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UNBREAKABLE CH NINE
"Shhh Angie…..It’s gonna be ok……" Angus said, trying to soothe the little girl…
"How about if I do you one better than going home? How about if I take you to see your mom?"
Angie looked up at him.
"I can go see my mom?" She asked, quietly.
"Yeah," he replied, smiling, "She’s been asking for you…"
Fresh tears sprang to Angie’s eyes, but this time they were tears of relief…Relief that her mom was going to be ok! Her mom hadn’t forgot about her! And maybe, just maybe, she was going to get out of this god-awful place that held those mean kids.
Well, they weren’t all mean…There was Skye, and she was really nice.
"Right then," Angus said, holding out his hand to Angie, "Shall we go then?"
Angelica nodded and a small appreciative smile formed on her face.
As they were leaving the building, Angus turned back to Taryn.
"I trust those girls will be taken care of in a manner seen fit?"
"You have my word on it!" Taryn replied, then she bent down and gently hugged Angie.
"You take care little one…In case I don’t see you again," She said, tearing up.
"I will Taryn," Angie replied, getting into Angus’s car.
The ride to the hospital was a quiet one, and when they got there, Angie began to feel nervous…
When they got outside Tina’s room, Angie saw Detective Moorland sitting outside the room. When Dylan saw them coming she started walking towards them, then she noticed the bruises on Angie’s face.
"What in the hell happened?" Dylan asked, bending down and taking a closer look at Angie’s face, before she stood up again.
"Ignorant kids that the system has forgotten about," Angus replied.
A flash of anger crossed over Dylan’s face, then she looked back down at Angie and smiled at the beautiful little face looking up at her.
"Well honey, would you like to go in and see your mom?" She asked?
"Yes please" Angie answered.
"Angie, why don’t you wait out here for just a minute with Detective Moorland while I go in and see if your mom is awake first, ok?" Angus said.
Angie nodded.
Angus went into Tina’s room, and she turned her head to look at him.
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(35 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
I wonder, will Bette appear in this story?
I don’t think Bette would have left Angie like there. I’m sure Henry was lying. Can’t wait to here what’s behind that. pps!
This was so heartbreaking but written so very well. Thank you for this story. Please make it better soon.
Well look like we all lost the case, hope there someone crazy just come and shoot henry and free Tina and the kids. Please post more, thanks!s
Oh I hope seeing Angie with a black eye knocks some sense into Tina. If she can’t stand up for herself maybe for Angie so she doesn’t have to go through that again. God help her, Angie and Mikey
I could not finish reading the story. I am really sorry about that. I couldn’t stop crying so I have to stop before having a heart attack. I love the story but it is heart breaking. I think I will stop reading till Tina has left Henry and the children and her are safe. It is hurting me and there is nothing I can do.I know it is really happening in our society.People like henry are worst than animal. Sometime I am asking myself if our society really cares about vulnarable or it is just the wrong way to be efficient. GOS!! I hate domestic violence and all sort of abuse.
obviously Henry lied abut Bette abandoning Angie so Tina would stay away from Bette because he’s so insecure that Tina was a lesbian before marrying him and he also know the power of Tina and Bette and know nothing really can keep them apart…..please Bette you have to show up soon I cant take another thing happening to Angelica and I know once Bette finds out hell will break lose