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    Twisted Triangles ch.30

    Story written on November 4, 2005 by Laurelite.
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    Bette breaks down after Tina leaves her. Who will be there to pick up the pieces? Drama Ahead!!!!

    “Sis , what happened out there? One minute we hear Tina outside going bananas on Grace, the next your sobbing on the porch.” Where to begin. I guess from the beginning. Eric and Alice sat on each arm of the seat that I was in, listening, waiting. Shane made herself comfortable on one of our kitchen chairs. Surprised she still here.

    “You sure you want to hear this Shane?” I ask her

    “I can’t understand what happened here either. Especially after I left you two last night. So I’d like to know how true love falls apart in less than 24 hours.” And she stayed and waited. Everyone just waited. But I didn’t know what to say. How to tell the story. It just doesn’t make any sense to me. But I told them. Beginning to end. From the time I pulled her away to the exact words she said to me before she so easily tossed me out of her life.

    “I’m gonna ***** kill her.”

    “What?” Shane and Eric directed at Alice.

    “Are you ***** kidding me? After all the bullshit you two went through. She just decides that it won’t work. Don’t you get a say?” Alice quickly stands up and turns towards the door. I surprised myself when I pulled on her arm.

    “No Al, it won’t help. Tina has made a decision and I have to respect that.” I don’t know if I meant it, or if I was just trying to calm Alice down.

    “Bullshit.”

    “***** that” Alice and Shane speak at the same time. ***** I almost believed it.

    “That’s bullshit, Porter. She ***** promised me this morning that….” She gets a far away look in her eyes before she continued.

    “This is just so fucked. Goddamn it Tina. She let me down she really did.”

    “What did she promise you Al?” Eric asks still holding her other arm as she is starting to get a little antsy again.

    “Doesn’t matter anymore.” She says this looking right at me. I smile, again grateful that I have someone like her to always have my back.

    “She let us both down, Al. I don’t know, I thought Tina was the real thing. I’m sorry Bette.”

    “Well maybe the pressure really did get to her.” Eric simple states. Oh the pressure. That ***** pressure. Needless to say that was the wrong to say with a room full of women comforting one that was just dumped.

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    6. well when you put it like that i can understand why tina got scared BUT it is true love AND its BETTE & TINA. so thats a given. so talking not screaming meaningless, hurrtful things may have been in everybodies best interest. communication. ahhh thats the ticket. oh but where would the fun be in that. thanks baby girl.

    7. Awww f*ck!!! Shit!!! Is there going to be a sequel…or maybe a skip ahead in years to see what happens when they meet again?D@mn, I hate when they are not together with the fairytale ending. I know …I know… Sh*t happens! Well this is not a good way to start my Friday.Such is life!Great writing! Very intense. I definitely got the angst and drama you promised. Please continue. Sad though I may be, I still love your writing style.

    8. Ok, yes that was intense…but I’m also hopeful because it’s only chapter 30…so we have like a 100 more to go and get them back…oh the drama between here and there…go girl..love it

    9. i can see why, but in my TiBette heart i want them together, so you better think of something girl, you are turning into flairforthedramatic and you know that too much drama is bad and brings all sorts of heartattacks, ulcers and other crap, i need some B&T loving

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