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Vignettes: Chapter 30
Bette slowly walked towards the women sitting outside and sighed to herself when she spotted Tina amongst them. This was exactly what she wanted to try to avoid. She felt bad for bringing her own problems to the table when this week was supposed to be about having fun and remembering happy memories for Shane and her new baby. Tina never looked up from her food as Bette neared the table.
Guys, just drop it, ok? Tina quickly whispered.
Why should we drop it? Were all adults here. Alice said.
Bette walked up behind Alice and found a chair, sitting down. Drop what?
Nothing. Tina replied glaring at the women at the table. She took a quick drink of coffee.
Well, its not really nothing. We were just talking about you actually. Shane said.
Me? I hope it wasnt anything too bad. Bette laughed.
I guess you could say we hadnt gotten to that part yet. Dana said.
Tina remained quiet, shocked at her friends casual attitude about the situation. Years before when Bette and Tina had a problem or a fight, they all acted like nothing was going on and avoided the situation as much as possible. But today, they were actually egging a discussion on… right in front of them! Tina couldnt find any words to fall out of her mouth, therefore letting them continue to talk to Bette.
Please go on and explain. Bette said.
I was explaining to Tina that you and her should get over your stubbornness and just give each other another chance, but she apparently disagreed. Alice explained.
And Tina was actually just getting ready to explain to us why you two shouldnt get together when you walked up. Shane said while Dana nodded in approval.
Bettes face flushed momentarily as she looked from the three women to Tina, somewhat confused. Since when did her friends talk so openly about their problems and relationship status? But since she figured she didnt have anything to lose and she wasnt getting any younger, she decided to go for it.
Tina? Id like to hear what you were going to say.
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(70 votes, average: 3.73 out of 5)
I have to tell you that you are THE ONE that I wait for to post and THE ONE that I look for in the list of new posts morning, noon and night, and THE ONE that I do a little happy dance about when I see that you have posted. You are incredible. I love your story, and I am have been having so much fun with your more frequent posts recently.
this story just keeps getting better & Better Please continue
wonderful – love how you are bringing it all together – Alice rocks…great job
that was great
super chapter – bringing the girls into the mix to get these two to tell each other the truth -very fine.
Oh the relief…I’ve been holding my breadth for 29 chapters…can’t wait for the next one…You have a big pink award on my computer screen
Awesome chapter.. this is amazing for them to say this out loud in front of the gang. Hurry back :)
Wonderful chapter. So glad Tina is finally dealing with the truth.
A beautiful story. I love your pace in drawing out the emotions of our much-followed protagonists.
I love how you are getting them there. The way the girls are is also too endearing thanks for the post I can’t tell you enough how much I love your writing
Wow! HonestT makes an appearance. Now, can Bette drop enough defenses so that the two of them might actually consider if their possibilities are possible?
Beautifully moving along. Such a great story.
truth telling – the path to happiness for B&T – well done — thanks
Fareast Fareast..I just love this story. This is simply wonderfull – Tina is finally opening up to the gang and Bette. Can´t wait for the next post. Keep up the good work.
let them get ther soon fareast, please. love you story, great as usual.
Well thank goodness for Alice! The truth so often sets us free…people need to realize that more often. I love how you are finally getting these two to talk to one another and face their feelings. I especially like how you are using their friends to push them along.
Thank god for Alice, finally Tina being honest with herself. Love the pace of this story.
Thank you.
best story I have read all weekend. I love how you are taking it slowly. Great job!
I love how their relationships have shifted – the other three have more power now. They actively participate in deciding what course their group will take. I’m glad they could honestly confront the two would-be lovers and aid in their reconciliation. This is good.
Thanks for posting another of your always satisfying chapters. I know you reach logical conclusions and natural stopping places, but I always want them to continue, your writing is that smooth, and the emotions so compelling. Thanks.
Can’t wait to see how Bette’s going to handle Tina’s honesty!!
A wonderful feast, fareast. I hope you continue. It’s wonderul that you’re writing these stories, about these women, with honesty. There’s so much to learn from what you write, the situations you let them go through. keep writing!
About bloody time!
Woo who for the ladies.
See, everything comes to those who wait.
Wonderful chapter. I am so happy that these characters have finally woken up the love between them. A love this strong and enduring cannot; will not be denied forever.
Awaiting your next chapter. Plase post soon.
The payoff has certainly been worth the wait.
Am interested as to how the truth will set them free.
As always Alice is there to poke and prod them in the right direction. Just in keeping with the TV version.
Thank you.
A fan.
not really sure how much more i can say when it comes to sharing my absolute adoration of your story. please continue and thanks.
YES!!! Just a little at a time. Dont rush. I love this story. Thry’re on there way to forever, I hope. Excellent update.
One step at a time – I love the pace of this story and I love your truthful Tina. Fabulous chapter! Thanks so very much for sharing your time and talent.
Maybe the time has come to get the two hard heads together again. thanks
what a beautiful story! it really lifted a weight off my heart too! i can just feel your writing, it’s so wonderful. i’m reading it again later today :)
I am on my knees, thanking God that Tina has finally stopped lying to herself. By the way, I think I might have missed it, but I was wonderfing how old Dakota is? Thanks!!
Thank God for friends who make us admit the truth to ourselves and others! This is excellent Far..i don’t know what else to say except please continue!