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    Vignettes: Chapter 50

    Story written on June 30, 2005 by fareast.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55129
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    Getting settled

    Tina threw down the last box from the moving truck and sat down on top of it, wiping her arm on her forehead. The sweat fell from her face and plopped on the ground.

    “Mommy, that’s gross.” Dakota pointed to the pool of sweat on the ground at Tina’s feet.

    Tina laughed. “I’m hot, sweetie, aren’t you?” Tina turned to look at her daughter and saw that she was soaking wet. “Why are you all wet? And where’s your towel? You are dripping water all over the boxes and the floor.”

    “Aunt Alice threw me in the pool to cool me off.”

    “Oh did she?” Tina asked as she searched for a towel.

    “Yes, she did.” Alice said as she walked into the house. She handed a towel to Dakota and winked at her. “She was ready to faint. I got to her just in time before the heat overwhelmed her. I did what I had to and I threw her in.”

    Dakota smiled at Alice and nodded at her mother. “I almost didn’t make it.” Dakota said, wide eyed.

    “Right.” Tina replied smiling. “Maybe I should go for a quick dip before finishing the unpacking.”

    “Come on Mommy!” Dakota pulled on Tina’s arm.

    “Hold on, let me find my suit.”

    “Dana!” Alice yelled. “Tina wants to go for a swim. Can I get a little help out here.” Alice had a twinkle in her eye.

    “Hi.” Dana said as she entered the room. “What’s up?”

    “Swim time.” Alice grinned. “Tina’s looking for her suit.” She raised her eyebrow and Dana nodded.

    “I don’t think she’ll be needing one.” Dana said. She moved to one side of Tina while Alice moved to the other side. They quickly grabbed Tina and picked her up. Tina squealed and tried to kick, but Dana grabbed her legs. They carried her outside and threw her in the pool with Dakota laughing hysterically. Alice nodded to Dana and they grabbed Dakota and threw her in next to Tina.

    “Looks like two drowned rats in the pool!” Dana laughed.

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    1. This is one of my favorites. Please let it continue. There is so much left to write. They are just starting over here and the dynamics have changed so much. Please keep going..

    3. Oh please don’t mention stopping. This has been a perpetual favorite of mine and has never disappointed. You’ll find many volunteers to post for you if you have trouble! In any case, thank you for one of the best and unmatched storylines & the marvelous creativity you’ve woven into your chapters. I hope you decide to stretch it out longer. Thanks!

    7. Hey far I have read vignettes all the way up to hear and I’m on chapter 30 of sould harvest but so far no mention of dakota and how she was born and stuff, am I missing something or is it in SH and I have not gotten to it yet?? could you let me know, Thanks for this awesome story

    10. Fareast…hey! I love your writing! You have a real flair for realistic dialogue and for being “right on” with each character’s depiction. If you do end this story (I hope you don’t) I am going to beg you, if that is what it takes, to continue to write another…and another….and….
      Get it? Thanks for this chapter and I’m so sorry that your struggling with the format…I want to kick your Mac’s ass for making it so hard on you! (Kidding, gosh!)

    13. Always glad to read more of this.

      The main fanfiction page has a link for sending info to the coders…try that to see if they can help w/the formatting issues.

    14. Oh Fareast…don’t you know by now that it doesn’t matter if this story is formatted right…spaced right…your writing captivates us so much, that we don’t even notice. I too am sad that this story is ending. It has been a favorite of mine, as well. However, where this ends, I hope another begins. Thank you.

    17. Please don’t let an inanimate object win out over posting. We like your story regardless of how it comes across in format. Your story is sooooo much more than formatting. Please continue to let us into this wonderful world that you have created with Vignettes!

      Nicely done, the ‘soft and slow’ was simply devine.

    19. where have you been women. i have been waiting for this. please dont talk about ending it unless your going to write a sequel, because this story is wonderful. amazing chapter as per usual fareast.i’m lovin it.

    20. You are brilliant as always.

      I should tell you that when my girlfriend hears me let out a happy sound while sitting at the computer, she says “let me guess, Fareast posted?” And I turn to her with the biggest grin.

      Thank you :)

    23. This story has been incredible, I will be sad to see it end. You have done a marvelous job writing it…I’ve enjoyed the journey and can’t wait for the next installment.

    24. What a morning on the fanfics fareast, your beautiful, breathless story is such a favorite. And big chapters by JWET and Seahurst. Must be a holiday weekend.

    25. I concur with Christy’s comment – please continue the story. Or start a new one! Just keep writing … you write the characters very well.

    26. let me echo everyone else here and say this story is one of my favorites, format doesn’t matter, i was so excited to see it. but sad to hear that it’s ending… any chances for a sequel?

    29. i simply don’t accept just one more chapter. how’s that for a comment? if Tina wants Bette to crowd their lives, i think that it is only fair that you crowd this website with lots more posts. just a thought and Happy 4th!

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