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Tina was supposed to come by shortly to pick up her daughter. Bette was to have her for the day while Tina was having a full day at work until the early evening. Tina, beside herself now, left her office and wandered the lot. She didn’t know what to think. It was all so unbelievable. It was coming time for her to go and see Bette and pick up Angelica. She couldn’tshe just couldn’t. She called Henry and asked him to do it, and told him she was held up at work. Henry wasn’t too fond of the idea, but he liked Bette even though she wouldn’t give him the chance or the light of day. He drove to Bette’s place. No one was there. The door locked, the lights out, the Saab gone. He called Tina. She didn’t think anything of it, but said she’d call Kit, because Bette was likely therethere wasn’t any other thought that came to mind at that point.
TINA- “Kit, it’s me, Tina. Hi. Listen, do you know where Bette is? I have to pick up Angelica but Henry’s gone over to the house and no one is there.”
KIT- (Her mind went blank. Something was wrongthis didn’t sound right.) “Tina, I don’t understand. What do you mean ‘pick up Angelica?’”
TINA- “Well, she’s with Bette. She was going to look after her until an hour ago.”
KIT- “TinaII don’t understand. I thought she already dropped her off.”
TINA- “What? What do you mean? Why?”
KIT- “Oh my God.”
TINA- “KitKit what’s going on?” (Her voice started to rise and chest tightened.)
KIT- “My God Tina, I don’t know. I don’t understand. Bette called me an hour ago. She said she was leaving for a business trip and she’d call me in a few days. Something came up, she said, at work and she had to go. I got the impression that she had dropped off Angelicawhen she called me she was already on the roadout of the city.”
TINA- “Nono.she didn’t drop her offsheKitoh my God Kitoh my Godwhere’s my baby? Where’s Angelica?” (Her voice had started to crack.)
KIT- “Tina it’s going to be ok. I’m going to go to her house.”
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you already know…i cried and i cried again….so heart breaking…post more, they have to talk and reconnect
This story was incredible (and that word doesn’t even suffice). It almost brought me to tears. If B&T’s actual journey even came close to the way this one is written, I would think IC was a genius.
Wonderful. Thanks very much for sharing this.
when i read the first half, my heart broke into a million little pieces and i couldn’t breath, i’m completely downtrodden now. and then i started reading the alice/shane/bette part and it was still heartbreaking, but also funny at times and it was kind of a tears and laughter moment for me. and then the tina/kit and bette/shane stuff, it’s so sad and yet it gives me hope… outstanding writing, thanks a lot! hope you can post more!
Happy Valentine, btw!!!! :)
This was so intense. Totally amazing…looking forward to future chapters.
This was just excellent! Bette’s desperation and Tina’s fury were completely believable. I can’t tell you how much I hate the ep12 spoilers, if only they would play out this way.
mnj33pp here, my mouth is still open and the tears are still there. That was absolutly amazing no not amazing, i truly can’t find a word to discribe what i’m feeling right now. The way you guys write, the feelings the emotions OMG, i’m speechless. Thank you, Thank you
That was AMAZING! Oh, please continue!
Absolutely awesome. You’ve covered episodes 1 thru 6 of season 4 now we’ll wait for the remaining episodes and the indescribable season finale.
Bettyvhall] That was terrific Some parts broke my heart, The whole story was so awesome. Add to this. thanks
TMerlin…You are truly are a magician as your namesake would imply. You have to send your incredible story to IC. The words, the dialogue, the emotions, everything about it was phenomenal. They could base all of S4 using this story as the first episode. You can tell how amazing it is b/c when I signed on there were about 850 viewings. I don’t know if you can continue but please try.
i can hardly type or see the keys–what a story its beautifully written==more please==
this was awesome!! i love all of the ‘psychobabble’ because this is a very deep and complex love….i love how in your story their friends actually lend words of wisdom and tina and bette actually listen to them. hey there’s a concept…please send a copy to IC. show her what real processing is.
holding my breath on the last page.great story
Well I’ve got to say that was the most amazing story! Thank you so much.
Wow, that was intense. You’re a great writer. Good job.
Amazing, absolutely astounding. I am left here at work in awe of your writing. You are truly talented. I hope that you will continue this story, please we would like to see them patch things up. Tina and Bette are such great soul mates, I am just relieved that a REAL TALENTED WRITER could bring the truth out in these characters. Seriously, I hope IC reads this and see what a real writer can do. I am so speechless, I will be thinking about your story for days.(I will probably stop watching the show just to read your beautifully written stories.)You have so much passion and depth in your writing, you moved us all. LOVED IT!!
Absolutely wonderful as usual. I sure hope there is another chapter on it’s way. I just have this need for closure with these two. One way or the other, since so far, the show hasn’t provided us anything in two years. Your depth is incredible with these two characters. Very nice job!
wow i’m in awe of your work right now. i’m so glad your making such sense of tibette. can i just how much i love the framily’s involvement and wish so much it could be like this on the show. love it.
Unbelievable and amazing!
This was heart wrenching, but very well written. Thank you for allowing us to read it all at once…it makes it so much more powerful. Thanks!!
Ooft…i read most of this story with my mouth hanging open in amazement! Amazing story!
and the winner is… that just blew my fuckin’ mind man!!
OUTSTANDING! Absolutely terrific.
GOD DAMN TMerlin this was fucking awesome!!! Do you have anymore pages up your sleeve at this point because I would gladly put the rest of my days activities on hold to read them. I luv how you had Shane talk to Bette because really at this point I think everyone wants to beat the shit out of Bette & Tina so they can wake up and see that they love each other.
heart wrenching…fuck we can only hope it turns out like this if those spoilers are right….
WOW that was fantastic.
OMFG, OMFG…if I were a writer I would have all these amazing words to put down in this comment box so that you would know what power you stories have. All I have to see is TMerlin and I’m salivating…the best thing other than the content is the length, you never leave us hanging..you give us the full meal deal and that means a lot to a reader. I swear I was holding my breath thru the entire 10pgs and that’s about the right length before I pass out…see I told you I was no writer..but I hope you get my point….Don’t know why this came up an anonymous…it’s me Honda90
as i’ve said on tibette.comyour an amazin writer Merlin. lets just hope ilene and co. portray this as good as you have.!
WOW this was fantastic you just blew my mind away with this its outstanding
Wow, that was so powerful TMerlin. What a perfect episode 1, season 4 that would make. It certainly would fill the drama quotient for a season. These two women are bound together by a strong love…now they just have to recognize it for themselves.
Its been a long time since I read a terrific history like this one. You certainly have skills as a writer……I hope you post soon.
Wow…That was an excellent story!! Damn, it made me semi-like Tina again. If the spoilers are true, this would be a great season opener!! Damn!
Very nice. I love how you ended it.
Absolutely awesome! I feel absolutely wrung out. Don’t know whether you plan to continue with this story, but it would be incredible if you could take us further and in a hopeful direction. Terrific.
TMerlin–I kept hitting next page but nothing was happening. Please tell us you are going to continue this one…damn…I could feel it all….thank you.
Great thanks for the hope.