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Vignettes: Chapter 13
After lunch at the Planet, the day lagged on and they broke apart for a few hours, taking some time to do whatever they wanted. Alice and Tina went shopping at some local farm markets while Shane and Dana went back to the house. Bette decided to take some alone time and borrowed Alices car to go for a drive. When she started out, she didnt have a destination. She simply drove through some of the places she remembered from the past. When she arrived in the neighborhood she and Tina once lived in together, she actually surprised herself. As she drove, she focused on the road, but her mind wandered through memories. It was as if something was guiding her along the way without her being aware of it.
She stopped the car across the street from the familiar house and she remained in the car for at least five minutes before opening the door. As her feet moved across the pavement, they dragged. No cars were in the driveway, and she stepped onto the porch, peering in through the front window. The house was empty of all furniture and people. Feeling a little bolder, Bette turned the ***** on the door, but it was locked. Instead, she took a seat on the steps as she had done so many times before. Closing her eyes, she was overcome with nostalgia.
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A moving truck sat in the driveway next to Bettes car which was stuffed with boxes and blankets. Inside the house, three women finished cleaning and searching for any last belongings that had been left behind. Dana and Alice didnt say much as they took one last walk through the house as it sat empty. As they moved from room to room, they held back the tears that kept welling up inside of them. They didnt want to make this harder for Bette, though, so when they stepped outside, they forced smiles on their faces. Bette was talking to the movers and watched them drive away with her entire house inside the truck before looking over towards her friends.
Hows it look in there? Bette asked.
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(67 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
I think its great! Please continue!
love it, pls do keep on writing. look forward to your next posting!
The problems with these vignettes is that they are not long enough, leaving readers feeling disappointed bec they have a little taste and want more. So keep feeding us please with longer version with faster updates!
Awesome as always. Thanks for the great chapter.
Excellent chapter. I love this format so much, the past vignette intespersed with the present,that I’ve come to look for it in other stories.
Thank you!
This is so intensely sad and passionate…so very well written…outstanding piece of work…bravo!
Dig up the box!!! I love this story..more please!
More!
oh my god you wrote that scene of goodbye so beautifully – it broke my heart.
Brilliant writing! You’ve captured the nostalgia perfectly! Please continue soon…….!
You are one hell of a writer fareast:)…..Great story, can’t get enough…Thanks:)
excellent chapter, it almost made me cry.please continue.
Love hearing about Bette’s memories. Excellent, as always! please continue and thanks so very much for writing.
Loved it, looking forward to the next one…
Execellent update as always. But in a way very sad. Bette filled with all these emotions and not letting go of them. Post soon
I thought your other story was good, but this is great.Keep it up