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Unforgivable Chapter 4
I’d stand up and punch them out
Coz they’re all wrong
I know better
Coz you said forever, and ever
Who knew
Remember when we were such fools
And so convinced and just too cool
Oh no, no, no
I wish I could touch you again
I wish I could still call you friend
I’d give anything
When someone said count your blessings now
For they’re long gone
I guess I just didn’t know how
I was all wrong
They knew better
Still you said forever, and ever
Who knew…
“That was for you Carmen!” Pink yells out before continuing her show.
Shane looks at Carmen’s table, only to find it empty. Figuring that she left, she goes to the bar and orders another beer. Turning around to go back to her table, Shane sees Carmen’s girlfriend storm out of the bathroom and exit the Planet. Shane runs into the bathroom and finds a crying Carmen.
“Carmen?” she said heading towards her. “What’s the matter?”
Carmen looks up at Shane revealing her busted lip and swollen eye.
“D..Did she…” Shane stammers to get her sentence out. “ She fucking hit you!?”
“Shane, believe me when I say I wish none of this would have ever happened. I’m so sorry.”
“I’m gonna kill that bitch!” Shane yells as she runs out of the bathroom and makes her way to the exit, but instead collides with Alice.
“Shane, I was looking all over for you, Where are you go….”
Shane cuts her off pointing to the bathroom and says, “Go help Carmen!”
Shane pushes her way pass Alice and runs outside. Spotting Sam in her car leaving the paring lot, Shane hops into her Jeep and tails her, making sure not to be seen. Clutching the steering wheel with one hand, she digs into her pocket, pulling out her phone and dials a number, waiting for the voice on the other end.
“Speak,” The voice on the other end demands.
“Jaycee, I need your help with something. You think you can pull a job tonight?”
“Yeah I can do that. What did you have in mind?”
Shane sees Sam park her car and go inside her house. She drives a couple blocks down and parks.
“I’ll fill you in when you get here. How long will it take you to get to We.Ho?
“About ten minutes”
Shane gives her location to Jaycee and lights a cigarette, patiently waiting for her friend.
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I am Tee-Totally lovin’ this story. On to the next chapter! Yeeeeeeeeeeh!!
Kill da Muthafuka!! ahahha!!! Sorry… just had to add that! okay… now off to the next chapter.
Wow. T know its so wrong to hit but does doing the same thing help. Not really. It has got to stop,so maybe a little whoop a$$ will. thanks
ooooooohhhhhhh…….. some one going to get their butt kicked……. update soon
oo am i first? i hope so!! i love ya!!!
wow, can’t wait for the next update. Sam deserves what’s coming to her. Post Soon!
great update!!!