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Unforgivable Chapter 6
“Why did you do it Carm? Why did you leave me at the alter standing there like a fucking idiot? I was so ready to marry you. All my thoughts, doubts, and insecurities- they flew right out the window before I walked down that isle. I knew you had to be different from everyone else, but I found out the hard way- nothing is what it seems. So tell me. Tell me right now. I want to fucking know why you left me at the alter for some other woman.”
Carmen stays silent, tears rolling down her face, not knowing how to begin. The silence pisses Shane off so she heads towards the door and says,” You know what? I should have left your little girlfriend alone so she could slap you around some more, because I’d like nothing more than to strangle the dog shit out of you right now.”
Outside Kit’s Office:
“I’m the Art Dean of a university,” Bette states proudly.
“Wow, that’s pretty awesome. I may not look it, but I’m really into art. I do a little ceramics.”
“Really? What type of ceramics do you do?”
“A little bit of everything. I have a habit of staying outside of the “norm.” I don’t focus on…” Jaycee stops short when she sees Shane storm out of the office with a pissed look on her face. “Umm… I’m going to have to finish this conversation with you guys later, hopefully.” Jaycee grabs two twenties and throws them on the table and motioning towards Shane. “Bye Alice, Bette, Jenny.”
“Hey Shane… Shane!” Jaycee yelled, running to catch up to Shane. “ what happened? Is she pissed about the whole Sam thing or something?”
“No. man,” Shane answers, stopping in front of her jeep and turning towards Jaycee. “ She barely even said anything. She just sat there silent after I asked her why the hell she left me at the alter, for some other woman, so I left.”
“Maybe you should listen to her side; maybe she has a good reason.”
“I tried and it pisses me off too much just thinking about it.”
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I foresee trouble coming
***MoosE*** – first off let me just say that I FREAKIN’ LOVE THIS STORY. CAN’T WAIT FOR MORE. and as soon as i get the chance, i will post the story on the other site. I’m still trying to get over the damn flu. so until then, i guess i’ll have to wait to post chapter 7 on here until the other site catches up.. hee hee! we’ll see! thanks for the heads up! thanks for the great update! PPVS!