I was smiling when I saw there was another chapter of this story. I thought that I was gonna have to wait months! I was telling a friend yesterday it’s good that little things make you happy and though some may not understand it, this certainly made me happy! I’m glad to have this story back, I can only imagine what more mischief they can get up to on the way to the dinner. I wanna know what’s in the envelope! Thank you for this, I hope the next chapter isn’t too far behind!
yes please go on. this story is great
yes you have posted I have so missed this story please post again soon I love it great update
Oh how can I forget this story, this is a amazing and great story that we all love and missed and good to see you post and hope you will post soon, thanks!
Just caught up with your story. It is great! Any chance we can have s new chappy? Please post as soon as possible. Thanks