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Twisted Triangles ch.33
“*****.” Grace muttered as the revelation hit her. The other two didn’t hear her. But they perk up when she gasped audibly. “Holy *****.”
“What?” Alice said, revealing her red and tear stained face for the first time.
“I can’t believe we didn’t think of this in the first place.”
“What?” Shane asks.
“It’s ***** right in our faces and we didn’t think of it. It’s ***** brilliant.”
“What!?” The duo now shouted to Grace.
“Oh, sorry. Patting myself on the back here. Why don’t we just page her? Have her come to us?”
Shane and Alice looked at each other and then turned to Grace again. This time they both saw the other head sprout from her for the second time today.
“Well, well. Nice work. Gracie.” Shane says displaying her seldom seen wide smile to Grace.
“Thanks Shane.” Grace said giggling.
“Alright, none of that.” Alice said her energy renewed. “You two can do that some other time. Let’s go.” A with a new found resolve, the troika rushed to the nearest info center to page their lovelorn friend.
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“Mickey, what did you pack for me?” I ask coming out of my haze for a minute to realize I’m really leaving my home behind.
“I packed what you needed Chris.”
“Which is, what?” I ask calmly. It’s taking everything in me, but I need to get a simple answer from her. I need to know that she is capable of answering things without being an *****. Again she gave me that sigh. Like my question is interrupting her from reading about something important like Brad and Angelina’s lives together.
“Well,” she started in that patronizing tone, ” I packed your….tooth…..brush… your shoes…..your dignity…….oh and your self-respect. Was that good enough for you, Tina?”
“You are such a hateful *****, you know that?”
“Hateful *****, huh?”
“Yes, you are. Have I told you how much I can’t stand you?”
“Not in the last 20 minutes no. But then again you really haven’t been saying much of anything. Still mooning over that ‘girlfriend’ of yours. Can’t wait until mom sees the mess you’ve become.”
“I hate you Mickey, I really do.”
“Whatever Christina. Take these and shut up, I’m tired of your whining.” And with that, thankfully another ‘conversation’ was done. She threw me her earphones to her iPod. It was filled with mostly *****, but she did have something loud, which is all I needed.
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(15 votes, average: 4.20 out of 5)
” Yolanda, I think you’re being a lil harshhhh.” you are one cold cookie!!! that was just mean and at such convenient times. ooohhh how hurtful. please post soon. PEACE.
Oh dear, this is so hard
Oh damn this is sad. Tina sister is not nice and maybe Alice can kick her ass like Grace. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Mickey needs to go back to Disneyworld.I hate her.I wanted happier times not drama.I am in retail too so I know how it is.Try and update when you can.
I’m really liking this story and your writing style. All of the characters thinking sounds just like them, very realistic. Keep those chappies coming, please.
noooo!!! damn you mickey!!! DAMN YOOOUUUUU!!!!!!
wow, tina’s sister is evil!
okay, i really really don’t like you right now, i love the story but don’t like where it’s going LOL…tina’s sister is evil bitch and girls need to try something else
this sucks the whole situation hurry up and fix it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ouch
I sure hope you “fix” this b4 u go off and somewhat abandon us for the holidays……..AND NOT LEAVE US HANGING!!!!!!!!!!!!
fergz baby where are you? its early i know. but i think i need a drink. laurel is trying to kill me.laurel, im trying real hard to have good feelings for you baby. dont be playing with us like that. i hate mickey. hmmmm make it better. thanks.
uggh mickys not so fine shes fucking bitch who can die !!! lol ok well anyways grrr bette agggh shes so heartbroken ….please let tina com ehome and even if it takes time please let bette and her be happy !!!!! lol ok well thanx for the post amazing as always!
Hatin MIckey right now.
cant believe you left it here.post soon