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UNBREAKABLE CH TEN
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“One more chance Angus…I owe him one more chance…”
“You don’t owe him anything Tina!" Angus said angrily. He looked out the window then, getting his anger under control, then he turned and looked back at Tina…
"But as I said “Good Luck…and no offense…But I hope we don’t meet again…”
“I’ll leave him if it happens again…Mikey and I are gonna get jobs and start saving some money…Just in case..” Tina said softly.
“Oh? What kind of work did you do before Tina?” Angus asked her, intrigued.
Tina laughed… “You wouldn’t believe me…”
“Come on tell me…”
“I was a big shot movie producer…” She answered, rather shyly.
“Seriously?" Angus replied, surprised, "What films did you produce?”
“You’ve probably never saw any of them..”
“Try me..”
“Pandora…First, Last and Forever…Gravity Rocks…Irreplaceable…Um lots..”
“You produced Pandora?" Angus said, rather in awe of this woman looking so small in the bed before him…
"Wow!! That was one of my favourite films ever!!! – Well, I think you should go back into the movie business – If Pandora is anything to go by ..”
“Thanks” Tina replied blushing… “I would like to do something different…I’d like to work with kids…Even just for a few hours a day…I originally was thinking of doing it on a voluntary basis…But I think I have to look for a job where I can save money…”
“Just in case…” Angus said gently.
“Um…Yeah” Tina replied softly, casting her eyes down.
“Well…It’s funny, but the home Angelica was in was advertising for staff…I could get you an application form if you like?”
“Oh Angus that would be great!" Tina exclaimed, a smile on her face, then it clouded over for a minute – "But, could we keep it between ourselves, just until I speak to Henry?” she asked.
“Sure…”
“Thanks Angus – I really appreciate the help you and Dylan have given to me…”
“You know if you get the job Tina…You could tell Henry its voluntary work…” Angus said with a wink..
Tina was a little confused…Then what the policeman was suggesting dawned on her…
“I could!…It’s plausible..” she said, thoughtfully.
“Yeah it is..”
“Angus…Can I ask one more favour?”
“Sure fire away…I cant say no to a pretty lady”
Tina smiled and blushed simultaneously.. “Angie has became quite attached to a little girl called Skye…She’d like to go visit her every now and again…Do you think that would be possible?”
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well, since a debate is going on about the awards, I think it is time for me to make an opinion…you should be awarded with something like that: “writer of the most heart wrentching stuff”…anyway I just wanted to point out that I can’t recall I have ever read something so ‘strength demanding’ on this side…
I think its difficult to read because we care so much for these characters.We have always seen Tina as strong and of her own mind. Pleas continue with this story. This stuff and more happens every day.
Please keep the story going. it is hard reading, but that just makes the journey more fulfilling! :) Lets hope Tina gathers up enough courage to get out before it is too late. PPS
Please keep posting. I agree with FTM, “it’s riveting stuff.” PPS
hello dear long time no see, ive been following you since started posting here, was going to hold of commenting till yougot to your own! new chapters but reading this one again just got me! please continue and i”ll be waiting for whatever xxx
This is my second reading of this story and I can’t wait to read your new chapters too!
Finally Bette’s come into the picture. THank you for the really hard story that you’re writing. Thank you.
It’s a good story, Its only ‘tiny’ bit hard to read at some parts but I don’t find it upsetting at all. Coz I trust you would make it all good at the end! ;) So please continue, your silence reader.
This is a heartwrenching story but it’s a MUST READ on my list and I hope you will see it through to the end. I can appreciate that everyone wants Bette to come to the rescue but I think Tina needs to find the strength within to defend herself and her children with the help that is being offered. Even without Bette in the picture it seems Tina is very isolated from other friends/family if she couldn’t even suggest one other person to take Angelica instead of putting her into the hands of social services and subjecting her to that beating. That in itself gives more insight into the situation. I don’t recall if Mickey’s mother is still alive in this story and if she is why didn’t Mickey go to her? I realize this is reality for some families and I can understand Tina’s fear but if Henry has one sincere bone in his body he would not object to a trial separation while he gets the help he needs. I’m sure that he knows it’s not going to be an easy journey for any of the them and he should be willing to get his family out of harms way if indeed he has no control. Otherwise it’s just a matter of time before he is tempted to drink again and to find an excuse to beat up on them. I’m praying that you will continue to give us glimpses of hope throughout the tragic moments that I’m sure are still in store for us as we continue reading this riveting drama. Brava for going out on a limb and doing something very different with our characters. Please stick it out and bring it to a conclusion. Thank you.
OMG this is so good and now Bette is come to the picture, hope she will come and take Tina home with her. Please post more, thanks!
