Fan Fiction
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Twisted*Love Ch.11*
If you ever want to see your obsessed love admirer, come to my house on the corner of Glendale and another thing, bring Carmen with you. XoXo, Maria.
Your sister is completely insane. She crumbled up the note and grabbed Carmens hand. Were going to her house. They walked out of the studio and got into Jennys car. Shane sped off down the street.
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Shane and Carmen got out of Jennys car and walked up to Marias house. They walk hand-in-hand to the front door. Shane makes it to the door and pushes it open. They walk in, the whole house dark.
Is there a light around here? Shane asked. Yeah. Carmen went over to the table by the couch. She turns on the light and sees Maria sitting there with a gun in hand. Carmen backs up and stands next to Shane. Shane pushes Carmen behind her and protects her.
So I see you finally made it. I didnt think youll ever come. Maria got up off the couch and stood in front of Shane.
Why are you doing this? Shane stepped back with Carmen behind her.
Why? WHY?! Shane wants to know whyIll tell you why. I dont like being lied to. I hate the fact that I thought someone loved me, but I was just someones rebound. And to know I will never amount to my precious sister Carmen. Maria walked up to Shane and presses the gun to her cheek. Now its payback time *****.
Wheres Mark? Shane held onto Carmens hand tightly and was afraid.
Let me get him for you. Maria disappeared into the hall and went into a room. Shane and Carmen heard a lot of commotion in the room. They couldnt move. They were paralyzed, not knowing what Maria might do. Maria came back out with Mark, who had a big cut on the side of his face.
Are you alright? Shane asked. Yeah, Im fine.
Shut up and sit down. Mark did what he was told.
Now, like I was saying. Shane, these are your last minutes of life. And I hope this how you wanted to let your life end. Being the biggest playboy in LA. Manipulating girls mind so you can sleep with them. Ruin things with my sister and then ***** with my life. I wont let you get away with this. She raised the gun towards Shane. Shane backed up, and Carmens face full of tears.
Maria, please dont do this. It wont make anything better, itll just make matters worse. Think of your sister. Maria looked at teary-eyed Carmen, standing behind Shane. She doesnt matter to me. I never liked her anyways. You always thought you were better than me, didnt you Carmen? Maria raised her eyebrow.
I never thought I was better than you. I love you. You know that, I was always there for you. Maria started to think and started to lower the gun. But then she stopped.
Im sorry, but this is my choice and this is how its going to end. She raised the gun up again towards Shane. Im sorry. A tear rolled down her face. She slowly pushes the trigger. Mark stood up and ran towards Maria. He grabs the gun, and Maria fights with him. All of the sudden, the gun fires.
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OMG GIRL…THIS IS SOME CRAZY SHIT..GIMMMIE SOME MORE…IM LOVING IT!
AAAAAAAAAH, common! Don’t let us wait ?!
She is such a psyco! I hope Shane and Carmen are ok. Great update
Crazy Maria huh?!!. Poor Mark…i hope he didnt get shot!. Waiting for next round :)