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    Vignettes: Chapter 45

    Story written on June 6, 2005 by fareast.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=54493
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    Author’s note:

    Thought since I had some extra time today I’d leave some personal notes to you as readers, just to give an extra thanks:

    hunty38 – thanks for the continuing encouragement!

    heartbreakershanesgirl – hopefully this will cure some of your impatience!

    CR00 – hopefully this chapter explains and clarifies Tina’s reaction to the house! Thanks for the support.

    skipton – Thanks for reading and commenting; I feel so unworthy to accept your encouragement because you are such a fab author!

    slacker – glad you like for it to be long and dragged out. I’ll see how much more I can tortue you!

    Hackgirl and cogent53 – no, I didn’t base that first paragraph off of High Art, but not that I think about it, it is similar. Thanks for reading!

    chasemenow – as always, grateful for your comments! Hope you had a good weekend.

    OCD – yes, we are getting closer… just a bit longer.

    ChakaSB – Hope this satisfies your craving.

    techgal – thanks for your honest criticism. Hopefully some resolution will come soon. I don’t want to rush anything with Bette and Tina, but I want them to discover what they truly want from each other. Stick with it, I think things will start to turn around here really very soon… I guarantee it… perhaps with a little action as well… :)

    margot – don’t get too antsy, I try to post often. If I don’t, you can always send me a private message on the boards and tell me to write more often!

    Just Once – How about I leave you five heart shaped cookies this time? ;) Enjoying the gorgeous weather?

    M99, Fa6Fa6, Trolle, moonshadow, shades, mc, Seattleone, rosie, lwordid, hunter_manila, mstx, jwet, robbeedee, shades, momo, Christy, TK, 24betteandtina, TK – thanks for your faithful support and comments! Hope you continue to enjoy the story.

    And on with the story…

    Bette and Alice arrived at the tennis match just in time for Danas game. Alice assumed her usual position down by the court and flipped on her sunglasses. Bette surveyed the crowd and shielded her eyes from the sun.

    Wheres your date? Bette asked.

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    6. ok so bette bought there old house. Now I get it, I though that what it might have been, but I didn’t know for sure. Thanks for the update, and leaving me a comment it makes me feel special. Ok I still want you to take your time, don’t rush them.

    8. SOLD! I love it! Who’s final buyer? I’m guessing Bette but one never knows with the way you magically weave the story. Don’t leave us guessing for too long please! You are just too good! Thanks!

    9. I so love this story. I have had such a rough couple of weeks that I am glad I finally caught up and again just love this story. It seems so appropriate that Alice would be the one to get Bette to think. Shane gets her to talk and hopefully Tina will get her to finally move. Thanks so much.

    10. “Go Alice, go Alice!”. Alice totally rocks in this installment. I love it.
      Just as at the start of season 2 Alice is the only one of the group able to talk to Bette. Hopefully Bette will walk down the road now that Alice has given her the map showing a route to happiness.
      I adore the way that you have totally captured each of these characters’ imperfections and short comings. They live and breath in this world.
      As for Tina and Shane, another brilliant union, as they investigate Bette’s purchase? Not so sure about that as you do like to add some dyke drama to these proceedings. Perhaps Bette is the guarantor for someone else or is she selling the house? I know that you will provide a very satisfactory resolution to these queries.
      Can’t wait for your next post.
      A loyal fan.

    14. this story has got to be one of my faves. so well-crafted and thought out. u capture the girls so well. thanks you for sharing this with us — & for us long as u r writing.. it’ll be our pleasure to read!

    18. There is a definite sense of place in your stories. Each time I resume reading the new chapter, its like I’m returning to a world that you have created where the characters have distinctive voices. There is a definite past that is encolsed within the present.
      I’m trying to say that the world you create seems real and unique. It’s unlike any other on this site. I would know, even without labels or preface, that I was reading YOUR story.
      Yes, I’m getting antsy but you just disregard that and keep on writing!Thank you for continuing your story.

    21. One of your best chapters yet -love your having Alice tell Bette some truth but I’m thinking Bette already knows this- can she let herself trust herself and Tina once again? Can’t wait to see how you write your story.

    22. i find myself being ridiculously redundant in the comments that i leave, but that is simply because each and every chapter is as good, if not better, than the one before. thanks for this and as usual, will be looking for more.

    24. Fareast – you have done it again – another amazing and brilliant chapter. I find myself getting so absorbed into your story telling. You really do a wonderful job here! Thank you so very much for writing and sharing.

      And how very kind of you…five heart shaped cookies for me? Really? I’m so touched… thanks a bunch. (you know that is my very favorite chapter to date!)

      And this weather! so beautiful and hope that it lasts this week and beyond! I even got to spend part of the weekend down on the Cape.

      Sunny days and clear skies to you!

    30. Far…I have been following this amazing story from the beginning! I think you have done a terrific job with the pacing….it has allowed us to be a part of B&T’s journey back to one another! Excellent!

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