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Unchanged
“Officer Bryant,” Jenny started more tactifully. “We would like to know if there has been any headway on the investigation and wether or not Willemena is ok.”
Officer Bryant stared at the trio of women invading his office. I have no time to answer to them, he thought to himself as he sighed. “Ladies, it’s been a long day, perhaps if you came back tomorrow we could discuss things,” he started.
“We have waited several hours, Officer Bryant, I think we’d like to discuss things now,” Jenny went on. Officer Bryant thumbed through his paperwork.
“Well Ms, uh Ms?” Officer Bryant started.
“Schecter,” Jenny filled in for him.
“Ms. Schecter, I don’t think any of you should be concerning yourself with Ms. Carvington at the moment. Why don’t you go home and get some sleep,” Officer Bryant responded. He rubbed his eyes saring at the file in front of him, pictures reflecting in his eyes as he thumbed over them.
“Why shouldn’t we concern ourselves?” Jenny pushed.
“It’s not nessesary to,” Officer Bryant continued.
“Why not?” Shane chimed in.
“It’s just not, now will you ladies please come back in the morning,” Officer Bryant replied becoming more impatient and rembering the bottle of scotch he kept in his bottom drawer for nights like these.
“We’re not leaving untill you explain to us where Will is,” Shane stared. Shane’s fists tightened in on themselves as Carmen’s grip tightened around her arm only just bringing her in touch with the fact that other people were in the room with her and her focal point of rage.
“Ms. Carvington is no longer an issue of this department,” Officer Bryant blurted. He was bewildered by his own statement. He stared at his paperwork unseeing.
“What are you saying, officer,” Jenny asked.
“I’m saying it is no longer nessesary for us to be concerned with Ms. Carvington’s involvement in the case,” Officer Bryant explained impatiently. He placed the pile of paperwork on the desk infront of him as the 3 women circled behind him.
“Why is that?” Shane asked becoming more impatient as the previous hours of waiting for Officer Bryant to finally show up started to rear itself.
“Because, Ms. McCutcheon,” Officer Bryant started. “We have reason to believe Ms. Carvington is dead.”
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(36 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5)
hey mate good to see you found your way back, glad to see will is back.
thanks for continueing the story. great chapter.
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