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    Twisted Triangles ch.37

    Story written on January 15, 2006 by Laurelite.
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    Bette hides everything from Grace and Tina prepares togo home to Bette. Why is Eric making it difficult?

    “I wish I could rip you out of my life Tina. I really wish I could…..” Maybe you guessed already, but Tina isn’t here. It’s just me, Jack D. and the solitude of my backyard. A real transformation huh. I went from women, to Grace, to Grace and drinking. I’m not a falling down drunk mind you. But her eyes haunt me during the day. I can’t remember her smile at all. But her voice, the nearness of her body as I sat on the bed in that hotel room. She was so close and all I wanted to do was run for the door. So I did. And I regret it.

    Not that everything was a total loss. I found Grace to be a great girl. Not exactly a person to rock my very soul. But I figure you only get one of those in life. And mine didn’t want me so, go with the person that does. She dotes on me, makes me feel needed. Fuck. I don’t know what else I can say to convince myself that this is working.

    “Hey baby, miss me?” Ah, speak of the devil.

    “Hey Grace.”

    “Hey Grace? That’s it? Not hey honey how was your day? Which was fine, thank you for asking.” She talks so quickly how can anyone get a word in edgewise.

    “Hey. Sorry. I’m just tired.” I tell her, giving her an apologizing smile. She’s seen me like this a couple of times, and all the times resulted in us not speaking for a couple of days.

    “Ok, I’ll accept that, I guess.” She better or I’ll suddenly have a headache and have to end this little chat of ours. She studies my face for a minute, gently tracing the lines that appeared on my face a couple of months ago. A face filled with heartache no matter the hour. And yet she doesn’t notice. I think she’s waiting for me to say anything. Maybe I’m missing something.

    “Did we have a date or something?” Shit I hope I didn’t forget that again. Wouldn’t be the first time. Come to think of it, it wouldn’t be the first or the second time either.

    “No, I just came to see how you were. Baby are you drinking that at six. Isn’t it kind of early to be drinking hard liquor, Bette?” She always manages to annoy me when she turns her head to the side and look at me like she’s my mother and not my girlfriend. I can’t answer her question now. The headache I was pretending to have suddenly arrived.

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    1. I don’t know what to say. All the four people know exactly Bette and Tina will just find chance to get back together when they’re around each other. But now all of them are pretending they’ll be ok. I really don’t like Tina now. She’s the one running away, refusing to think and make up mind, playing with her love’s brother, coming back to shuffle, and everything. I kind of feel mad at her. But I know I’ll be fine with her as long as she makes up to Bette…

    2. I admit i didn’t read the last chapter but all I can say is that i trust you. So we are going to come full circle.Can’t wait.Gotta go and read the previous chapter.

    3. I missed this story. Glad you found time to post. Grace is a little needy but loves Bette and I think bothe Tina and Bette should dump their girlfriend/boyfriend, it’s clear their just stringing them along and it’s not fair to either of them. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    4. You said to trust you, so I will, but it’s a little difficult after this chapter I must say :o)) And what is Grace doing calling Bette pookie – I hate that, it reminds me of Tonya!!!! LOL…..I hope the problems with the computer is soon over, so you can post again…

    6. As always, Grace,Eric gotta go. Pookie, give me a break. Now come on, I do believe their was the promise of bring our two girls together, can’t wait till they see each other.

    8. Ok. Did I miss something?Tina with Eric and Bette with Grace, what the hell happened after Bette left the hotel? Anyway I love this story and can’t wait to see where you take this.

    15. Wait she could not be happier to be going back to the woman she is still in love with, who’s heart she broke?!?!? Is Tina that thick this sounds like a fucking nightmare scenario to me. Specially since she is now dating said woman’s brother and said woman is now dating her so called psycho best friend. Yeah the excitement of it all I would rather go skinny dipping in hell.

    17. ok… now it all make sense to what I’ve read from chapter 1 :) Thanks for the story and the… DRAMA… it hurts, but I sure love it and craving for more of this story :D Post soon.. please!

    18. what the f***!!! when in the hell did tina decide to do eric instead of goin for bette. “to be around her.” what in the hell is goin on in yo head?!?!?! this is goin tto be some hurtful shit, i can see it already. this is to good to leave danglin for weeks on end. please post soon. PEACE.

    19. Now send Bette out of the country as soon as Tina snd Eric arrive. Tina doesn’t deserve to be in Bette’s presence and Bette doesn’t need the anguish! Tina is sick using Eric when she wants Bette. In fact in this story leave Tina out in the cold, let Bette and Eric “ride off into the sunset” together. Their love is more important that what Tina could offer either.

    21. LL,Looks like there will be storm clouds ahead. I think that a major nature disaster is on its way. There will be turbulent times that will savage these characters but like all traumatic events those that survive will be stronger and more resilient to all that life can throw their way.I think that this be a cleansing time, casting away all of the old inhibitions and heartache, which will allow new love to nurture and rekindle shattered relationships.Yes, you do have to demolish the remains before rebuilding a stronger, and tougher union.I love the way that you have twisted these characters into your own and developed a divergent storyline.Please do not explain or apologize for your words and vision. If they offend people then at least they are paying attention and care about what you are creating.I support this masterpiece and your freedom to create such brilliant fan fictions.Much gratitude and appreciation,Your Loyal Fan.

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