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Vignettes: Chapter 54
Bette felt good around Dakota. She was able to let go of herself and be free. She was overwhelmed with love and concern. Bette wanted nothing more than to be in her life forever, watching her grow and protecting her as much as possible. She wanted to be there for her when she made mistakes and learned about life. She wanted to always hold her hand.
Dakota! Honey, come out by the pool and take a quick swim with me before we start dinner. Tina jumped into the pool and waited until she heard the quick patter of little bare feet on the tile inside.
Wait for me mommy! Dakota threw her towel down and jumped.
Dakota swam around, splashing Tina who continually threw her into the air.
Is Bette coming over for dinner? Dakota asked.
Yes. Is that ok?
Yay! I wish Bette could come over every night for dinner! Dakota threw her arms up into the air, throwing water all over Tina.
You little stinker! Tina splashed her back. Honey, theres something I want to tell you.
What?
Remember when I told you about me and Bette and how were in love? Dakota nodded. Well, remember when I told you that it was important? She nodded again. This is another important thing, ok?
Ok.
I asked Bette to move in with us and live with us. What do you think about that?
Really? Thats so cool! Is she taking the room next to mine? What about all my toys?
No, honey. She will share a room with me and sleep in my bed with me.
Are you getting married?
Tina paused for a moment. Her daughter didnt miss a beat and she sighed. No, were not getting married yet, but we still love each other very much.
Why wont you get married? Dont married people live together?
Not always. Sometimes people who love each other very much live together too. Is that ok?
Yes, but Id like it if you got married.
Dakota smiled.
Maybe someday. But for now, are you ok with Bette living with us? Tina was concerned.
Its awesome mom! Shes the greatest.
Tina breathed a sigh of relief as she saw the nonchalant attitude her daughter possessed. If only everyone had the eyes of a child.
Then lets get dinner started because shell be here soon!
Tina and Dakota dried off and headed into the house to start getting dinner ready in their bathing suits. Eventually Tina took over the kitchen while Dakota sat at the counter with her crayons and paper. She wouldnt let Tina see, but she said she was drawing a picture for Bette.
The doorbell rang and Dakota covered her drawing and ran for the door.
Bette! Dakota squealed as she threw her arms around Bette.
Hello to you too. Bette hugged her back then pried her arms off her. Whats for dinner?
Chicken on the grill and salad. Coconut sorbet for dessert. Dakota pulled her into the kitchen.
Bette moved over to Tina and kissed her while Dakota scrunched up her face and turned away. She was at the age where kissing was yucky.
Bette, I have a picture for you. I drew it myself.
An aspiring artist, huh? Maybe someday your work will be hanging in my gallery. Bette sat down and scooped up Dakota in her lap. She took the picture from her and studied it. Tina glanced over and noticed tears were forming in her eyes. Curious, she moved behind them to peek over her shoulder.
Tell me about this. Bette whispered to Dakota.
Thats me, thats mommy and thats you. And this is our house. Dakota pointed to the three of them scratched on the paper all inside the house together holding hands.
What are we doing in the house? Bette understood the meaning of the picture. She just wanted to hear Dakota explain what the drawing meant through her own eyes. She needed to hear it.
Tina squeezed Bettes shoulder and smiled softly.
Were all living together. Were a family.
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(54 votes, average: 3.78 out of 5)
This story is so great! I look forward to the continuation. I’m always so excited when I see a new chapter. Keep up the great work!
EXCELLENT!!! I LOVE IT Bette has waited a long time to her those words…Please continue…
Sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wonderful! “a family..” (sigh..) I like the wedding idea too :)
Dakota is so sweet,I love the this story.
will dakota ever call bette mommy?
Great another step on the way – it was waiting for. Adorable – Dakota is so sweet and Bette and Tina as so together, nice to read happy stuff.
Aww that was so sweet. I could feel the tears building up just reading that. I’m so happy they’re going to be a family. Great chapter :)
You do this so well, thanks for this story.
OK, that was a three Kleenex ending. *sniff, sniff* So innocently cute and sweet.
You are masterfully meldeding together small vignettes that are creating a larger and more lush picture. Beautiful.
You never let us down..
AWESOME.. loved the last line..
Wonderful.
Jwet writes all I want to say. A perfect chapter for a perfect story. Thank you
Wow… Dakota you’re a sweet lil girl and Fareast… your stories always awe me, thanks.
K
Well that was just perfect. Love it and can’t wait for more.
“We’re all living together. We’re a family” wow how long Bette has waited to hear those few sentences. Amazing you have brought me to tears and thanks for that.
Absolutely wonderful and AWESOME!!! I just think the world of your story. Keep’em coming.
awww that was so cute Dakota is the best…and she and Bette has ag reat connection..they are for sure a family..i love it.. please post soon thanks
What a great chapter. It got me all emotional also.
this is so sweet! i got a little teary and stuff. can’t wait for the next one!
OMGoodness that was amazing. I love you story so much! Woooooo!
Wonderful as always. I always miss your writing when you are gone. Thanks!
Far,
From the mouths of babes come the more open and honest as well as heartwarming statements.
And boy, this one sure was.
I am getting teary eyed about it right now.
Thank you for allowing me the chance to follow this wondrous tale. Every twist and turn has been its own adventure and your flair has made it truly worthwhile.
I salute you.
Your Loyal Fan.
PS – I, for one, hope that the trials and tribulations of moving in together with new jobs continue to inspire you to continue this drama. And of course, how are the rest of the gang surviving and reacquainting themselves with one another as well and Bette & Tina?
So cute Fareast…keep going. This is simply wonderful. Post soon