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Vignettes: Chapter 28
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Good because Im not finished yet. Bette started pacing again, her robe becoming loose and exposing some of her breast. She didnt care or didnt notice. This was no time to be modest, especially after spending the entire night licking each others naked bodies.
Tina, why is it that every time we see each other we end up in bed together?
Bette, I dont know. Tinas cheeks flushed again as she glanced at Bettes cleavage.
Me either, but its tiring. You never even called me after that week in Provincetown. I waited but no word from you. Bette sighed.
You never called me either! Tinas voice rose in an accusing tone. The deal that either one of us could call. I dont remember hearing anything from you. What was I supposed to think?
Maybe I didnt have a need to call. Bette replied cruelly.
Maybe I didnt either.
Both knew what they just said wasnt true, but they let the words slip out. Neither one had kept the promise they made to each other. After vowing to call the other if they thought they couldnt live without the other, neither picked up the phone. Both thought about it but something always stood in the way. Tina loved that week in Provincetown with Bette because it felt like when they first met. Everything was simple and sweet without any high expectations. When it was time to say goodbye, though, she didnt want to let go. But in her mind, letting go then would be easier than losing Bette all over again later on. Her pessimism sat inside of her ever since she had first been hurt by Bette and all her fears returned when they made that promise.
I think I should go. Tina stood, exposing her naked body while she picked up her clothes from all over the room. Bette didnt say anything to stop her. She simply watched Tina dress in silence.
Bye Bette. Tina opened the door.
Do I at least get to say goodbye to Dakota? Bette quietly asked, as if she was searching for anything to not let it end like this.
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Tina…if that ain’t an opening, I don’t know what is. Go for it! Sure, there might be loss, but think of the gain! Another great installment.
Come on, Tina. Let go of the past…you shouldn’t be harboring fears after all these years. Didn’t you learn anything about yourself while raising a child (alone) in Colorado? Where’s your confidence? Heck, where’s your spine? Go, Bette, leave her alone. She’s too stuck in the past to have any kind of progressive conversation. Great chapter!
Damn – love it! Go Bette! Great job again. Can’t wait for the next, you’re stories are always something worth reading!
as much as i would love to see them back together, i gotta kinda agree with Seven. the affair was how many years ago? time to either let go of the fear, or let go of Bette. one of the two…thanks for this. as always, awesome to read!
Make your mind up one way or the other Tina. Great chapter as usual Fareast.
This was a great chapter, but I’m not sure how much more heartbreak I can take, or that Bette and Tina can take. It’s time!!
You are killing me here. Great chapter!
Boy! You threw this together, from top to bottom, the action was tremendous. I loved the way you interpolate the past with the present! This was an action – packed episode – it read like drama raher than fiction!
Thank you! I love that they are finally starting to confront their past. Will they move forward together in their futures?
Only Fareast knows!!!!
Great chapter, but get these girls back where they belong & that is together
Come on Tina. let down your defenses and take another chance. Dakota’s already accepted Bette, don’t turn her away now!
Wow, Tina sure has become stubborn…….here’s hoping that they will realize before it is really too late:(…..
I can’t tell you how much i love this story, Thanks for another awesome update fareast:)
Have I told you yet that you’re brilliant?
It’s time for these two to confront the past once and for all so they can begin to contemplate their future! I’m an optimist I believe it could happen!
Hi! fareast WOW! Another Beautiful Amazing Story I agree with seven come on Tina the past it’s over they have Another time that you need to move forward Life is to Short be happy Please post soon.
Wonderesque! Is that a word? Hahaha! The conversations move fluidly, everything is in its place (and yet not), and the characterization is incredibly concise. You are a wonderful writer, a wonderful dramatist…I don’t know what else to say! I am definitely loving your Bette and Tina…and Shane’s trip with happiness. Shane deserves to be cut some slack from the dark, brooding person she’s being portrayed as on the show. Truly, you are what fan fiction IS –> giving us what the show could not, and more. Kudos!
Wow, Tina had a daughter. They are so close I love this Bette as she doesn’t jump to conclusions. We any get so many chances in this life they have got to jump on one of these soon. OK I love this story you really got me going can you tell???Thanks
Tina girl…you have to make up your mind wether or not you want Bette in your life or not. Please let her in and ask her to come back to the room. Great update fareast – you are soo good at this. Post soon
Darn it, these two need to set their pride aside. I think Bette is willing to do that. Tina on the other hand needs to grow up.
Come on Tina, you have got to move forward…leave the past behind and look to the future with Bette i hope..
Thank you.
Oh my god, please post soon!!! come on tina get with the program!
I wonder why forgiving those you love the most is so hard for some people.. Dakota loves Bette already.. And fate keeps bringing them back together – stubborn they are..