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Twisted Triangles ch.17
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PREVIOUSLY: Morning After: Bette’s POV
ERIC: “I’m good Tina.” He answered looking right at me. “Hey, Bette, what are you doing here?”
BETTE:”Wel…well um…see Tina here…***** uh..” Ok let’s start over without the stupid stuttering thing.
“Tina and Grace had a fight, so I came to see if she was ok.” There, good.
“Grace or Tina.” He is such an *****.
“Me. She came to see me. Grace was the one yelling like a crazy person and stormed out of here. Bette was just looking after her neighbor.” Thanks Tina. I smile appreciatively at her. He finally turned to her wanting to come in. But he was being blocked by both of us and our interlocked hands.
Out of the corners his eyes he realized why he couldn’t get in Moving his head, his eyes were met with those offending hands. So I did the chicken ***** thing. And I let go of her. She looked surprised for a second before, she realized that my brother doesn’t know anything about the two of us. And he was not going to be happy when he does find out.
“Tina, I’m glad you’re okay. So we’ll hook up right. I mean you, me, Grace, Alice, and Eric of course. See you at home bro. Ok bye.”And I was gone, moving as fast as my legs could carry me to my yard.
In the safety of my yard I saw Tina and Eric on the porch. She hadn’t let him in. After a little chit-chat where he was leaning a little too close for my comfort, she let him in. Smiling all the way as she closed the door behind her. But she was smiling in my direction. This girl is gonna get me in so much trouble.
_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_- 3 WEEKS LATER: BETTE’S POV
“***** Bette, we can’t keep doing this.” God here we go.
“Doing what, and more importantly , why are you still talking?”
“That’s what I mean. Get off of me, please.”
“Tina….”
“I mean it, someone’s gonna see.” She isn’t really stopping this when just about to get interesting.
“Is that what you’re worried about?”
“Oh, and you’re not?”
***** that’s right. We’re not alone. My brother should be back any minute. “Good point. Where was I sitting?”
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Thank you so much for posting!! Our girls are so naughty..Maybe they can rent a room at the motel just out of town..lol Hope everything works out in your personal life :)
I gotta get some new neighbors. Better yet I need to move to their neighborhood. AWESOME. Thanks.
The different POV is so great!! It’s like reading the same great chapter twice! I think we’re all getting sexually frustrated just by reading what’s going on between our 2 favorite ladies. Can’t wait till they get together finally.. I’m glad you like my story :)
jesus, girl, i just took a shower and now im gonna have to do another one. what lovely thoughts to go to bed to. god damn get them together already. i think the rest of us are a frustrated as they are. well, with that im gonna go to sleep, i think. ;) please post soon
Wow I love the way you doing about this story and can’t wait to see this 2 get alone together again. Post soon, thanks!
i may have to hate you soon. LOL!!! i’m getting so close too. and then here comes da boob (eric). please make him go away he brings me down. and clearly tina’s p-power is shooting all over da room if she can make bette stammer like that. once again lauerlite, OH MY DAMN!! beautiful story i’m still so in love with it. please post something soon so we all can finish!!
Another great chapter get them together already
Ok, I seriously need to stop reading this after DJing and drinking way too much.. I have halfway orgies on the dance floor and then come home to this great story with our girls being sexually frustrated and.. alas me as well… need to just get a one nite stand, lol.. Sorry to say your actual story has not got me free drinks yet, but I have started to master with thoughts of how you manipulates us into loving this frustrating story :) into my way of DJing.. Being a lil tease = lots and lots of free drinks for me yea!! Its 520 am here and I am reading this story. Great update!! Hope to see another one early this week if not sooner… I think the girls need to go out and have some more fun on the floor and I hvae the perfect songs for them!!
Sexually Funny….I like the combination. Ok, fuck all that….I am frustrated as hell right now.
First Illuminati, then you. And to think, I had planned on going to church; it wouldnt even feel right, “on so many levels;” sitting there and thinking of the last 2 stories I read.
I’m Catholic….need I say more? -_-
Hey yes too much distraction Eric and Grace LOL! that was so funny too LOL! their are just like a kid being out of sight LOL! WHOA! Please continue I Love it Thanks.
K
Excellent chapter. Love B’s point of view. You HAVE to get B and T together. No grace and bette lol. Love it.
This story is just fun!!!! Please post soon. It is one of my favs!
I love this format great post!!!!!!!!!!!
I’m still trying to decide about the POV approach. Its kinda different, but I’ve been reading so many stories today my head is spining. This one, wow, those two are gonna explode soon. Damn, just set Eric straight, no pun intended, and let the girls get on with it. snQQpy your cracking me up. You were planning on going to church, not confession I hope.