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Unforgivable- Chapter 7
“Look what you just fucking did, god damnit! Now I need to go change my clothes. I sure as hell don’t want to be covered in your pre digested food and stomach acid any longer, so I’m going to wrap this up.” She pulls off both her shirts, revealing more tattoos covering most of her torso, as she puts her shirts in her duffle bag, left wearing a black sports bra. She returns with a can of gasoline and opens it.
“What are you going to do with that?
Jaycee doesn’t answer as she walks over to Sam, emptying the whole can on her. She takes a few steps back and lights up a cigarette, taking a deep breath.
“Any last words Sammie?”
“Yeah, fuck you!” Sam yells, getting shocked by the collar, again.
Jaycee laughs to herself and takes one last breath of her cigarette then smiles at Sam. “No… fuck you.” She flicks her cigarette at Sam and watches her burst into flames. She stand and watches her squirm for a moment before grabbing all of her things, getting into her car and speeding off down the road.
“Oh my god Shane!” Carmen screams as she grabs hold of the arm of the couch with one hand and pulls Shane into a kiss with the other. “Oh god Shane, don’t stop, please don’t stop!”
Shane keeps pumping in and out of Carmen, going in and out and faster and harder until she feels her lover tighten around her fingers. She pulls out and Carmen pulls her into another kiss.
“Baby, I love you”
“I love you too, Carm.”
They lay there on the couch, fully naked, holding each other and breathing each other in until someone bursts through the door startling them. They both look up to see Jaycee leaning on the door and carrying a backpack full of clean clothes.
“Jesus Christ Jay, what the fuck are you doing?” Carmen yells
“Sorry to interrupt, but if anyone asks, I was here all day.”
“Okay, now turn around and stop staring at my tits you perve”
“Jesus Carmen, don’t act like I haven’t seen them before.”
“What!?” Shane blurts out surprised, a little louder than she intended
“Uh-oh… Carmen, you didn’t tell her?
“She didn’t tell me what?”
“Oh… well we got it on in the office after you left. That’s how I convinced her to come over here.”
“What the fuck!?”
“Dude, I’m just kidding, Jesus Shane, calm down. We did used to date in high school though, but it turned into a best friend kind of thing, that’s why she knows about what I do.”
“Why didn’t you tell me Carmen?” Shane asks surprised.
“I never got around to it. I barely found out you guys knew each other today and I didn’t have a chance because I came here to tell you what happened and then I got a little preoccupied.” Carmen says the last part giving Shane a seductive smile and Shane pulls her into a kiss.
“Yeah anyways,” Jaycee interrupts. “You guys can finish screwing each others brains out later, but right now, I really, really need a drink. Would you guys care to join me at the Planet?
“Yeah, sure.” They both respond.
“Okay, umm, you mind if I use your shower first? I don’t want to go to the Planet covered in Vomit.”
“Vomit!?” Carmen asks bewildered. “How did you get covered in vomit?”
“It’s a long story, but I’ll tell you guys later if you’d like, I just really need to get smashed.
Jaycee gets in the shower and twenty minutes later, everyone is out and heading to the Planet.
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How does one have the stomach for this. I read because you do write it. but hope the whole story isn’t this cold blooded, thanks
I really loved this story in the beginning… I have to say though that excruciating and murdering Sam is something I just can’t understand. I don’t like it, sorry, and I don’t get why you would Sharmen relate to such an awful murder. Sorry!
i don’t get whats up with the violence.. this is way to extreme.. the torture is a bit to much.. I mean i can understand beaten the crap out the girl but the torture is way to much.
[walks in to the room whistling innocently] ……. [stops and looks around]…. [then shouts] I LIKED IT!!!! [and runs out]… YeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeH!