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Twisted Triangles ch. 22
What we didn’t count on were the two figures that never turned away, staring us both dead in the eyes.
“Holy *****!!!!!!”
“What the *****!!!!!!” They yelled at the same time. Effectively bringing the small club to a stand still. Suddenly the desire to hook up wasn’t as important to these people as the drama happening before them was.
“I’m gonna kill you!” Grace screamed at me. Before I had time to react she had my leg, trying to bite it, or something. I don’t know who taught her how to fight. The bouncers grabbed us all. Eric first, but he stood there, not moving, I guess they had to get him out of there as a precaution. Just then Kit came out.
“Hold on, Dan. These knuckleheads are with me. Let ‘em go.”
“Kit, you know I can’t.” he said as he held Grace in my arm and Bette in the other.
“Just put them backstage with me. They got some things they need to clear up.”
Ten minutes later and two rounds of drinks later, no one was talking. Kit kept moving her head to each one of us, waiting.
“Alright this is stupid. Bette, say something.”
“There’s nothing to say.”
“Really, you could’ve fooled me.”
“Good, keep it going. Tina do you have anything to add?”
“No, I’m not the leg biter here.”
“And I’m not the ***** that stole someone’s girlfriend.” I scoffed at her. I’ll let her figure it out.
“Really.”
“Eric please, contribute to the conversation effectively. We don’t need anyone co-signing on what the other said ok?” Hmm. She’s funny, trying to be the mediator.
“Tina? Something funny?” ***** she caught me.
“I was just thinking that you would make a good mediator. Too bad we had to meet like this.”
“Wait, you know about her?” Eric asks.
“Yes, I do. I’ve known about Tina for quite some time.”
“But you never said anything.”
“Eric in case your narrow ***** forgot, we don’t really talk. The first time I heard you mention a Tina is tonight at the house. Did I know it was the same girl? Yes, Bette told me. But that was none of my business. It’s still not. You four have got to work it out. Talk about your feelings or something”
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(21 votes, average: 4.29 out of 5)
Sorry to hear you were late to work but if it helps it was soo worth it lol I was getting so into their dance and conversation that I forgot I was sitting in my room reading this and not actually there lol Kit is a savior here and Grace, well she’s still the devil. I hope Tina is ok and that she and Bette can continue with their plans for the evening. It’s going to be sad watching them part ways eventually :( Can’t wait for more!!
Gracie is acrazy B^&^&h She might be in a world of trouble,with BetteIf I knew someone didn’t love nor want me. It would b goodbye
wait !! ffreaking jezze what the hell happenes agggh lol ok well amazing as always please post soon thanx
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Shit what the hell have happen now, is Tina pass out or something, hope Tina ok. Damn Gracie is not a good friend and can’t beleive she throw the glass at Tina, what a crazy best friend. Post soon please, thanks!
Always were hanging, come on. Tina got hurt by the glass. I’m glad its kinda out in the open, but Grace just needs her ass kicked. What a friend, its not like she was with Bette. But it is hard when your friend ends up with the person your crazy about, trust me on that one. Looking for next posting.
Oh my God, what happened, did Tina get cut from the glass? Please post soon. I hate cliffhangers, but love this story thought, keep it up ;)
OMG! Gracie she is a F***! Bitch! I don’t think she is really good friend of Tina I’m gonna kick her Ass LOL! she not really Bette girlfriend yet but she think own her Whoa! that girl she is crazy on her head I’m gonna slap her LOL! Thanks Laurelite Please continue post soon Thanks!!!
Your subtitle should have been: ‘The truth is out there, and Grace can’t handle it!’
damn that bitch cut tina’s face didn’t she? I like Kit in this story. I am glad the cat is finally out of the bag.
you.are.evil. mawahahaha/ well its out of the bag and everyone, except tina is relatively unscathed. but the love is still there and you did good girl. soon please. need to see and hug or something. thanks.
I have spent a lot of time reading all of the wonderful stories on this site, but, I have to say yours is the first that compelled me to write and leave a comment. Firstly, your writing is amazing! You have created such believable characters. Yours is the story that I can not wait to read everyday. Well Done!!! I could go on and on… but please know that you are an incredible talent and I can’t wait to read the next chapter. Thank you for taking your time to share with us.
Way to go girl!! You have posted a few that I was trying to catch up reading to comment!! Great job, but of course now you have us in suspense!! Don’t wait too long too post.. Please! :) I am sick here.. damn people and their colds… Great Job and keep up the great writing.
AHHHH Is shw cut up? I don’t like Grace, she’s a beeeoch!! lol Thanks for posting so soon!!! More please!!
K
Wow, lots of drama. Excellent chapter, just love this. Grace needs to get over herself and fast.
Grace has got to go. I’m really confused how this story started the way it did, but I love it anyway. Oh yeah, someone needs to kick Grace’s ass but good.
Lauren, get your ass back here and post. I need to know today what happens BEFORE I go out! LOL
What!!!!!!!!!!! did the glass cut her bette is going to kill grace!!!!!!!!!!!!