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Twisted Triangles ch. 35
“Can I at least call you? Maybe we could meet up, tonight.” she looked at me with uncertainty. She should never be looking at me like that. I’ve never given her any reason to in the past.
“I mean the whole gang. You don’t have to go out with just me. I don’t want to make you uncomfortable, Tina.” I recover quickly. We both wouldn’t be able to survive if we realized that we were all wrong for each other without our friends there as buffers.
“I don’t know Bette, I’ll think about it, ok?” I heard something in the background. Probably her mother.
“Ok, Tina I’ll go. But if you don’t want to talk to me. Will you at least call Gracie?”
“Sure, I will. Just please get out of here Bette.” More rustling. The closer it gets the more nervous she gets. I guess that my cue.
“Ok I’ll see you tonight then, maybe.” I should think more about what I am about to say. But the way she’s acting, I think she needs it. Even if it is from me.
“I love you, Tina.”
“K, Bye Bette.” And she hastily closes the door after giving me a slight shove. I should taken aback by that. But I know she felt what I did. She should know by now, no matter how much time has passed, our bodies naturally float to each other. It used to be the most erotic and soulful thing I have ever been apart of. Now, seeing her so utterly beaten down, it happens because I want to protect her. Hold her and sweep her away from all this. My sweet Tina. What have they done to you?
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“Well how did she look?” Grace asked me as soon as my foot entered the room.
“She’s looked better, right?” Alice said. There wasn’t an answer needed for that. Of course she has, when she was home.
“I think it was a mistake for me to go over there, Grace. It would have been better if you had gone.” I tell them defeated. Her eyes, weighed down by the dark circles under them continues to break my heart hours after I saw her.
“Why?” Grace asks, truly confused.
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(17 votes, average: 4.76 out of 5)
yeah I’ll get Bette to come to.” She winked my way after she uttered the last sentence. God what am I getting myself into? ok me being the slow puppy that i am it took me a lil while to get that, but u know what, U R BAD. i mean damn girl how in the world do you sleep at night. oh my god this is getting colder my the minute. please post soon. **sitting on needles** PEACE.
What the fuck is up with Tina…Is Jenny hiding in there somewhere.lol… loving the story..please post real soon.
Is it just me but is Grace a cow or what. Who would do that to her best friend, when she knows how much pain she is in, if she was anykind of friend she would be doing herbest to get them back together. you now have me angry and I dont know if I can read it while Bette & Tina are not together, I may have to hunt you down gggrrrrrrr
fergz baby – get me a triple. i mean it. shes a loon.laurel – baby if it wasnt the holiday season. i would so find you and make you pay for this, this PAIN!! but since it is the season to be jolly, you best be the one holding way to long on the pipe???? have a good selling season, k? and keep it coming. thanks.
Tina needs to get with it and snap out of her funk…..otherwise Bette might not exert as much control the next time Grace or somebody else is waiving a** in her face.
” Looks like the game’s on again…” Wow, no kidding!
bring it on !!!!!tina get your shit together
Tina is getting on my nerves. She doesn’t deserve Bette. So I think Grace should have her. at least she knows what she wants and she goes for it. I mean damn, hasn’t been like a year or something, and Tina stills doesn’t know Bette is her one and only? give me a break!
If Tina doesn’t want Bette than Grace should have the chance.Great chapter.
where do you live? i’m gonna come and shake you really hard…what are you trying to do? break my heart? especially knowing that in the 1st chapter Bette and Grace are together….i have a thought…maybe, because tina is undecisive, bette and grace will pretend to be dating so tina will finally come to her senses, or maybe grace should tell tina: if you won’t claim porter than i will…tina has to awake and get bette before it’s too late
Bette is an ass. Grace is an ass and a bitch friends like her you do not need. Tina is an ass she will forever be known as the chick that ran home to mommy. Yet after all of this all I can say is go Grace get your woman. Grace is the only one in this story taking charge, getting what her body mind and soul craves. two thumbs up
albeez..three shot of tequila coming your way baby…laurel..bring it on.
Good chapter. Damn this is drama and the game is began, this is so exceted and can’t wait to see what’s next. Please post soon, thanks!
I kind of hope to see Bette and Grace tother, of course temporarily. That may make Tina make her mind sooner.
well I’m glad I just read these last 2 chapters today…cause I’d be pissed that you haven’t posted sooner! This is great! There are evil hookers like Grace and I’m glad you are exposing those kind of girls! I know how this ends now..Tina rejects Bette and goes out with Grace then Tina moves back to LA–Chapter 1 begins…then B&T end up together and they blow off Grace and she moves to Tiajuana and becomes a night act with her favorite Donkey…AM I Right or What?!?!?! heheheheee