I still haven’t read the post but know that I support you 110%. You are not upsetting me at all. What you are doing is fantastic, because if it is difficult to read, I can’t imagine how it is like to be writing it. What you are describing is what is happening to a woman or a child somewhere in the world. It is just the crual reality. It just hurtfull and I can’t stop myself crying, thinking of what these women and children were, are and will go through. Thank you for sharing this with us. And I can’t wait to see Tina over come Henry and have back her indepence and freedom. PPVS
Hi IILWT, I am new to this most distressing and intelligent drama. You have shown the reality of domestic abuse. It is harsh and depressing to see a mother and children terrorize by a husband, father & step-father.I can empathize with Tina’s fear and remorse however cannot condone her for staying with Henry when he has attacked Mickey and Angie.Dylan and Angus have seen it all before and are desparately trying to get the message through to Tina. Henry is unlikely to change and his repentance may be short lived once something else happens that he does like.There have been triggers to his behavior but he needs to get counseling and work through them before anything will be resolved.We all need a second chance. Henry is on his nth chance so Tina and the kids need to be devious. I say they should hope for the best and prepare for the worst.What I really would love is for Bette to reappear in Tina’s life and give her the support and strength to leave Henry once and forever.I do get the sense that Bette regrets the past and has her own amends particularly to Angelica as well as Tina.Perhaps this course be her salvation.I am totally hooked and can’t wait to read more of your talented work. Many thanks, A Fan.
OH please keep going this story is hard to read but that’s because you make it so real. You breath into it feelings that are so intense So there was a Bette in this story. Wow that makes what is happening to Tina all the harder to swallow. Was it Bette’s betrayal that cause this lack of self confidence in Tina? I wonder great job I’ll just have to wait for you to give us more.
This is an incredibly hard story to read, but I do hope you continue to write it, because it is a very good story. Besides, this Tina is in me now and I have to know what happens to her, and Angelica, and Mikey. Thanks!!! Oh, and I will second lilla=, if I could I would nominate you for an award, no doubt!!
Oh right !!!! you can’t just leave us hanging like that !!!!!!!!!!!!! lol lol Hope does spring eternal. Things are starting to look up. Very good story. pps
First let me say that I am so sorry that you and your family had to go thru this type of abuse. And I am so glad that your mother had the fortitude to take herself and the children out of the abuse. That takes much courage. This was a most difficult chapter and yes, it is very hard to read, but please you can’t stop now besides, you have just introduced Bette into the story which is what we have all been waiting for. I wondered about the accuracy of the story when I started reading because only someone that has endured it can write accurately and factually about it. Tina should make arrangement quickly to get the hell out of that house and go someplace or to LA that henry can not find her. Or at least if she is in LA he will think twice before bothering her there. Yes, he does have a huge problem with alcohol but he also has a problem with self esteem and that is why he keeps bringing up her past. He knows he was second choice to Bette and if Tina knew the truth she would go back to Bette. henry has lied to Tina with regard to everything about the divorce. I know and would wager everything I have that henry lied to Tina. There is no way Bette would have abandoned Tina financially or emotionally during the divorce and she would have and probably did offer whatever Tina needed financially or in any other capacity. henry has lied and he knows if Tina leaves she will find out the truth. He also knows that if he had told her what Bette offered, she would have thought twice about being with him and the only way he could secure that was to lie to her. What I don’t understand is why Tina did not see any of the papers and why did she leave it all to henry to do. She would have had to sign the papers herself, no one else could do that for her and she would have had to be in a hearing of some kind. You can not get divorced in this country from anyone for any reason without a hearing and signing the paperwork. The only time that could possibly happen, is if Tina did not have representation, and we know henry represented her, which was the biggest mistake she could have ever made. And as angry and hurt as she was Tina would have torn Bette a new one. Tina needs to go to the Clerk of the Courts’ office and get a copy of the divorce and read it for herself. It will all be there for her to see in the Court record. She needs to know this. henry is a lilly-livered COWARD, with low self esteem, plus alcoholic. The alcohol gives him the dutch courage to do and say what he has and be as abusive because he doesn’t have the guts to do it sober. As angus told her, he will do these things again and she might not be as lucky next time. If Mikey had not hollored at him he would have killed her then. Tina is right she does need money to get away and who knows henry just might have money that Bette gave to her in a settlement and he has been using it, the bastard. And of course, he doesn’t want her to find that out either. Nothing that comes up in this story will surprise me. Please continue the story. Thanks for posting.
omg I can’t take anymore, no we have to get Bette in here somehow. Tina is not thinking straight and the only person who can rig her of this nightmare is Bette Porter. Angelica is living a life of hell, fuck the good school or the nice stepdad Henry use to be this is now and Tina really needs to open her eyes and get out even though is not that easy but maybe it really is just that easy…heartbreaking story by every fucking word and the pain I feel in my heart is unbareable